for Ghosts from the past12/7/2012 c7 
6Aslook
Silly Nikola. Doesn't he know Helen doesn't need a gun to kill him! I love this story! Will there be a sequel?
6AslookSilly Nikola. Doesn't he know Helen doesn't need a gun to kill him! I love this story! Will there be a sequel?
5/28/2012 c3 Ash
The end of this chapter actually made me laugh out loud. I like it.
The end of this chapter actually made me laugh out loud. I like it.
5/26/2012 c7 12Sparky She-Demon
Interesting ending. I liked it. I too am wishing that you'd found some way to give Druitt the painful death he deserves. I really liked it when Munch stepped up. Bet he was scared out of his mind. But that's a part of real courage. Being scared out of your mind, but doing it anyway.
Good job! Wish there was more!
12Sparky She-DemonInteresting ending. I liked it. I too am wishing that you'd found some way to give Druitt the painful death he deserves. I really liked it when Munch stepped up. Bet he was scared out of his mind. But that's a part of real courage. Being scared out of your mind, but doing it anyway.
Good job! Wish there was more!
5/9/2012 c6 chartreuseian
Nice compromise with the end :P Loved Niko's reaction though I can't help but think Olivia would try and kick his ass if she heard that :P I'll admit I thought you were going to get into talk of concubines but this was better!
Nice compromise with the end :P Loved Niko's reaction though I can't help but think Olivia would try and kick his ass if she heard that :P I'll admit I thought you were going to get into talk of concubines but this was better!
5/4/2012 c5 chartreuseian
Read this during a performance yesterday and I couldn't stop giggling because, come the end I couldn't help but think you were leading this towards the Monsoon-esque bit we were talking about and with Nikola there I just... Oh I'm giggling at the thought now! He'd get so possessive but I don't think he'd be able to deny being a bit turned on...
Ignore me, I've gone crazy...
Read this during a performance yesterday and I couldn't stop giggling because, come the end I couldn't help but think you were leading this towards the Monsoon-esque bit we were talking about and with Nikola there I just... Oh I'm giggling at the thought now! He'd get so possessive but I don't think he'd be able to deny being a bit turned on...
Ignore me, I've gone crazy...
5/3/2012 c5 12Sparky She-Demon
Very good. Loved it! I didn't realize that Nikola was still devamped in your story. Ohhh I can't wait for him and Munch to sit down and chat! That is, if you decided to do that. But it's still cool. Of course Nikola ogled Olivia. He'd have to be dead not to. I can see him and Stabler getting into an arguement.
I can't wait to see Olivia's reaction to the abnormals. It should be well worth reading.
12Sparky She-DemonVery good. Loved it! I didn't realize that Nikola was still devamped in your story. Ohhh I can't wait for him and Munch to sit down and chat! That is, if you decided to do that. But it's still cool. Of course Nikola ogled Olivia. He'd have to be dead not to. I can see him and Stabler getting into an arguement.
I can't wait to see Olivia's reaction to the abnormals. It should be well worth reading.
4/30/2012 c3 12Sparky She-Demon
I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to the creatures at the Sanctuary! I'm looking forward to seeing Munch's and Stabler's reactions the most! Good job and I can't wait for more!
12Sparky She-DemonI can't wait to see everyone's reactions to the creatures at the Sanctuary! I'm looking forward to seeing Munch's and Stabler's reactions the most! Good job and I can't wait for more!