for Return To Me5/31/2012 c17
24ExquisiteRose
I wanted to review this by signing in for once, and that's why this took so long. I usually go on on my phone, and when I do go on my computer, I'm updating my stories, so there's no time :0
So, here I am saying that I am loving how this is going:)
I didn't expect Adeline to do that (emphasis on 'that'), and I was shocked. Then I started a string of curses against her, felt sympathy for her, which was overcome by sympathy and anger for Brian. Short version: She's not in my good books (not that I have those:P). But, what's a story without angst? :)
Waiting for your next update! :D
24ExquisiteRoseI wanted to review this by signing in for once, and that's why this took so long. I usually go on on my phone, and when I do go on my computer, I'm updating my stories, so there's no time :0
So, here I am saying that I am loving how this is going:)
I didn't expect Adeline to do that (emphasis on 'that'), and I was shocked. Then I started a string of curses against her, felt sympathy for her, which was overcome by sympathy and anger for Brian. Short version: She's not in my good books (not that I have those:P). But, what's a story without angst? :)
Waiting for your next update! :D
5/30/2012 c17
2LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books
Dun dun duuuuun! Please Brian don't be mad at Daddy J!
Poor Adeline, poor baby It's probably gonna get all types
of disabilities the way Adeline has been treating herself.
Can't wait for next chapter! Really enjoying the story!
2LaNaturalBreezeOf-BooksDun dun duuuuun! Please Brian don't be mad at Daddy J!
Poor Adeline, poor baby It's probably gonna get all types
of disabilities the way Adeline has been treating herself.
Can't wait for next chapter! Really enjoying the story!
5/29/2012 c16 LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books
Awesome :D
Really hating Corrine, even though I'll be a hypocrite bu i don't care :)
Justin! ooh he's such a great Dad. :)))))
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Awesome :D
Really hating Corrine, even though I'll be a hypocrite bu i don't care :)
Justin! ooh he's such a great Dad. :)))))
Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/29/2012 c15 lovelovelove
WOW i wasnt expecting that!:D amazing completely brillant (wish i had ur brain):D
the family time line confused me at first but i sorda figured it out... but if joan's madian name is o'hara, does her brothers death have anything to do with the curse and if so doesnt that make brian and justin in some way... related?
plzz clear it up abit in another awsome chapter soon:D
WOW i wasnt expecting that!:D amazing completely brillant (wish i had ur brain):D
the family time line confused me at first but i sorda figured it out... but if joan's madian name is o'hara, does her brothers death have anything to do with the curse and if so doesnt that make brian and justin in some way... related?
plzz clear it up abit in another awsome chapter soon:D
5/28/2012 c15 LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books
I'm really starting to hate this June 6!
Great story, loving it, cant wait for next update :D
I'm really starting to hate this June 6!
Great story, loving it, cant wait for next update :D
5/24/2012 c14 LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books
Awww, i love you too :P
Great chappter, cant wait to see how Justin will react to his biological*? children.
Awww, i love you too :P
Great chappter, cant wait to see how Justin will react to his biological*? children.
5/23/2012 c14 Lovelovelove
yes he remembers!:D
happy that brian told Hutson the truth buy I'm also looking forward to how they r gonna go about being together with adaline plus I hope justin gets to learn about his kids:D
awsome chpater can't wait till nxt:D
yes he remembers!:D
happy that brian told Hutson the truth buy I'm also looking forward to how they r gonna go about being together with adaline plus I hope justin gets to learn about his kids:D
awsome chpater can't wait till nxt:D
5/23/2012 c14 TMack25
What a fantastic chapter! An what a great ending! The emotion of that ending slammed into me like a blow from the boxing champ of the world.
What a fantastic chapter! An what a great ending! The emotion of that ending slammed into me like a blow from the boxing champ of the world.
5/22/2012 c13 LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books
Oh feisty
Lovely chapter :)
Hope that 'Andy' won't make the situations even more
difficult for Peter and Jagger.
When is Justin going to meet the whole family? Or have i missed that reunion?
Cant wait forrr nexxt chapter :D
Oh feisty
Lovely chapter :)
Hope that 'Andy' won't make the situations even more
difficult for Peter and Jagger.
When is Justin going to meet the whole family? Or have i missed that reunion?
Cant wait forrr nexxt chapter :D
5/22/2012 c13 TMack25
Great, great update! It is up to your usual level of goodness. If this were a movie, I'd give it four stars. It is progressing along wonderfully.
Great, great update! It is up to your usual level of goodness. If this were a movie, I'd give it four stars. It is progressing along wonderfully.
5/21/2012 c12 Lovelovelove
Amazing love but I'm curious to find out how brian is going about trying to get justin bak.
And he had a memory - not really a good one - but diffinatly an inprovment!:D
can't wait for nxt update:D
Amazing love but I'm curious to find out how brian is going about trying to get justin bak.
And he had a memory - not really a good one - but diffinatly an inprovment!:D
can't wait for nxt update:D
5/20/2012 c12 LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books
YEEEEE! HE REMEMBERS :D
I've got this stupid grin on my face hehehehee
Great chapter, cant wait to see what their future holds
YEEEEE! HE REMEMBERS :D
I've got this stupid grin on my face hehehehee
Great chapter, cant wait to see what their future holds
5/20/2012 c12 TMack25
I freaking LOVE this story! I like the relationship dynamics of every pairing that you have assembled. The characterizations are so rich and full-bodied. The plot lines are very well established and polished. I get so excited when I see the new chapter alert in my inbox.
I freaking LOVE this story! I like the relationship dynamics of every pairing that you have assembled. The characterizations are so rich and full-bodied. The plot lines are very well established and polished. I get so excited when I see the new chapter alert in my inbox.
5/19/2012 c11 LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books
Another great chapter, can't wait for Justin's reaction. Brian's going to get hell! :O
Another great chapter, can't wait for Justin's reaction. Brian's going to get hell! :O
5/19/2012 c11 Lovelovelove
THANK u fir the update loved it
can't wait 4 the nxt one:D
THANK u fir the update loved it
can't wait 4 the nxt one:D
