for Out Of Their Hands5/24/2012 c11 
14alwayssmilingsam
That was quite simply brilliant - oh the content was dark and ugly but you handled it so well - just enough to know what was going on and feel Helen's emotional pain but not so much that it was graphic and off putting. Oh and poor poor Nikola knowing what was about to happen and being helpless to do anything about it. Easily one of the best pieces of writing you have done!
14alwayssmilingsamThat was quite simply brilliant - oh the content was dark and ugly but you handled it so well - just enough to know what was going on and feel Helen's emotional pain but not so much that it was graphic and off putting. Oh and poor poor Nikola knowing what was about to happen and being helpless to do anything about it. Easily one of the best pieces of writing you have done!
5/24/2012 c11 76chartreuseian
*grumble grumble* Hurry up and post the next chapter so I can forget about this one...
76chartreuseian*grumble grumble* Hurry up and post the next chapter so I can forget about this one...
5/24/2012 c11 7agrainne24
I know you don't believe me but I love this story! You had me hooked the first time you mentioned the idea to me and I'm still hooked now! What a story:) I know I'm repeating myself but I HATE JOHN! But I can't help wanting to know what dastardly deed he'll do next! This means now that not only does he possess her physically, he now owns her emotionally! Oh he's good very very good! She'll find it so hard to come back from this!
I LOVED THIS! MOOOOORE:) Thanks!
7agrainne24I know you don't believe me but I love this story! You had me hooked the first time you mentioned the idea to me and I'm still hooked now! What a story:) I know I'm repeating myself but I HATE JOHN! But I can't help wanting to know what dastardly deed he'll do next! This means now that not only does he possess her physically, he now owns her emotionally! Oh he's good very very good! She'll find it so hard to come back from this!
I LOVED THIS! MOOOOORE:) Thanks!
5/24/2012 c11 9Dobby-the-HAP
Poor Nikola, just want to give him a cuddle as John cheats when he fights. speaking of which is anyone going to kill that god damn monster? lol
9Dobby-the-HAPPoor Nikola, just want to give him a cuddle as John cheats when he fights. speaking of which is anyone going to kill that god damn monster? lol
5/22/2012 c10 14alwayssmilingsam
She is meant to be with Nikola!
Your evil John is truly sinking to new depths - looking forward to happy times.
14alwayssmilingsamShe is meant to be with Nikola!
Your evil John is truly sinking to new depths - looking forward to happy times.
5/21/2012 c10 1insufferablyteslen
What was she meant to do? - Um... tell John to go teleport into solid rock, of course! :)
1insufferablyteslenWhat was she meant to do? - Um... tell John to go teleport into solid rock, of course! :)
5/21/2012 c10 7agrainne24
I repeat very loudly I HATE JOHN! How can he be so cruel! ugh he has to go and soon! Is it a bit mad that I get wrapped up in this story again even though I've read it already to beta?
Just shows how much love I have for this story and your writing! Keep it up I will always want mooooooore:) xxx
7agrainne24I repeat very loudly I HATE JOHN! How can he be so cruel! ugh he has to go and soon! Is it a bit mad that I get wrapped up in this story again even though I've read it already to beta?
Just shows how much love I have for this story and your writing! Keep it up I will always want mooooooore:) xxx
5/21/2012 c10 9Dobby-the-HAP
i hate John even more. i hope Nikola eventually rips him to bits
Also i'm so excited about the Olympic one-shot relay, trying to come up with ideas for them all just so i'm prepared for which ever one i get given lol
9Dobby-the-HAPi hate John even more. i hope Nikola eventually rips him to bits
Also i'm so excited about the Olympic one-shot relay, trying to come up with ideas for them all just so i'm prepared for which ever one i get given lol
5/18/2012 c7 Dobby-the-HAP
Poor Helen and Nikola. If John hadn't barged in im sure James would have been kind enough to keep the secret
Poor Helen and Nikola. If John hadn't barged in im sure James would have been kind enough to keep the secret
5/18/2012 c6 Dobby-the-HAP
i hate john and his plotting. i hope Nikola comes back and kills him if he plans on harming her
i hate john and his plotting. i hope Nikola comes back and kills him if he plans on harming her
5/18/2012 c5 Dobby-the-HAP
At least Helen is ok and i liked James in this one. caring and know all lol
At least Helen is ok and i liked James in this one. caring and know all lol