for Spire's Wings5/7/2012 c3 
3Noir's Revenge
I really like your story. It's refreshing with actual thought-through characters. The plots going well so far. When Spire died (?), I felt sad.
Also want to submit a character.
Name:
Lyrssia Stormrider
Age:
15, almost 16
Gender:
Female
Appearance:
Light blonde tinted hair falls to her shoulders with grey, stormy streaks accenting it. Her bangs falls just under her eyebrows. Ly's eyes are bi-colored. Right is a light, electric blue while left is a milky, blind blue. Yes, she is blind in her left eye. Her outfit is a sleeveless hooded grey tunic lined with cream colored fur. Cream dragon-hide fingerless gloves don her hands. Cream stockings fit tightly on her legs with grey boots.
Personality:
Ly is a calm and laid-back person. She hates serious situations and finds them troublesome. If Ly's not out fishing or taking care of her dragon, Clipse, she's usually sleeping. But behind that lazy interior is intelligent brain, analyzing and working at overdrive constantly. Her room had charts for weather patterns tacked up everywhere. She always checking the sky, winds and waters. Storms, especially. Ly lives for the thrill of flying in dangerous weather.
Dragon's Names:
Clipse
Gender:
Male
Breed:
Pure-blooded Skrill
Appearance:
Clipse is the size of a full-grown Monstrous Nightmare. His colors include a vibrant purple, light black and dull gray. He had a spiked back, a large wingspan and an even larger mouth.
Personality:
Clipse is the opposite of his master. He is very curious and hyperactive. Though, he is very shy. The only time you could possibly meet him is if Ly calls him or if there's a thunderstorm about.
Rider/Dragon Relationship:
When Ly first hatched Clipse, he poked her left eye blind. They despised each other at first but when they first realized their love of flying in dangerous weather, they couldn't deny their love for each other any longer. They are a dangerous couple. Ly with her intellect and Clipse with his ”shocking” electric abilities. Anyone against them should watch out.
I hope they're good enough for you. :)
Update soon!
3Noir's RevengeI really like your story. It's refreshing with actual thought-through characters. The plots going well so far. When Spire died (?), I felt sad.
Also want to submit a character.
Name:
Lyrssia Stormrider
Age:
15, almost 16
Gender:
Female
Appearance:
Light blonde tinted hair falls to her shoulders with grey, stormy streaks accenting it. Her bangs falls just under her eyebrows. Ly's eyes are bi-colored. Right is a light, electric blue while left is a milky, blind blue. Yes, she is blind in her left eye. Her outfit is a sleeveless hooded grey tunic lined with cream colored fur. Cream dragon-hide fingerless gloves don her hands. Cream stockings fit tightly on her legs with grey boots.
Personality:
Ly is a calm and laid-back person. She hates serious situations and finds them troublesome. If Ly's not out fishing or taking care of her dragon, Clipse, she's usually sleeping. But behind that lazy interior is intelligent brain, analyzing and working at overdrive constantly. Her room had charts for weather patterns tacked up everywhere. She always checking the sky, winds and waters. Storms, especially. Ly lives for the thrill of flying in dangerous weather.
Dragon's Names:
Clipse
Gender:
Male
Breed:
Pure-blooded Skrill
Appearance:
Clipse is the size of a full-grown Monstrous Nightmare. His colors include a vibrant purple, light black and dull gray. He had a spiked back, a large wingspan and an even larger mouth.
Personality:
Clipse is the opposite of his master. He is very curious and hyperactive. Though, he is very shy. The only time you could possibly meet him is if Ly calls him or if there's a thunderstorm about.
Rider/Dragon Relationship:
When Ly first hatched Clipse, he poked her left eye blind. They despised each other at first but when they first realized their love of flying in dangerous weather, they couldn't deny their love for each other any longer. They are a dangerous couple. Ly with her intellect and Clipse with his ”shocking” electric abilities. Anyone against them should watch out.
I hope they're good enough for you. :)
Update soon!
5/6/2012 c1 Nighteyes17
Sorry my last one was cut short.
OC: Emma the swift
Story: a young girl who was disowned and exiled from the bog-burglar tribe by her mother after she singlehandedly accidentaly burnt the entire village down.
Dragon: Rare young Ice fury named Aroura
Dragon's story: Aroura found Emma sitting in a snowbank after being exiled and dissowned. In a irregullat acton, Aroura let Emma share her den, taking care of her in that den for six years, becoming best friends very quickly.
Sorry my last one was cut short.
OC: Emma the swift
Story: a young girl who was disowned and exiled from the bog-burglar tribe by her mother after she singlehandedly accidentaly burnt the entire village down.
Dragon: Rare young Ice fury named Aroura
Dragon's story: Aroura found Emma sitting in a snowbank after being exiled and dissowned. In a irregullat acton, Aroura let Emma share her den, taking care of her in that den for six years, becoming best friends very quickly.
5/6/2012 c1 Guest
OC: Emma the swift
Story: a young girl from the bog- burglar tribe who was disowned and exiled by her mother after accidentaly burning the entire village down, singlehandedly.
