4/29 c5 lavender spring
L and Hikari are interesting to read together : )

Also like how her and Raito are kind of competitive about the Death Note too. It seems like he is using her, but still... I would hope that he feels some kind of friendship towards her : )

11/15/2012 c1 16Ruin Takada
xfang-girlx,

What makes you think that Light's original name is Raito? Seriously? Is it because that's how it's written in katakana, a kana alphabet reserved for FOREIGN loan words and as a pronunciation guide for English-illiterate Japanese?

If you don't believe me, I actually have very good evidence: I have a copy of Death Note volume 13 in the original Japanese, from Japan, and with no translators having touched it. In it, it not only has the names of the character in the Japanese readings, but in an English reading as well, how the Japanese writers who put it together think that they would be spelt in English (that writer being Ohba himself). Examples of names, untouched by Americans, are 'Davit Hoope' (who you know as 'David Hoope'), 'John Matckenraw' ('John McEnroe') and 'Rodd Los' ('Rod Ross').

After all that, do you know how Light's name is written, taking in account all I've told you? It's 'Light Yagami'. You see, there's a reason Death Note translator Pookie Rolf called him Light, and it's because Ohba said so. 'Raito' was never, has never, and will never be his name. Ever.

If you don't believe me, still, I'm going to put up a picture on my LJ journal soon, and you can see that evidence for yourself.

Thanks,
Ruin Takada XXX

8/1/2012 c1 SoraForever
'The Death Note will be rendered useless if the victim's name is misspelled four times.'

Hey, you remembered the rule that everyone forgets! Congratz! This seems like a cool story, I really do want to learn more about Hikari.

7/7/2012 c11 4sky of c-o-l-o-r-s
Wow, when you had Hikari get the shinigami eyes for Raito and killed L, I was just going to quit reading the story since L is my favorite character from Death Note. I really love the ending though, I had a feeling she was going to kill Raito. Great job with the story and I'm sad that Ankh had to go.

7/7/2012 c11 8Irah
I'm not going to think the worst I refuse to believe that ankh is gone lol he just playing around with Hikari yup I'm going to believ that lol

this chapter had me so on edge that I got weird stares at the mall lol but man awesome chapter so happy there's a sequel because I didn't want it to end just yet, you broke me heart last chapter when you wrote this was the final one lol

Living together with Raito...hmmm I think she'll lose her mind :O but I will see when you write the sequel

*squeals* ohhhh I can't wait for it! XD

7/4/2012 c10 2xxichininxnioitexsonoxamexx
...YOU KILLED L D: T_T Oh well. HE LIVES ON IN MY HEART! Wait wait wait wait, big packages in small sizes...I remember you saying that you would use that when I said it! HAH! This chapter was funny and sad at the same time...
And as for the sequel..ahem
This story I like it...
ANOTHER.
That answers the question.

6/29/2012 c10 8Hadley-sensei
Oh my...
This story... This story is... Amazing!
I stumbled across it to sooth over a lengthy bought of boredom, but became completely engrossed!
Absolutely loved it, and I sincerely hope you do create a sequel. I honestly can't get enough!

Hadley-sensei