for Hide and Seek5/28/2012 c1 
11demuredemeanor
Again, so necessary. And the minor fights are always the most frustrating, so this was very well done :)
11demuredemeanorAgain, so necessary. And the minor fights are always the most frustrating, so this was very well done :)
4/20/2012 c1 LoveJessieLou
This definitely wasn't what I was expecting. I'm kind of glad you chose to show some of the not so fluffy times in their relationship. It makes it seem real. I just love this 'verse you've created.
This definitely wasn't what I was expecting. I'm kind of glad you chose to show some of the not so fluffy times in their relationship. It makes it seem real. I just love this 'verse you've created.
4/20/2012 c1 40Mark C
I remember this well and can totally see Kate doing what she did. When Al woke up and asked Kate about Rick, you just had to feel sorry for all involved.
Loved seeing Al want to look for Rick right away and them going out to look. It wasn't surprising they found him at the Old Haunt.
I enjoyed the scene when they found Rick and Al did most of the talking. Kate's apology was good as well as Rick reassuring the girls that he was going nowhere and that the wedding was still on.
Well done.
40Mark CI remember this well and can totally see Kate doing what she did. When Al woke up and asked Kate about Rick, you just had to feel sorry for all involved.
Loved seeing Al want to look for Rick right away and them going out to look. It wasn't surprising they found him at the Old Haunt.
I enjoyed the scene when they found Rick and Al did most of the talking. Kate's apology was good as well as Rick reassuring the girls that he was going nowhere and that the wedding was still on.
Well done.
4/20/2012 c1 dopeysac
Adorable Al! I love that kid! Very cute and sweet chapter.
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Adorable Al! I love that kid! Very cute and sweet chapter.
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4/20/2012 c1 someheartslove
I love it how you have us this piece of the story.
Kate freaked out a bit, but it's all okay. And I love Al. In all situations, and in this too. SO adorable and innocent.
Great story! :)
I love it how you have us this piece of the story.
Kate freaked out a bit, but it's all okay. And I love Al. In all situations, and in this too. SO adorable and innocent.
Great story! :)
4/20/2012 c1 Deb838
Ahhh see... real Kate needs her own Al to sort her out and make her do what she needs to do!
Ahhh see... real Kate needs her own Al to sort her out and make her do what she needs to do!
4/19/2012 c1 lv2bnsb1
That was great! Harder to do everything when there is a child in a story. You can't just run out into the night, or have a loud fight, or date without planning sitters etc. You've always done such a marvelous job of filling in the details with these characters.
That was great! Harder to do everything when there is a child in a story. You can't just run out into the night, or have a loud fight, or date without planning sitters etc. You've always done such a marvelous job of filling in the details with these characters.
4/19/2012 c1 Fictional Mind
Awww this is beautiful. Just the right amount of tears and making up again :) I love it :)
Awww this is beautiful. Just the right amount of tears and making up again :) I love it :)