for Enough5/1/2012 c1 
51Bakura's Guardian Angel
I'm sure your story is great, but I couldn't get through it because of all the language. Please believe me when I say that this is purely my opinion, and should be taken as constructive criticism, but most people don't prefer to read so much vulgar language. It detracts from the story, and it is really quite unnecessary. I'm not telling you what to do, but for me and many others, a story is far more enjoyable when it is not riddled with cursing.
51Bakura's Guardian AngelI'm sure your story is great, but I couldn't get through it because of all the language. Please believe me when I say that this is purely my opinion, and should be taken as constructive criticism, but most people don't prefer to read so much vulgar language. It detracts from the story, and it is really quite unnecessary. I'm not telling you what to do, but for me and many others, a story is far more enjoyable when it is not riddled with cursing.
4/28/2012 c1 Saggie25
Oh gosh, poor Damon! I can feel all his passion and frustration. Love the one shot. You write very well.
Oh gosh, poor Damon! I can feel all his passion and frustration. Love the one shot. You write very well.