for The Commitment Word5/23/2012 c1 gobrandygo
I love Dominika! Your story was great, it felt like it's what should really happen, not OOC at all. The only constructive criticism I can offer is that your use of words to say that they were moving in synch was kind of cliche & didnt fit with the rest, where otherwise I felt your wording was very natural. Great work :)
I love Dominika! Your story was great, it felt like it's what should really happen, not OOC at all. The only constructive criticism I can offer is that your use of words to say that they were moving in synch was kind of cliche & didnt fit with the rest, where otherwise I felt your wording was very natural. Great work :)
4/24/2012 c1 ellie
Love this, I really liked Dominika and was sad to see her go. She and House had good chemistry.
Love this, I really liked Dominika and was sad to see her go. She and House had good chemistry.
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