for Hawaii Night4/17/2012 c1 KimmieFern
I literally laughed out loud at the ending and I have not LOLed at something I read in a while. I love it love it love it!
I literally laughed out loud at the ending and I have not LOLed at something I read in a while. I love it love it love it!
4/17/2012 c1 
3TvFanatic97
My two favourite pairings! This was hilarious and sweet to see them open up, even if it was a result of the alcohol and stress from the case.
3TvFanatic97My two favourite pairings! This was hilarious and sweet to see them open up, even if it was a result of the alcohol and stress from the case.
4/17/2012 c1 2lissazara
Yay another Steve/Kono connection! If only they'd figure it out on the show! Loved it. Many thanks, lunch break sorted & back to work :(
2lissazaraYay another Steve/Kono connection! If only they'd figure it out on the show! Loved it. Many thanks, lunch break sorted & back to work :(
4/17/2012 c1 sphekie
Haha! Steve and Danny drunk! Luv Steve get drunk, he funny in here. This is funny, I like this!
Haha! Steve and Danny drunk! Luv Steve get drunk, he funny in here. This is funny, I like this!
4/16/2012 c1 Shani8
LOL! Guy talk is always fun (but girl talk is even better! ;)), and I totally loved the twist at the end. :)
Nice work!
~Shani :)
LOL! Guy talk is always fun (but girl talk is even better! ;)), and I totally loved the twist at the end. :)
Nice work!
~Shani :)