for Avatar Korra
81/21 c8 Guest
OMG!U gotta continue dude!I need to see your vision completed...your awsome
OMG!U gotta continue dude!I need to see your vision completed...your awsome
7/1/2012 c8 Guest
UPDATE ! plzzzzzzzzzzzz
UPDATE ! plzzzzzzzzzzzz
6/9/2012 c8 Be953
Why aren't you continuing your story?
Why aren't you continuing your story?
5/12/2012 c8 Jmclennan
Ah! This story is friggen amazing! I don't know how else to describe it, and frankly I'm kinda liking it better than the actual show :/
Anywaysssss keep em coming, I'm loving it :D
Ah! This story is friggen amazing! I don't know how else to describe it, and frankly I'm kinda liking it better than the actual show :/
Anywaysssss keep em coming, I'm loving it :D
5/3/2012 c2 aleja1
I'm sort of glad ht you didn't have them kiss already. I feel that it would have been to rushed. Great chaper!
I'm sort of glad ht you didn't have them kiss already. I feel that it would have been to rushed. Great chaper!
5/3/2012 c1 aleja1
I really like the way you write! You explain everything in good detail without going super overboard. Cool story! I really like this chapter!
I really like the way you write! You explain everything in good detail without going super overboard. Cool story! I really like this chapter!
5/1/2012 c8 NINJA
IT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!KEEP UPDATING EVERYDAY ALL THE TIME!
IT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!KEEP UPDATING EVERYDAY ALL THE TIME!
5/1/2012 c7 salapa
I love mako and his protective-ness of korra.. it's so cute =￣ω￣= well anyway, have I mentioned that I love your story? x)
I love mako and his protective-ness of korra.. it's so cute =￣ω￣= well anyway, have I mentioned that I love your story? x)
5/1/2012 c6 salapa
This chapter was a bit angsty at the end but I still loved it.. you need a little bit of pain to make a story good, right?
..I would've thought mako would be able to bend the lightning in that stick thing..or atleast redirect it... (like iroh first did in ATLA) maybe he didn't have enough .time to understand what was going on since it was a sneak attack? I don't know...
This chapter was a bit angsty at the end but I still loved it.. you need a little bit of pain to make a story good, right?
..I would've thought mako would be able to bend the lightning in that stick thing..or atleast redirect it... (like iroh first did in ATLA) maybe he didn't have enough .time to understand what was going on since it was a sneak attack? I don't know...
5/1/2012 c5 salapa
I didn't think this chapter was boring at all! I thought it was great! ∩_∩
I usually never review every chapter in a story (I hope you don't mind..) but I think your story deserves it :)
I didn't think this chapter was boring at all! I thought it was great! ∩_∩
I usually never review every chapter in a story (I hope you don't mind..) but I think your story deserves it :)
5/1/2012 c8 Kats02980416
Ive been reading your story and its awesome. I love your creative add-ins on your storytelling of Korra and her adventures as avatar. I love that Mako somewhat cares for Korra and their shared kiss in this chapter. Although, he's against her going, Korra's determined to face her fears. I love it, cant wait to see what will happen next.
Ive been reading your story and its awesome. I love your creative add-ins on your storytelling of Korra and her adventures as avatar. I love that Mako somewhat cares for Korra and their shared kiss in this chapter. Although, he's against her going, Korra's determined to face her fears. I love it, cant wait to see what will happen next.
5/1/2012 c4 salapa
;) I love makorra. And this whole story...
P.S. NEVER apologize for making something better :)
;) I love makorra. And this whole story...
P.S. NEVER apologize for making something better :)