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5ObsessedSVUONCER
Awe :') beautiful ending! Bravo! I loved this story. Will there be a sequel?
5ObsessedSVUONCERAwe :') beautiful ending! Bravo! I loved this story. Will there be a sequel?
2/16 c25 Kikilia14
Very nice. These last two chapters are great. I love Julia baking the cake with Melinda and finally calling Olivia mom.
Liz was good here too.
Very nice. These last two chapters are great. I love Julia baking the cake with Melinda and finally calling Olivia mom.
Liz was good here too.
2/5 c1 fantasyinmymind
Like someone else said - just stumbled over this story and got hooked. Some place you do need to clarify who is speaking and when someone enters a room. Example: When Olivia took the kids to the station for their statements - she's meeting with Cragen when suddenly Liz Donnelly is in the room. Also when someone is "talking" don't separate each part - makes it difficult to know who is talking.
Look forward to more.
Like someone else said - just stumbled over this story and got hooked. Some place you do need to clarify who is speaking and when someone enters a room. Example: When Olivia took the kids to the station for their statements - she's meeting with Cragen when suddenly Liz Donnelly is in the room. Also when someone is "talking" don't separate each part - makes it difficult to know who is talking.
Look forward to more.
2/4 c23 19Alex Beckett
I like this story a lot, but have a tip for you - when using quotation marks, there are no spaces after the first mark, as that's improper. It's also a bit distracting and makes me want to skip long sections of dialogue. That being said, I still like this story and love when you update it :D
19Alex BeckettI like this story a lot, but have a tip for you - when using quotation marks, there are no spaces after the first mark, as that's improper. It's also a bit distracting and makes me want to skip long sections of dialogue. That being said, I still like this story and love when you update it :D
2/3 c23 7Kikilia14
Very nice chapter. I like how Olivia bakes with Julia and how the little girl seems to be settling in.
7Kikilia14Very nice chapter. I like how Olivia bakes with Julia and how the little girl seems to be settling in.
2/3 c22 Bkwrmchar
Fantastic chapter! Thank You. Sure hope Liv doesn't leave the girls to go back on shift.
Fantastic chapter! Thank You. Sure hope Liv doesn't leave the girls to go back on shift.