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2Naruisawesome
Omg Mai's married and has kids?! What the crap?! Although, she had a right to move on and everything! I mean, Naru just LEFT! But why did he? It seemed like he was gonna talk to her and maybe explain but those kids came up! *sigh*
Please update soon!
2NaruisawesomeOmg Mai's married and has kids?! What the crap?! Although, she had a right to move on and everything! I mean, Naru just LEFT! But why did he? It seemed like he was gonna talk to her and maybe explain but those kids came up! *sigh*
Please update soon!
7/29/2012 c3 vivian101
Please update soon. I like this story. I want to know what happens next.
Please update soon. I like this story. I want to know what happens next.
7/29/2012 c3 Guest
This is just so sad. I feel bad for naru but he is stupied. Before he left he should've told mai where and why he was going.
This is just so sad. I feel bad for naru but he is stupied. Before he left he should've told mai where and why he was going.
7/29/2012 c3 1celtyin
He can't really believe that 8 years with no contact is something ok! That's illogical! Ooooh I wonder what'll happen next!
1celtyinHe can't really believe that 8 years with no contact is something ok! That's illogical! Ooooh I wonder what'll happen next!
5/13/2012 c1 5charcol
Oh man, this is just what I've been looking for.
The writing is mature. Naru's confession is simple and seems realistic but perfect, like from a storybook. I couldn't tell you why, but reading this chapter made me really happy, which is why I'm compelled to write a review. Please keep writing more content. I look forward to reading your other fics.
5charcolOh man, this is just what I've been looking for.
The writing is mature. Naru's confession is simple and seems realistic but perfect, like from a storybook. I couldn't tell you why, but reading this chapter made me really happy, which is why I'm compelled to write a review. Please keep writing more content. I look forward to reading your other fics.
5/9/2012 c2 Sy
Please update
Please update
4/30/2012 c2 sy
please update
please update
4/28/2012 c2 Jenna
Write back soon! Really soon please! Poor Mai
Write back soon! Really soon please! Poor Mai
4/27/2012 c2 DzdollPlease
Hurry up! Can't wait for chapter 3 ! Or I'll haunt you!
Hurry up! Can't wait for chapter 3 ! Or I'll haunt you!
4/27/2012 c1 9ForestLights
lol I love when Naru asked if he had to explain further on how he liked Mai. that was funny It was good, If Naru really confessed to Mai i think he would act like that. you done great!
9ForestLightslol I love when Naru asked if he had to explain further on how he liked Mai. that was funny It was good, If Naru really confessed to Mai i think he would act like that. you done great!
4/27/2012 c2 Mimi
Yea yeah alan becker happy life alls well NOW lets get to the juicy part where naru comes back and all hell breaks loose...lolz sorry but romancy dramas especially the ones with jealousy and lust ...i SO look foward to the next chapter UPDATE soon PLEASE
Thanks for all the hardwork
Yea yeah alan becker happy life alls well NOW lets get to the juicy part where naru comes back and all hell breaks loose...lolz sorry but romancy dramas especially the ones with jealousy and lust ...i SO look foward to the next chapter UPDATE soon PLEASE
Thanks for all the hardwork
4/21/2012 c1 Moons-Chan
That last line is simply awesome, just about sum up that Naru's not good at expressing himself vocally!
That last line is simply awesome, just about sum up that Naru's not good at expressing himself vocally!
4/21/2012 c1 Dry
Please update soon really fast! It's a good story!
Please update soon really fast! It's a good story!