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11Lightning-AND'Death
Oh. My gosh. Thalia!
The chapter is amazing, just amazing. I'm in utter shock at how well the writing is and the cliff hanger of course,
11Lightning-AND'DeathOh. My gosh. Thalia!
The chapter is amazing, just amazing. I'm in utter shock at how well the writing is and the cliff hanger of course,
9/9/2012 c10 Eva3131
Plz plz PlEASE up date !
Plz plz PlEASE up date !
9/8/2012 c10 Guest
AHH I am SOOO stupid! I'm so sorry FinnickOdair-Will_Live-Forever! :( I am such a blabbermouth, saying things before I fully understand the story . Again, I'm utterly sorry and regret my comment. OF COURSE that's why NONE of the half-bloods could use their powers! So stupid of me .
AHH I am SOOO stupid! I'm so sorry FinnickOdair-Will_Live-Forever! :( I am such a blabbermouth, saying things before I fully understand the story . Again, I'm utterly sorry and regret my comment. OF COURSE that's why NONE of the half-bloods could use their powers! So stupid of me .
9/8/2012 c9 Guest
This story was really good. I hope you become an author some day!
But I just have a few questions: How could they have been caught when the two were at the Hill? No mortal or monster could have gotten through unless given permission..Had Percy step out of the boundary?And why won't Percy used his powers? How about the charm-voice of the Aphrodite Cabin or at least Demeter's cabin's ability grow plants? Sure, Chiron said not to hurt mortals, but I think he also said unless it was necessary? Okay, maybe Miss Doe could see through the the Mist, but what about those OTHER mortals? People who can see through the Mist are very rare, and I don't see how they could be able to make facilities that would stop Nico's powers, or cut off IM-ing when mortals don't even KNOW that the Greek Gods and practically everything else about Greek Myth is true?
It just seems disappointing, because how can they not use their powers? BUT, in contrast to these complaints of mine, this would be one of the books I would get hooked up on reading non-stop until I devour them all (Like now). I really, really like your story, I just had complaints.
This story was really good. I hope you become an author some day!
But I just have a few questions: How could they have been caught when the two were at the Hill? No mortal or monster could have gotten through unless given permission..Had Percy step out of the boundary?And why won't Percy used his powers? How about the charm-voice of the Aphrodite Cabin or at least Demeter's cabin's ability grow plants? Sure, Chiron said not to hurt mortals, but I think he also said unless it was necessary? Okay, maybe Miss Doe could see through the the Mist, but what about those OTHER mortals? People who can see through the Mist are very rare, and I don't see how they could be able to make facilities that would stop Nico's powers, or cut off IM-ing when mortals don't even KNOW that the Greek Gods and practically everything else about Greek Myth is true?
It just seems disappointing, because how can they not use their powers? BUT, in contrast to these complaints of mine, this would be one of the books I would get hooked up on reading non-stop until I devour them all (Like now). I really, really like your story, I just had complaints.
7/10/2012 c9 1Tenebrae Erebus
Interesting... I LOVE IT! You gave an amazing plot twist and definately made it even more awesome than it already was!
1Tenebrae ErebusInteresting... I LOVE IT! You gave an amazing plot twist and definately made it even more awesome than it already was!
7/10/2012 c9 11Lightning-AND'Death
.EPIC! I loved it! Its AWESOME!
And WOAH. Did not see that coming. Gaia was Ms. Doe. That was AMAZING!:D
Keep up the AWESOME work And I will be waiting for your next chapter! Cant wait!
11Lightning-AND'Death.EPIC! I loved it! Its AWESOME!
And WOAH. Did not see that coming. Gaia was Ms. Doe. That was AMAZING!:D
Keep up the AWESOME work And I will be waiting for your next chapter! Cant wait!