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1SoulFire402
I know I've been posting a review every chapter but I really love this story. If this is the end of it, then I'm just ggoing to say you ended it perfectly. I really love this, it's well written, you stayed in character (with a bit of cussin') and over all I love the whole thing. Keep the good work
1SoulFire402I know I've been posting a review every chapter but I really love this story. If this is the end of it, then I'm just ggoing to say you ended it perfectly. I really love this, it's well written, you stayed in character (with a bit of cussin') and over all I love the whole thing. Keep the good work
1/17 c12 SoulFire402
I think I'm going to cry :'(
You put a really good job with the whole scene when they choped the last tree. When he argued with his mother, it really pulled me in. I really want to just give Once-ler a hug now :(
I think I'm going to cry :'(
You put a really good job with the whole scene when they choped the last tree. When he argued with his mother, it really pulled me in. I really want to just give Once-ler a hug now :(
1/16 c1 SoulFire402
This is really good. I can't wait to read the othre chapters. Once-ler smoking and cussin'? That got my attention. I love how you turn something from a child's movie to something teenagers should reads. Keep up the good work. :D
This is really good. I can't wait to read the othre chapters. Once-ler smoking and cussin'? That got my attention. I love how you turn something from a child's movie to something teenagers should reads. Keep up the good work. :D
11/21/2012 c18 1Whitwhit1893
My god...that was a heart breaking story. Is it completed?
You are very good at this, but, I would work on editing.
1Whitwhit1893My god...that was a heart breaking story. Is it completed?
You are very good at this, but, I would work on editing.
8/21/2012 c18 Anotheroncelut
This fanfic was amazing! it could've easily been a movie! Everything ties in together so well. seriously great job on this!
This fanfic was amazing! it could've easily been a movie! Everything ties in together so well. seriously great job on this!
5/16/2012 c18 73Took-Baggins
Wow, that much time has passed already? O_o
I really enjoyed your take on Once-ler talking with himself. Especially sicne all three versions were there participating (or, you know, just making noise. lol). But yeah, this was a great chapter.
73Took-BagginsWow, that much time has passed already? O_o
I really enjoyed your take on Once-ler talking with himself. Especially sicne all three versions were there participating (or, you know, just making noise. lol). But yeah, this was a great chapter.
5/12/2012 c16 73Took-Baggins
Somehow I skipped this chapter...
So it's out now. His reaction was just heartbreaking.
73Took-BagginsSomehow I skipped this chapter...
So it's out now. His reaction was just heartbreaking.
5/9/2012 c15 73Took-Baggins
Well at least when you end a chapter like the last one you update quickly! ^_^
So he was trying to kill himself? I took as he just didn't care whether he made it out. Either way, great chapter!
73Took-BagginsWell at least when you end a chapter like the last one you update quickly! ^_^
So he was trying to kill himself? I took as he just didn't care whether he made it out. Either way, great chapter!
5/9/2012 c15 50The Animanga Girl
I didn't know it was legal to burn your own house o_o
I'm expecting the next chapter with anxiety :)
50The Animanga GirlI didn't know it was legal to burn your own house o_o
I'm expecting the next chapter with anxiety :)
5/8/2012 c14 73Took-Baggins
This...
I've seen burning the factory used in one other fic, and they were both such amazing chapters. Oh my lord he is so magnificently insane here. I know that's probably a weird way to say it, but I can't think of any other way. He's cracked.
What a terrible (perfect) way to end a chapter! I hope the next one comes soon!
73Took-BagginsThis...
I've seen burning the factory used in one other fic, and they were both such amazing chapters. Oh my lord he is so magnificently insane here. I know that's probably a weird way to say it, but I can't think of any other way. He's cracked.
What a terrible (perfect) way to end a chapter! I hope the next one comes soon!