for Underneath It All4/7 c19 lilblue8
You are back! :)
Amazing chapter like always. I liked the end not cuz the obvious but because I didn't saw it coming and I love when writers do that.
I can feel drama coming up which it is exciting!
As always amazing!
X
You are back! :)
Amazing chapter like always. I liked the end not cuz the obvious but because I didn't saw it coming and I love when writers do that.
I can feel drama coming up which it is exciting!
As always amazing!
X
4/3 c19 jeane911
hahaha emily is so hillarious, waking naomi x sex, no actually it was hot but i laugh too, i had always hate tony so this is not changing here. By the way naomi sounds soo like me in the mornig, perfect me!
hahaha emily is so hillarious, waking naomi x sex, no actually it was hot but i laugh too, i had always hate tony so this is not changing here. By the way naomi sounds soo like me in the mornig, perfect me!
4/1 c19 
1imbornqueenofklutz
i dont know how many curse words i've said while reading Naomi's dream i thought it was real.
and omfg Tony is so annoying. -_-
1imbornqueenofklutzi dont know how many curse words i've said while reading Naomi's dream i thought it was real.
and omfg Tony is so annoying. -_-
3/30 c19 vero
What the hell is tony doing? He needs to back off.
Effy scares me. She's so freaky.
That nightmare was awful. I sure hope it won't become real.
That last part was amazing. Very sweet.
Excellent update.
Pms
What the hell is tony doing? He needs to back off.
Effy scares me. She's so freaky.
That nightmare was awful. I sure hope it won't become real.
That last part was amazing. Very sweet.
Excellent update.
Pms
3/29 c19 Tofu9162
Yes! I love Harry Potter references and similarities :D It was another good chapter and I was on edge most of the time...I don't trust Tony and I'm not sure what to make of Effy in this so far. I can't tell if she is trying to mess with Naomi to help Tony out or if she will help out the girls. At least Emily keeps telling him to back off...kind of. Can't wait to read more and I'm glad you had time to write!
Yes! I love Harry Potter references and similarities :D It was another good chapter and I was on edge most of the time...I don't trust Tony and I'm not sure what to make of Effy in this so far. I can't tell if she is trying to mess with Naomi to help Tony out or if she will help out the girls. At least Emily keeps telling him to back off...kind of. Can't wait to read more and I'm glad you had time to write!
3/29 c19 mardycure
no es bueno leer la ultima parte cuando acabas de terminar con el amor de tu vida y es tan parecido a lo que hacias con ella.
me encanto el capitulo, pero quisiera que cook hiciera alguna visita, seria muy interesante.
saludos
no es bueno leer la ultima parte cuando acabas de terminar con el amor de tu vida y es tan parecido a lo que hacias con ella.
me encanto el capitulo, pero quisiera que cook hiciera alguna visita, seria muy interesante.
saludos
3/28 c19 Guest
Glad to have you back. I've been missing this story. I don't trust Tony for one second!
Glad to have you back. I've been missing this story. I don't trust Tony for one second!
3/28 c19 Guest
I HATE TONY! please make him go away
I HATE TONY! please make him go away
3/28 c19 R3dN0te
Ok tony is annoying. Can't you just get rid of him. His too cocky and arrogant to my taste.
Thumbs up for Emily for taking charge to have sex with Naomi! You are also the top one of the relationship Emily!
Ok tony is annoying. Can't you just get rid of him. His too cocky and arrogant to my taste.
Thumbs up for Emily for taking charge to have sex with Naomi! You are also the top one of the relationship Emily!
3/28 c19 Guest
amazing :D i love it...hahah :)
amazing :D i love it...hahah :)
3/28 c19 5Michelle1017
Another great chapter, loved it as usual.
Poor Naomi with her dream, I knew she would be dreaming because Emily wouldn't be so cruel to her.
They are such a cute couple and loved the ending where Emily woke Naomi up like that and they had a chance for some time together.
Looking forward to more :-)
5Michelle1017Another great chapter, loved it as usual.
Poor Naomi with her dream, I knew she would be dreaming because Emily wouldn't be so cruel to her.
They are such a cute couple and loved the ending where Emily woke Naomi up like that and they had a chance for some time together.
Looking forward to more :-)
3/28 c19 anon
I'm so glad you're back! As always the story's good. Although i thought things went a bit too slow for this chapter. You're still great. Do update soon! :)
I'm so glad you're back! As always the story's good. Although i thought things went a bit too slow for this chapter. You're still great. Do update soon! :)