for Back in the Day: We Were Here outtakes4/24/2012 c1 Hadley Hemingway
oh my, lovely one. What a gift for your FGB team - I hope you inspired a MASSIVE donation because this is an epic outtake. This is a gorgeous snapshot of your beautiful story -my personal favorite of yours, actually, although it is currently ripping my heart out ;) and gives an insightful glimpse of the many-layered characters that live within. This truly is the most well-written Rose I've read - she is not a favorite with me, but this character lives on the very fine edge of agony, anguish, and insight - she is a gift and a heartbreak to those that love her. As for this Edward, your writing is at its best with this guy...there are no words with which I can gush enough...Thanks so much to you and yours for sharing this outtake.
oh my, lovely one. What a gift for your FGB team - I hope you inspired a MASSIVE donation because this is an epic outtake. This is a gorgeous snapshot of your beautiful story -my personal favorite of yours, actually, although it is currently ripping my heart out ;) and gives an insightful glimpse of the many-layered characters that live within. This truly is the most well-written Rose I've read - she is not a favorite with me, but this character lives on the very fine edge of agony, anguish, and insight - she is a gift and a heartbreak to those that love her. As for this Edward, your writing is at its best with this guy...there are no words with which I can gush enough...Thanks so much to you and yours for sharing this outtake.
4/24/2012 c1 i.luv.twilight2
Thank you for writing this glimpse into Edward's mind and life. It explains a great deal of his behavior at the beginning of the story.
Thank you for writing this glimpse into Edward's mind and life. It explains a great deal of his behavior at the beginning of the story.
4/24/2012 c1 
2LikeToRead22
Beautiful. Your writing evokes so much emotion. I feel like I can see all the way through your characters. I love it. Thanks for writing.
2LikeToRead22Beautiful. Your writing evokes so much emotion. I feel like I can see all the way through your characters. I love it. Thanks for writing.
4/24/2012 c1 Courtney37
Aww! That was both sad blu& yummy too. Way to go Bella! Both of them were stone cold sober & yet she still tapped that. ;) can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now.
Aww! That was both sad blu& yummy too. Way to go Bella! Both of them were stone cold sober & yet she still tapped that. ;) can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now.
4/24/2012 c1 2cejsmom
THIS was the best absolute gift you could have given! Wow! Edward. I love his pov and of this moment - incredible. we know how he felt about her but to hear it from him. He must be soo hurt right now.
2cejsmomTHIS was the best absolute gift you could have given! Wow! Edward. I love his pov and of this moment - incredible. we know how he felt about her but to hear it from him. He must be soo hurt right now.
4/24/2012 c1 2Stickybuns
Love getting to see this... and especially in his pov.
The sex? how he wishes it were more intimate... more personal? oh my GAWD.
I love how he's always fighting it... wanting her, but hating that he does.
Can't wait for more!
2StickybunsLove getting to see this... and especially in his pov.
The sex? how he wishes it were more intimate... more personal? oh my GAWD.
I love how he's always fighting it... wanting her, but hating that he does.
Can't wait for more!
4/24/2012 c1 17WhatsMyNomDePlume
everytime I think it can't get better, more intense, that you can't make me feel more you do. you got talent, kid. and plus, I freaking adore you.
that's all. xo
17WhatsMyNomDePlumeeverytime I think it can't get better, more intense, that you can't make me feel more you do. you got talent, kid. and plus, I freaking adore you.
that's all. xo
4/24/2012 c1 1zanni1990
OH man... thank you soo so much for this tidbit! I fucking love this story and never want it to end! Although I will admit Im ready for the great fucking and loving to come back into the story :)
1zanni1990OH man... thank you soo so much for this tidbit! I fucking love this story and never want it to end! Although I will admit Im ready for the great fucking and loving to come back into the story :)