for Abbendis9/10/2012 c1 Someone
It's good to see Abbedis getting some more attention, I hate that they killed her off :(
It's good to see Abbedis getting some more attention, I hate that they killed her off :(
7/14/2012 c2 pacificuser
cool! again,the lack of descriptive text could make the battle scenes against the forces of the lichking more "vivid" and real.
cool! again,the lack of descriptive text could make the battle scenes against the forces of the lichking more "vivid" and real.
7/14/2012 c1 pacificuser
this is pretty good,keep it up author... next time,kindly include more descriptive text. try to describe in more details people,places,and events. remember that,not all readers are veterans to the world of warcraft RPG. Admitedly,a basic knowledge of events in the Wrath of the Lichking expation is required;however,I'm trying to make a point that this story should stand alone as its own novel,tobe enjoyed on its own merits,free from too much research on the new-reader's part. so,more descriptive text for the benifit of the amature reader/player is appreciated.
this is pretty good,keep it up author... next time,kindly include more descriptive text. try to describe in more details people,places,and events. remember that,not all readers are veterans to the world of warcraft RPG. Admitedly,a basic knowledge of events in the Wrath of the Lichking expation is required;however,I'm trying to make a point that this story should stand alone as its own novel,tobe enjoyed on its own merits,free from too much research on the new-reader's part. so,more descriptive text for the benifit of the amature reader/player is appreciated.
7/9/2012 c11 Guest
Good story.
Good story.
6/30/2012 c10 Zamin
A good story. You made the characters and their relationship believable and interesting to read.
A good story. You made the characters and their relationship believable and interesting to read.
6/20/2012 c9 anon
dude... you know these dreadlords ain't all that powerful right. I mean in the game you can whoop their ass, so ...
dude... you know these dreadlords ain't all that powerful right. I mean in the game you can whoop their ass, so ...
6/19/2012 c9 Kaiser Spartan
O_o...what the hell just happened! This has to be some nightmare/dream/hallucination thingy. Holy shit! Keep writing damn you, write and tell us what happens! *eye spasm*
O_o...what the hell just happened! This has to be some nightmare/dream/hallucination thingy. Holy shit! Keep writing damn you, write and tell us what happens! *eye spasm*
6/18/2012 c9 
1Casanovan
Great story! An interesting outlook on the Scarlet Crusade/Onslaught. I like your original character, and his minion (succubus ftw!). I also like how you've come up with sufficient explanations for anything that may have at first seemed questionable. I can't BELIEVE you just murdered EVERYONE! I can't wait untill the next chapter, keep up the good work!
1CasanovanGreat story! An interesting outlook on the Scarlet Crusade/Onslaught. I like your original character, and his minion (succubus ftw!). I also like how you've come up with sufficient explanations for anything that may have at first seemed questionable. I can't BELIEVE you just murdered EVERYONE! I can't wait untill the next chapter, keep up the good work!