Dragon: Rare young ice fury, named Aroura
Dragon's story: After Emma was dissowned and exiled, she, being the klutz she was, fell down a hole into a female ice fury's nest. She, with her bad luck, fell ontop of the dragon. After her sudden awaken, the ice fury looked to see what had fallen onto her. Dlshe did not expect to see a young human.
OC: Emma the swift
Story: a young girl from the bog- burglar tribe who was disowned and exiled by her mother after accidentaly burning the entire village down, singlehandedly.
Dragon: Rare young ice fury, named Aroura
Dragon's story: After Emma was dissowned and exiled, she, being the klutz she was, fell down a hole into a female ice fury's nest. She, with her bad luck, fell ontop of the dragon. After her sudden awaken, the ice fury looked to see what had fallen onto her. Dlshe did not expect to see a young human.
4/28/2012 c1 lark of the shadows
I need to clarify something, its not a pervert nightmare, its an aggravated nightmare. Sorry, it was a bad typo.
I need to clarify something, its not a pervert nightmare, its an aggravated nightmare. Sorry, it was a bad typo.
4/28/2012 c2 lark of the shadows
Here's an OC if you want:
Name: Gritt the Shrouded
Story: An orphaned Viking, age around 16, he was found by an unknown Viking tribe and then left to die in the woods after he attempted to kill one of them. He's an outcast of many different tribes, joining new ones just to survive, but then thrown out after he commits another malicious act. He vows revenge on all those who wronged him, but takes out his anger on others for now.
Dragon: Monstrous Nightmare
Dragon story: recently after Gritt was thrown out of the unknown tribe he came across a cave which housed a pervert nightmare, but the reason why this one lived alone was because it was also a slight outcast. It's scales were midnight black, unlike a normal nightmare, and it possessed an over-aggressive attitude towards other dragons. The two managed to form a mutual agreement with each other that eventually turned into a pact to exact revenge on all others.
That's what my OC is, and I was hoping if you could use him as an antagonist, but you don't have to stick to this explanation, you can branch off or change it. So have fun.
Here's an OC if you want:
Name: Gritt the Shrouded
Story: An orphaned Viking, age around 16, he was found by an unknown Viking tribe and then left to die in the woods after he attempted to kill one of them. He's an outcast of many different tribes, joining new ones just to survive, but then thrown out after he commits another malicious act. He vows revenge on all those who wronged him, but takes out his anger on others for now.
Dragon: Monstrous Nightmare
Dragon story: recently after Gritt was thrown out of the unknown tribe he came across a cave which housed a pervert nightmare, but the reason why this one lived alone was because it was also a slight outcast. It's scales were midnight black, unlike a normal nightmare, and it possessed an over-aggressive attitude towards other dragons. The two managed to form a mutual agreement with each other that eventually turned into a pact to exact revenge on all others.
That's what my OC is, and I was hoping if you could use him as an antagonist, but you don't have to stick to this explanation, you can branch off or change it. So have fun.
4/27/2012 c2 Francesva
NOOOOO! SPIRE! Yes, plz continue!
NOOOOO! SPIRE! Yes, plz continue!
4/27/2012 c2 Silverdragon98
Awwwwww, poor Spire! D: I almost wanted to cry. Awesome chapter by the way!
Awwwwww, poor Spire! D: I almost wanted to cry. Awesome chapter by the way!
4/24/2012 c1 Silverdragon98
Loved the first chapter! Here's an OC if you wanna use her!
Name: Reinforce Malnuri
Nickname: Rein
Gender: Female
Appearance: Rein has long black hair that goes down to her midback with the end of it tied in a red bow. She has bangs going across her forehead and a few strands of hair loose that isn't pulled back with the rest of her hair. She wears a short cut red tank top that shows some of her stomach with black shorts and black fur made boots that end at a few inches under her knees. She as well wears fur wrist-lets around her wrists. Oddly enough, Rein's eyes are a blood red color making some people fear her because of this.
Personality: Rein is an extremely impulsive, upbeat, hyper, and short tempered girl. She is a well known Trouble Maker throughout nearby villages and many know of her name. Not caring of the rumors about her, Rein often causes trouble and just loves playing pranks and will often steal shiny things from people and sleep on the roof tops of there house on sunny days and sunbathes. She is quite the Dare Devil and as well loves doing dangerous things out of her lack of fear. She is extremely loud mouthed as well and usually curses quite a bit, especially when she is trying to intimidate someone or when she is insulting them. Rein has a habit of intimidating those who are scared of her and for the fun of it, intimidates those she knows are stronger than her. She likes making up her own words such as a-*insert curse word*-dorable. Rein hates following rules and hates authority and authority figures, she especially hates being told what to do resulting in the dislike of teachers as well. Rein much would rather do her own thing than follow some sort of law and if she really has to, she will result in loop holes. Because of her hyper, 'off-the-wall' personality, not many people can handle Rein and therefore, she has no friends besides Nalu, her dragon friend whom she will ride around on. But, when she does get a friend out of fear they'll leave her, she'll get extremely protective of them and lay her life on the line time and time again in order to save there life. Rein as well has no shame whatsoever, if she sees a hot guy she'll tell it to him straight that she thinks he's hot and is extremely blunt. Rein as well is extremely flirty towards men of her interest. Rein as well highly enjoys sweet foods but hates fruits and vegetables. Besides sweet foods, Rein loves meat as well. To add to her personality, when angered, Rein is known for her powerful kick she is not hesitant to give to people who make her angry. Those people would be authority figures, teachers, negative people, people who are full of themselves and so on. When in battle and not being aided by her dragon, Rein can fight well on her own as she is extremely talented at close combat and prefers not using weapons. Despite all this, Rein is secretly depressed over her abandonment and uses her cheerfulness to cover it up. Rein as well is a very positive person and will come up with jokes at every given second, as well she has a habit of running straight into a battle without thinking as she enjoys the action.
