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Please Finish!
Please Finish!
10/20/2012 c8 
5Clearly am Intrigued
hahhahaaa...
When I read the teaser before the title. "Even if like the fairytale the other princess does get a P in ger bed". I laughed like crazy at my dirty mind cus i thought P stood for something else
5Clearly am Intriguedhahhahaaa...
When I read the teaser before the title. "Even if like the fairytale the other princess does get a P in ger bed". I laughed like crazy at my dirty mind cus i thought P stood for something else
9/24/2012 c18 Guest
I like your explanation for why she was so distracted and let the killer go.
I like your explanation for why she was so distracted and let the killer go.
9/24/2012 c18 30Sidalee
Oh that was hot. I always thought that their come together gonna be feral and a little rough but very sensual at the same time. You nailed it perfectly.
Lol, I have a suspicion that Kono actually said she liked the blonde to ** with Steve.
Gah, where the hell is Steve by the way? Can't wait for the next chapter.
30SidaleeOh that was hot. I always thought that their come together gonna be feral and a little rough but very sensual at the same time. You nailed it perfectly.
Lol, I have a suspicion that Kono actually said she liked the blonde to ** with Steve.
Gah, where the hell is Steve by the way? Can't wait for the next chapter.
9/24/2012 c17 Sidalee
I kinda wish this was an actual show. It's so original and fun. Like the easy way they move around each other, that they are comfortable enough that it's not a surprise when he shows up in the middle of the night.
Oh joy, they finally kissed. Yay.
I kinda wish this was an actual show. It's so original and fun. Like the easy way they move around each other, that they are comfortable enough that it's not a surprise when he shows up in the middle of the night.
Oh joy, they finally kissed. Yay.
9/23/2012 c18 Shani8
So happy to see an update from you! :) Great work, as always!
No worries re: how this chapter ended. I'm sure it was a necessary evil to have the Prince stand the Princess up... ;) Glad they enjoyed a good amount of heavy snogging beforehand though. :D
Looking forward to more, and hope you update soon!
Later,
Shani :)
So happy to see an update from you! :) Great work, as always!
No worries re: how this chapter ended. I'm sure it was a necessary evil to have the Prince stand the Princess up... ;) Glad they enjoyed a good amount of heavy snogging beforehand though. :D
Looking forward to more, and hope you update soon!
Later,
Shani :)
9/23/2012 c18 bushy4
I like the continuation of the kiss. I get to reread it each time and it is hot!
I like the continuation of the kiss. I get to reread it each time and it is hot!
9/23/2012 c18 2Halle Alexis
Yes, I definitely meant my last review in a good way ( And I like longer stories, so I'm looking forward to reading more, plus what would a story be without a little bit of drama? I can't wait to read the next chapter and see where you plan to take the characters next.
2Halle AlexisYes, I definitely meant my last review in a good way ( And I like longer stories, so I'm looking forward to reading more, plus what would a story be without a little bit of drama? I can't wait to read the next chapter and see where you plan to take the characters next.
9/23/2012 c18 8Detective-XO
Arrgggg why he leave her waiting :(...I'm getting way to invested in his I'm hanging on your every word and its freaking awesome. Great update
xo
8Detective-XOArrgggg why he leave her waiting :(...I'm getting way to invested in his I'm hanging on your every word and its freaking awesome. Great update
xo
9/23/2012 c18 Lydia
Oh no, he's back to being a frog again! Well, I hope she sticks to her new resolution (that I assume we'll see in the next chapter?). I mean, I see Kono as someone with integrity and morals, and he has a girlfriend as far as she knows, right? It's just wrong. Can you tell I like strong, independent women ;) Which is another reason I'm a bit afraid of her pairing with Adam. I don't think he could ever completely get out of that hole (yakuza) and it's scary she is in love with a mobster (yikes!).
Don't worry, I still LOVE both of your fics and you're a great writer! You play with my emotions too much and sometimes you get me upset (haha), but I realize it's a great skill you have playing with your readers' minds :)
Oh no, he's back to being a frog again! Well, I hope she sticks to her new resolution (that I assume we'll see in the next chapter?). I mean, I see Kono as someone with integrity and morals, and he has a girlfriend as far as she knows, right? It's just wrong. Can you tell I like strong, independent women ;) Which is another reason I'm a bit afraid of her pairing with Adam. I don't think he could ever completely get out of that hole (yakuza) and it's scary she is in love with a mobster (yikes!).
Don't worry, I still LOVE both of your fics and you're a great writer! You play with my emotions too much and sometimes you get me upset (haha), but I realize it's a great skill you have playing with your readers' minds :)
9/23/2012 c18 3TvFanatic97
I get so giddy over alerts from you! This chapter didn't disappoint at all even though I'd have liked to see more of the aftermath of the kiss but you've said we'll see more of that in the next chapter so I'm fine with it all. Damn Danny and his timings, he ruined everything but if it's all setting it up for the next chapter I don't mind at all and trust where you're going with this. I can't wait to see how you'll write Catherine's presence in 1x15 in your next chapter and I also look forward to an update of Aftermath. Please update soon, if real life allows you to.
P.s- how long do you plan on making this fic and will it also follow the story arc of the rest of season 1?
3TvFanatic97I get so giddy over alerts from you! This chapter didn't disappoint at all even though I'd have liked to see more of the aftermath of the kiss but you've said we'll see more of that in the next chapter so I'm fine with it all. Damn Danny and his timings, he ruined everything but if it's all setting it up for the next chapter I don't mind at all and trust where you're going with this. I can't wait to see how you'll write Catherine's presence in 1x15 in your next chapter and I also look forward to an update of Aftermath. Please update soon, if real life allows you to.
P.s- how long do you plan on making this fic and will it also follow the story arc of the rest of season 1?