for Starlight6/1/2012 c4 
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TI love how we are slowly getting inside of Edward's head. I'm a little confused still, but it's a good confused. I can't wait for some straight forward answers. I loved this chapter overall. Update soon!
51h2a34TI love how we are slowly getting inside of Edward's head. I'm a little confused still, but it's a good confused. I can't wait for some straight forward answers. I loved this chapter overall. Update soon!
5/12/2012 c3 Hey
This story is pretty good so far. Please hurry up and finish the next chapter. I'm curious to find out what happens to Edward,
This story is pretty good so far. Please hurry up and finish the next chapter. I'm curious to find out what happens to Edward,
5/12/2012 c3 1h2a34
I was wondering what happened to you! This was good. I can't wait for more. Update soon.
I was wondering what happened to you! This was good. I can't wait for more. Update soon.
4/22/2012 c2 TheOneAndOnlyHBIC
Aw this was cute! Just next time keep in mind that Jasper should feel warm to Alice. Otherwise you did a pretty good job without a beta :) update soon because I can't wait 4 more.
Aw this was cute! Just next time keep in mind that Jasper should feel warm to Alice. Otherwise you did a pretty good job without a beta :) update soon because I can't wait 4 more.
4/21/2012 c2 1h2a34
This is really good. At first I was confused about who's POV it was, but i figured it out quickly. I'm glad that you are highlighting Alice and Edward's relationship. I feel like they have a really good one. Update soon!
This is really good. At first I was confused about who's POV it was, but i figured it out quickly. I'm glad that you are highlighting Alice and Edward's relationship. I feel like they have a really good one. Update soon!
4/20/2012 c1 1h2a34
This is really good. I like your writing style. I'm normally a wolf girl, but I like it. I can't wait to find out what has happened over the past ten years. I'm also wondering whose thought that was. Maybe Bella's or Nessie's? I'm not sure! I can't wait for the next update.
This is really good. I like your writing style. I'm normally a wolf girl, but I like it. I can't wait to find out what has happened over the past ten years. I'm also wondering whose thought that was. Maybe Bella's or Nessie's? I'm not sure! I can't wait for the next update.
4/19/2012 c1 TheOneAndOnlyHBIC
Oh? I see future potential! Lol, is Bella dead or something or did she just dump his for Jacob? I want more!
Oh? I see future potential! Lol, is Bella dead or something or did she just dump his for Jacob? I want more!