for That Strictly Professional Relationship3/5 c2 
1Myriad of Pixels
Hmm... looks pretty good, and again, well-written. (All your stuff is, really. :) )
1Myriad of PixelsHmm... looks pretty good, and again, well-written. (All your stuff is, really. :) )
5/6/2012 c2 10Reese S. Quill
This /was/ a little angsty, but not the kind I didn't like (which is when the character is beating himself up, or a normally cheerful person is all gloomy). It's very in character, and fast-paced. I like it how it switched from Brynn to Hanso throughout the story; and instead of it being about mushy stuff, it's about loving your job and stuff.
10Reese S. QuillThis /was/ a little angsty, but not the kind I didn't like (which is when the character is beating himself up, or a normally cheerful person is all gloomy). It's very in character, and fast-paced. I like it how it switched from Brynn to Hanso throughout the story; and instead of it being about mushy stuff, it's about loving your job and stuff.
5/6/2012 c2 4Whateva876
That was better than anything I could've written. xD
Aw. This is a little depressing.
Mootixs are adorable and probably annoying at the same time. Exactly like Hanso himself. XD
4Whateva876That was better than anything I could've written. xD
Aw. This is a little depressing.
Mootixs are adorable and probably annoying at the same time. Exactly like Hanso himself. XD
5/6/2012 c2 23AmethystWren
Honestly, you're giving yourself a hard time over something that was actually really good! Something doesn't have to be really long to make it good, and this was great!
It was cool how, with the theme of 'love', you made it all about Hanso loved his job. Not lots of kissy romance. It worked well :)
23AmethystWrenHonestly, you're giving yourself a hard time over something that was actually really good! Something doesn't have to be really long to make it good, and this was great!
It was cool how, with the theme of 'love', you made it all about Hanso loved his job. Not lots of kissy romance. It worked well :)
4/24/2012 c1 10Mellifluousness
Hey, another story by you! What a surprise, and a very nice one at that. I have next to no idea about Neopets beyond the fact that you go on the website and adopt a weird creature and feed it and things. I never got very far on it. All the same, this seems quite good. I like. ;)
Keep writing!
10MellifluousnessHey, another story by you! What a surprise, and a very nice one at that. I have next to no idea about Neopets beyond the fact that you go on the website and adopt a weird creature and feed it and things. I never got very far on it. All the same, this seems quite good. I like. ;)
Keep writing!
4/23/2012 c1 10Reese S. Quill
A Brynnso story, huh? :D
I'm pretty sure those two have more stories in this archive than any other Neopian couple /combined/. Justified, I guess; TNT doesn't give us many couples. :P Anyway, I like it so far, though it's short (for now)-but I'd rather have short, fascinating, and brilliant (like yours was) than something long and droning.
Update soon.
10Reese S. QuillA Brynnso story, huh? :D
I'm pretty sure those two have more stories in this archive than any other Neopian couple /combined/. Justified, I guess; TNT doesn't give us many couples. :P Anyway, I like it so far, though it's short (for now)-but I'd rather have short, fascinating, and brilliant (like yours was) than something long and droning.
Update soon.
4/22/2012 c1 4Whateva876
Yay. Another B&H (Woot. Came up with an abbreviation. :D But it sounds familiar. O_o) story! :D
This is epic. :)
Desiree seems annoying to me. It's like Alison annoys Popgum. o_o
Don't you know that windows never work? But cheaters always prosper. XD
4Whateva876Yay. Another B&H (Woot. Came up with an abbreviation. :D But it sounds familiar. O_o) story! :D
This is epic. :)
Desiree seems annoying to me. It's like Alison annoys Popgum. o_o
Don't you know that windows never work? But cheaters always prosper. XD