for Beautiful, he said4/25/2012 c1 
17mae-E
this was sweet. and very amusing in parts.
when the elevator opened to the gang i nearly laughed out loud! :)
17mae-Ethis was sweet. and very amusing in parts.
when the elevator opened to the gang i nearly laughed out loud! :)
4/24/2012 c1 274Higuchimon
In addition to what grits said, I suggest this: rephrase or modify the line about no Rangers being chosen after Zordon's death. Because as we know, there *were*. The Galaxy Rangers, the Lightspeed Team, Time Force, etc. etc. I would suggest setting it in between PRiS and Lost Galaxy, so no one yet *knows* that new teams will be chosen, so they're taking sensible precautions after Astronema's invasion.
274HiguchimonIn addition to what grits said, I suggest this: rephrase or modify the line about no Rangers being chosen after Zordon's death. Because as we know, there *were*. The Galaxy Rangers, the Lightspeed Team, Time Force, etc. etc. I would suggest setting it in between PRiS and Lost Galaxy, so no one yet *knows* that new teams will be chosen, so they're taking sensible precautions after Astronema's invasion.
4/24/2012 c1 grits
interesting story
Here are some notes
1) between what season does this take place.?
2) How did they get the command center put back together because it was destroyed at the end of turbo and then the turbo rangers went into space.
3) When you had Aisha say, "I just don't want to see you guys hurt anymore." To mean this line is saying they have broken up more than once, the same with Trini saying "Here we go again" - There friends would be happy that they are back together, not torn up about it the way these line sound to me
4) Are they in college or something, Because if they were, it would be odd for any of them to be living at home
5) Aisha went to Africa after giving up her powers to Tanya. Kat went to London on a dance scholarship, Kim was still in Florida. Zack & Trini were still in Switzerland or somewhere with the Peace Conference that they were a part of. Billy was on Aquatar.(Stuff like this needs to be explained)
6) Was Tommy sleeping all day, because if everyone was at the command center he should have been there too.
Sorry for the rant, but some research needs to be done, to explain how everyone got back to Angel Grove and such
interesting story
Here are some notes
1) between what season does this take place.?
2) How did they get the command center put back together because it was destroyed at the end of turbo and then the turbo rangers went into space.
3) When you had Aisha say, "I just don't want to see you guys hurt anymore." To mean this line is saying they have broken up more than once, the same with Trini saying "Here we go again" - There friends would be happy that they are back together, not torn up about it the way these line sound to me
4) Are they in college or something, Because if they were, it would be odd for any of them to be living at home
5) Aisha went to Africa after giving up her powers to Tanya. Kat went to London on a dance scholarship, Kim was still in Florida. Zack & Trini were still in Switzerland or somewhere with the Peace Conference that they were a part of. Billy was on Aquatar.(Stuff like this needs to be explained)
6) Was Tommy sleeping all day, because if everyone was at the command center he should have been there too.
Sorry for the rant, but some research needs to be done, to explain how everyone got back to Angel Grove and such