Backround: When Rein was a little girl, her parents left and never returned out of thinking she was a demon because of her red eyes and left her to fend for herself. Afterwards, Rein discovered Nalu as an abandoned baby in the forest and secretly took him in and took care of him up until the age of 16 which is the age she is currently at.
Dragon she rides on: Monstrous Nightmare
Personality of her dragon: Nalu, the Monstrous Nightmare is rather aggressive to anybody except Rein. He is extremely protective of her and is rather intelligent, sometimes seemingly understands what Rein is saying at times. To Rein and only Rein, he is extremely obedient and doesn't dare to lash out at her. In a battle, he will assist her from the skies as she fights on the ground and he spits balls of fire down on the opponents, whatever they may be, even another dragon. Nalu as well refuses to let anyone ride him beside Rein as he will turn around and spit fire at the person riding his back who isn't Rein.
Well, here you go :) Hope it isn't too much! Don't worry about not using her if you don't want too
Loved the first chapter! Here's an OC if you wanna use her!
Name: Reinforce Malnuri
Nickname: Rein
Gender: Female
Appearance: Rein has long black hair that goes down to her midback with the end of it tied in a red bow. She has bangs going across her forehead and a few strands of hair loose that isn't pulled back with the rest of her hair. She wears a short cut red tank top that shows some of her stomach with black shorts and black fur made boots that end at a few inches under her knees. She as well wears fur wrist-lets around her wrists. Oddly enough, Rein's eyes are a blood red color making some people fear her because of this.
Personality: Rein is an extremely impulsive, upbeat, hyper, and short tempered girl. She is a well known Trouble Maker throughout nearby villages and many know of her name. Not caring of the rumors about her, Rein often causes trouble and just loves playing pranks and will often steal shiny things from people and sleep on the roof tops of there house on sunny days and sunbathes. She is quite the Dare Devil and as well loves doing dangerous things out of her lack of fear. She is extremely loud mouthed as well and usually curses quite a bit, especially when she is trying to intimidate someone or when she is insulting them. Rein has a habit of intimidating those who are scared of her and for the fun of it, intimidates those she knows are stronger than her. She likes making up her own words such as a-*insert curse word*-dorable. Rein hates following rules and hates authority and authority figures, she especially hates being told what to do resulting in the dislike of teachers as well. Rein much would rather do her own thing than follow some sort of law and if she really has to, she will result in loop holes. Because of her hyper, 'off-the-wall' personality, not many people can handle Rein and therefore, she has no friends besides Nalu, her dragon friend whom she will ride around on. But, when she does get a friend out of fear they'll leave her, she'll get extremely protective of them and lay her life on the line time and time again in order to save there life. Rein as well has no shame whatsoever, if she sees a hot guy she'll tell it to him straight that she thinks he's hot and is extremely blunt. Rein as well is extremely flirty towards men of her interest. Rein as well highly enjoys sweet foods but hates fruits and vegetables. Besides sweet foods, Rein loves meat as well. To add to her personality, when angered, Rein is known for her powerful kick she is not hesitant to give to people who make her angry. Those people would be authority figures, teachers, negative people, people who are full of themselves and so on. When in battle and not being aided by her dragon, Rein can fight well on her own as she is extremely talented at close combat and prefers not using weapons. Despite all this, Rein is secretly depressed over her abandonment and uses her cheerfulness to cover it up. Rein as well is a very positive person and will come up with jokes at every given second, as well she has a habit of running straight into a battle without thinking as she enjoys the action.
Backround: When Rein was a little girl, her parents left and never returned out of thinking she was a demon because of her red eyes and left her to fend for herself. Afterwards, Rein discovered Nalu as an abandoned baby in the forest and secretly took him in and took care of him up until the age of 16 which is the age she is currently at.
Dragon she rides on: Monstrous Nightmare
Personality of her dragon: Nalu, the Monstrous Nightmare is rather aggressive to anybody except Rein. He is extremely protective of her and is rather intelligent, sometimes seemingly understands what Rein is saying at times. To Rein and only Rein, he is extremely obedient and doesn't dare to lash out at her. In a battle, he will assist her from the skies as she fights on the ground and he spits balls of fire down on the opponents, whatever they may be, even another dragon. Nalu as well refuses to let anyone ride him beside Rein as he will turn around and spit fire at the person riding his back who isn't Rein.
Well, here you go :) Hope it isn't too much! Don't worry about not using her if you don't want too