for Back in the Day: We Were Here outtakes2/17 c1 whiti
Loved it thanks, great getting EPOV into the beginning.
I'm really looking forward to another update - Ch23?
Loved it thanks, great getting EPOV into the beginning.
I'm really looking forward to another update - Ch23?
7/4/2012 c1 grabadietcoke
How beautiful, how he finally showed her. I feel like at the end of this Jame Earl Jones would say "and so it begins" and then the opening credits would roll. Silly, no? Great peek into how that all started.
How beautiful, how he finally showed her. I feel like at the end of this Jame Earl Jones would say "and so it begins" and then the opening credits would roll. Silly, no? Great peek into how that all started.
6/26/2012 c1 Soni's Angel
Hey Lola! Loved reading this outtake in EPOV and hopefully you do intend writing gracing us with more outtakes;P You are a brilliant writer and your story "We Were Here" totally owns me. After all their hardships and separations it would seem that they are finally getting back to being them just in a healthy way. Can't wait for the next update;D Thanks for sharing, always a pleasure reading your stories;)
Hey Lola! Loved reading this outtake in EPOV and hopefully you do intend writing gracing us with more outtakes;P You are a brilliant writer and your story "We Were Here" totally owns me. After all their hardships and separations it would seem that they are finally getting back to being them just in a healthy way. Can't wait for the next update;D Thanks for sharing, always a pleasure reading your stories;)
5/31/2012 c1 Amy Halliwell
Loved this. I wish you'd write a oneshot or something with just Edward and Rosalie. I love their friendship in We Were Here. It'd be interesting to see how they became friends.
Loved this. I wish you'd write a oneshot or something with just Edward and Rosalie. I love their friendship in We Were Here. It'd be interesting to see how they became friends.
5/22/2012 c1 shonla
I'm just now reading this. I LOVE your Edward. I've read tons of fan fictions and yours is in my top 3.
I'm just now reading this. I LOVE your Edward. I've read tons of fan fictions and yours is in my top 3.
5/21/2012 c1 dlhk
Oh, I LOVED this. Loved it. Getting edward's pov was amazing. They've come so far, haven't they? Lost everything a few times and now they're back to where they should be. Hopefully for good! Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. -mommyofboth
Oh, I LOVED this. Loved it. Getting edward's pov was amazing. They've come so far, haven't they? Lost everything a few times and now they're back to where they should be. Hopefully for good! Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. -mommyofboth
5/6/2012 c1 
1periwrites
Why, oh WHY are you so amazing? Your writing...I just... ugh. I can't. Thank you for writing this!
1periwritesWhy, oh WHY are you so amazing? Your writing...I just... ugh. I can't. Thank you for writing this!
4/29/2012 c1 jennayg123
I completely love this! They have been through so much to get to where they are now and they still have a long way to go. Thanks for this little glimpse into Edward!
I completely love this! They have been through so much to get to where they are now and they still have a long way to go. Thanks for this little glimpse into Edward!