for Solitude11/3/2012 c3 Tom
About your musings about broken arm - well I happened to have had a broken dominant arm. While normal day to day activities were difficult you are getting used to it, and beside writing I was independent enough to do the others things, also the sanitary ones. Cooking was troublesome but you do not need to prepare anything sophisticated. You are stretching a reality here.
About your musings about broken arm - well I happened to have had a broken dominant arm. While normal day to day activities were difficult you are getting used to it, and beside writing I was independent enough to do the others things, also the sanitary ones. Cooking was troublesome but you do not need to prepare anything sophisticated. You are stretching a reality here.
9/23/2012 c6 
22Anaika Skywalker
Just found your story. I really liked it. You've really captured Harm and Loren so well. I look forward to seeing what else you'll write.
22Anaika SkywalkerJust found your story. I really liked it. You've really captured Harm and Loren so well. I look forward to seeing what else you'll write.
4/26/2012 c6 1Lynnp
Wow, what a great story! I'm so glad I followed Trevor's recommendation! I do hope you write more fics, you've obviously got a great talent for it, and of course I do love Harm/Loren stories as well as Harm/Jen stories. Thanks again!
Lynn
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1LynnpWow, what a great story! I'm so glad I followed Trevor's recommendation! I do hope you write more fics, you've obviously got a great talent for it, and of course I do love Harm/Loren stories as well as Harm/Jen stories. Thanks again!
Lynn
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4/25/2012 c6 carolfd
Great story, Saissa. Heard about it from Vidz. Loved It!
Hope you continue writing, you show a knack for it.
Going to go read "Cold" now!
Great story, Saissa. Heard about it from Vidz. Loved It!
Hope you continue writing, you show a knack for it.
Going to go read "Cold" now!
4/22/2012 c6 Michi uk
I hope you can write a sequel cause there's so much potential to continue this story.
Loved your story.
I hope you can write a sequel cause there's so much potential to continue this story.
Loved your story.
4/22/2012 c6 209VisualIDentificationZeta
good chapter!
One thing though: Chegster would probably introduce himself as "Admiral Chegwidden of the US Navy's JAG Corps" instead with "My name is AJ Chegwidden. I am a Navy Lawyer and the US Navy JAG."
209VisualIDentificationZetagood chapter!
One thing though: Chegster would probably introduce himself as "Admiral Chegwidden of the US Navy's JAG Corps" instead with "My name is AJ Chegwidden. I am a Navy Lawyer and the US Navy JAG."
4/22/2012 c6 owl208
A wonderful ending! I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for anymore that you write in the future!
A wonderful ending! I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for anymore that you write in the future!
4/22/2012 c6 31byrhthelm
Well done you - your first fic up and done! As for Harm and Loren, bless 'em both, how difficult is it gpoin to be for them both adjust back to their pre-weekend personae?
31byrhthelmWell done you - your first fic up and done! As for Harm and Loren, bless 'em both, how difficult is it gpoin to be for them both adjust back to their pre-weekend personae?
4/21/2012 c5 owl208
Another great chapter! So they are more comfortable with each other-that was pretty inevitable, given the situation. You've done a fine job laying the groundwork for a romanitc relationship to develop! Now on to the rescue!
I'd really like to see your take Saissa on their relationship if you were to continue with a sequel. You write so well, I'd love to read that! *hint* *hint*
Another great chapter! So they are more comfortable with each other-that was pretty inevitable, given the situation. You've done a fine job laying the groundwork for a romanitc relationship to develop! Now on to the rescue!
I'd really like to see your take Saissa on their relationship if you were to continue with a sequel. You write so well, I'd love to read that! *hint* *hint*
4/21/2012 c5 209VisualIDentificationZeta
they've been found. :) But that snow shouldn't matter, since the guy took down the coordinates. What will happen next?
209VisualIDentificationZetathey've been found. :) But that snow shouldn't matter, since the guy took down the coordinates. What will happen next?
4/20/2012 c4 7jpstar57
Very nice chapter. You delve into their characters so well. Can't wait to see them grow closer.
7jpstar57Very nice chapter. You delve into their characters so well. Can't wait to see them grow closer.
4/20/2012 c4 owl208
Very good chapter. Harm/Loren are so awkward, its painful. I know you're going to eventually get them out of their funk, but it's hard to witness. Still, you can already see the relationship wheels turning. That was well done! I can't wait for your next chapter!
Very good chapter. Harm/Loren are so awkward, its painful. I know you're going to eventually get them out of their funk, but it's hard to witness. Still, you can already see the relationship wheels turning. That was well done! I can't wait for your next chapter!
4/20/2012 c4 209VisualIDentificationZeta
before I forget: was cap 3 re-uploaded? Because I received another alert for it.
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Anyway, good morning Loren. How did you sleep? How are you feeling
* * * HEhehe, very suave, Harm! :D
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Any other man, would not have just pulled her jeans or skirt up and pulled up the zipper, like he did
* * * Oh, Loren, you really have met only rotten apples, have you? Like that commodities trader.
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because once it starts melting, then we are going to be in trouble
* * * Ah, you're so wrong, Harm. If it melts enough, you can start walking out. :)
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At one point, she even told me NEVER and that there was no us, so after Paraguay when she didn't even say thank you for saving her life
* * * I think there's been some kind of mistake here. This fic's timeline was supposed to be AU S6 (Cold takes place in AU S7), but Paraguay was end of S9 and start of S10 (just after Loren's death on the show).
Otherwise great chapter!
209VisualIDentificationZetabefore I forget: was cap 3 re-uploaded? Because I received another alert for it.
x
Anyway, good morning Loren. How did you sleep? How are you feeling
* * * HEhehe, very suave, Harm! :D
x
Any other man, would not have just pulled her jeans or skirt up and pulled up the zipper, like he did
* * * Oh, Loren, you really have met only rotten apples, have you? Like that commodities trader.
x
because once it starts melting, then we are going to be in trouble
* * * Ah, you're so wrong, Harm. If it melts enough, you can start walking out. :)
x
At one point, she even told me NEVER and that there was no us, so after Paraguay when she didn't even say thank you for saving her life
* * * I think there's been some kind of mistake here. This fic's timeline was supposed to be AU S6 (Cold takes place in AU S7), but Paraguay was end of S9 and start of S10 (just after Loren's death on the show).
Otherwise great chapter!
4/19/2012 c3 Michi uk
So glad neither were injured to much in the crash, and Harm managed to find a shack so they had somewhere warm to stay until they are found, which i hope will be sooner than later,so Mac can get her brocken arm attended to. await your next installment.!
So glad neither were injured to much in the crash, and Harm managed to find a shack so they had somewhere warm to stay until they are found, which i hope will be sooner than later,so Mac can get her brocken arm attended to. await your next installment.!