for Safety In Your Arms5/6/2012 c2 
50Sum1cooler
Wow. :( Carlos. :(. I am so glad that you have a friend on the world :). Everyone needs one an thank god you have Logan whom is the perfect friend.
I'm not a fan of Spanish (or any other language in an English story) because you can write it in English but write that they are speaking in Spanish. It's not choppy writing per se but to stop and translate ruins the flow of writing. But that is my opinion lol. Sorry.
But the chapter is nice and cute. I love that Logan is going to do what he can to save Carlos although lying to his parent, :(. That is not going to end well but hopefully Logan will think of something.
I am enjoying this. :). I can't wait for cargan and the reason why Logan is helping Carlos so much :).
50Sum1coolerWow. :( Carlos. :(. I am so glad that you have a friend on the world :). Everyone needs one an thank god you have Logan whom is the perfect friend.
I'm not a fan of Spanish (or any other language in an English story) because you can write it in English but write that they are speaking in Spanish. It's not choppy writing per se but to stop and translate ruins the flow of writing. But that is my opinion lol. Sorry.
But the chapter is nice and cute. I love that Logan is going to do what he can to save Carlos although lying to his parent, :(. That is not going to end well but hopefully Logan will think of something.
I am enjoying this. :). I can't wait for cargan and the reason why Logan is helping Carlos so much :).
5/5/2012 c2 6cookielover101
Dude... That dream scene thing was just so beautiful and magical and I absolutely loved every single part of it. Amazing.
And the rest of the chapter was equally as awesome. Logan was so sweet. I feel so bad for Carlos though. Poor baby.
Love this story; update as soon as you can!
6cookielover101Dude... That dream scene thing was just so beautiful and magical and I absolutely loved every single part of it. Amazing.
And the rest of the chapter was equally as awesome. Logan was so sweet. I feel so bad for Carlos though. Poor baby.
Love this story; update as soon as you can!
5/5/2012 c1 cookielover101
*curls fists* Kendall... I am going to say this once and once only: NEVER touch MY Carlos again; in fact, don't even look at him. Get it? Got it? Good.
Yay Logan comes to the rescue! And he waited in the hospital for loke eight hours! Aww! Who ever said chivalry's dead?
Really enjoying this story so far!
*curls fists* Kendall... I am going to say this once and once only: NEVER touch MY Carlos again; in fact, don't even look at him. Get it? Got it? Good.
Yay Logan comes to the rescue! And he waited in the hospital for loke eight hours! Aww! Who ever said chivalry's dead?
Really enjoying this story so far!
5/5/2012 c2 brittney
awwww this was hendorable and penatastic! logan is such a sweety! paying for carlos' surgery and being so sweet to him. hahaha i know a way carlos can pay him back with no money necessary hehe! xD. ha looks like my spanish class came in handy! i knew most of the words and could just make out what it means so yay! i feel so bad for carlos and i cant wait for logan and carlos to date. great job
awwww this was hendorable and penatastic! logan is such a sweety! paying for carlos' surgery and being so sweet to him. hahaha i know a way carlos can pay him back with no money necessary hehe! xD. ha looks like my spanish class came in handy! i knew most of the words and could just make out what it means so yay! i feel so bad for carlos and i cant wait for logan and carlos to date. great job
4/24/2012 c1 4Aeroja
I'm speechless. Okay, only for any constructive comments. I've got to admit, that was a moving story. Albeit this review being VERY short, I just wanted to say that I really want to read what comes next. (Okay, I'm being selfish, but it's really that good of a read to me.)
4AerojaI'm speechless. Okay, only for any constructive comments. I've got to admit, that was a moving story. Albeit this review being VERY short, I just wanted to say that I really want to read what comes next. (Okay, I'm being selfish, but it's really that good of a read to me.)
4/23/2012 c1 50Sum1cooler
So glad that you're back. :) yay another cargan writer ;). Lol.
It's a nice first chapter. I actually like that you didn't reveal the names of Carlos' bullies. That was a nice touch. And Logan is a sweetheart :)
I can't wait to see more and how this story develops :)
50Sum1coolerSo glad that you're back. :) yay another cargan writer ;). Lol.
It's a nice first chapter. I actually like that you didn't reveal the names of Carlos' bullies. That was a nice touch. And Logan is a sweetheart :)
I can't wait to see more and how this story develops :)
4/23/2012 c1 canadianbear
Can I die? :O I love this already! The writing is great and I really like your ideplease? a. Poor Carlos though. Update soon please? Much love. :) x
Can I die? :O I love this already! The writing is great and I really like your ideplease? a. Poor Carlos though. Update soon please? Much love. :) x
4/23/2012 c1 Scarlett
oh my por carlitos!
pleasee moree more moree!
thanks so much
xoxo
oh my por carlitos!
pleasee moree more moree!
thanks so much
xoxo
4/23/2012 c1 BigTimeBeta
Me: This chapter is amazing 2 thumbs up
Brother: Is it going to have smutts also good chapter :)
FYI if I read your story my bro reads it too!
Me: This chapter is amazing 2 thumbs up
Brother: Is it going to have smutts also good chapter :)
FYI if I read your story my bro reads it too!
4/23/2012 c1 4jenizzleoffdachain
Awwwh poor Carlitos, Kendall and James are such meanies, hopefully they some how become friends further in the story because Carlos has a big heart to be quite honest, I love this chapter and I can't wait to see more! Hopefully this story can last longer (:
4jenizzleoffdachainAwwwh poor Carlitos, Kendall and James are such meanies, hopefully they some how become friends further in the story because Carlos has a big heart to be quite honest, I love this chapter and I can't wait to see more! Hopefully this story can last longer (:
4/22/2012 c1 brittney
awww me likey this story! it was so sweet! so im guessing the bullies are james and kendall. logan is so sweet to actually stay with carlos let alone for 8 hrs even if he barely knows him. Logan is such a cutie pie and i was tearing at the hospital scene. Cant wait for more!
awww me likey this story! it was so sweet! so im guessing the bullies are james and kendall. logan is so sweet to actually stay with carlos let alone for 8 hrs even if he barely knows him. Logan is such a cutie pie and i was tearing at the hospital scene. Cant wait for more!
4/22/2012 c1 8bordoutofmymind
Really like it :) sorry I suck at writing reviews.
Awwww poor Carlos… awesome cant wait to see more Cargan soon:D
Update soon
8bordoutofmymindReally like it :) sorry I suck at writing reviews.
Awwww poor Carlos… awesome cant wait to see more Cargan soon:D
Update soon