for This is the Real Me: The Philosopher's Stone5/13 c12 Hanu D
First of all, G4's last name is Batara.
You changed the POV from Hermione to third. LOL.
Cool story. Keep it up, girl! :)
First of all, G4's last name is Batara.
You changed the POV from Hermione to third. LOL.
Cool story. Keep it up, girl! :)
5/10 c4 Knighton
DO NOT switch tense in the middle of a story. This started out 3rd person, it should stay that way.
DO NOT switch tense in the middle of a story. This started out 3rd person, it should stay that way.
5/10 c12 
2AllWasWell07
SO glad there was an update. I hope the boys don't cause Hermione to get a library fee. She will be angry.
2AllWasWell07SO glad there was an update. I hope the boys don't cause Hermione to get a library fee. She will be angry.
3/18 c1 7LillianMarie2
i can't believe i'm asking this but what about Dudly? (sp?) wouldn't her disappearing just make him worse?
7LillianMarie2i can't believe i'm asking this but what about Dudly? (sp?) wouldn't her disappearing just make him worse?
3/14 c6 Guest
I added you on in Pottermore :) I'm in Slytherin too (to my total surprise ... rather flattered really) and am one of the Slytherin bankers so if you need ingredients for your brewing, please contact me: CatWalnut16884
- Amity
I added you on in Pottermore :) I'm in Slytherin too (to my total surprise ... rather flattered really) and am one of the Slytherin bankers so if you need ingredients for your brewing, please contact me: CatWalnut16884
- Amity
3/14 c11 Guest
pls update soon...pretty good work...
pls update soon...pretty good work...
3/14 c8 Guest
well written...
well written...
3/14 c7 Guest
excellent...one pointer...kids that age might not be that perceptive to read emotions from others easily...
excellent...one pointer...kids that age might not be that perceptive to read emotions from others easily...