for The 275th Hunger Games7/16/2012 c14 
7Bubbles975
Aw, poor Ashylin! She lost Autum...you captured her emotions perfectly! I can't really say anything else that I haven't alreadt said! You're a great writier, and please update soon!
7Bubbles975Aw, poor Ashylin! She lost Autum...you captured her emotions perfectly! I can't really say anything else that I haven't alreadt said! You're a great writier, and please update soon!
6/29/2012 c13 Rikachan101
noo, such a beautiful couple-gone :'(
great chapter
oh no, lyra's in trouble!
noo, such a beautiful couple-gone :'(
great chapter
oh no, lyra's in trouble!
6/20/2012 c12 7Bubbles975
AH! WHAT JUST HAPPENED!
Wow...I can say that I REALLY wasn't expecting that. AT ALL. I read that and was like "meh", but then I actually realised what it said...WOAH!
Just glad that Ashylin's not dead yet...
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVED the plot twists (see above), and now I NEED TO KNOW MORE!
Please update soon, you're a great writer, and I can't wait to see more!
Bubbles975
7Bubbles975AH! WHAT JUST HAPPENED!
Wow...I can say that I REALLY wasn't expecting that. AT ALL. I read that and was like "meh", but then I actually realised what it said...WOAH!
Just glad that Ashylin's not dead yet...
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVED the plot twists (see above), and now I NEED TO KNOW MORE!
Please update soon, you're a great writer, and I can't wait to see more!
Bubbles975
6/19/2012 c12 3Rikachan101
nooo! WHHYYYY?
autumn AND luka in one chapter?
you're EVIL!
(jk :D)
happy that lyra survived though
3Rikachan101nooo! WHHYYYY?
autumn AND luka in one chapter?
you're EVIL!
(jk :D)
happy that lyra survived though
6/19/2012 c1 1leavesinlight
Ummm, I think you should know, the 275th games would be the 11th quarter quell, not the seventh, good story though.
1leavesinlightUmmm, I think you should know, the 275th games would be the 11th quarter quell, not the seventh, good story though.
6/17/2012 c11 1June Bell
Very nice chapter, as well as the last (I just didn't have time to review that one). Only constructive criticism I have is to watch out for little grammar errors (dialogue, punctuation, capitalization, blah blah blah). I like the alliance between Roketi and Tasi, as well as the one between Rose, Ashylin, and Autumn. Ooh, what's happening to the Careers? Nice cliffhanger!
1June BellVery nice chapter, as well as the last (I just didn't have time to review that one). Only constructive criticism I have is to watch out for little grammar errors (dialogue, punctuation, capitalization, blah blah blah). I like the alliance between Roketi and Tasi, as well as the one between Rose, Ashylin, and Autumn. Ooh, what's happening to the Careers? Nice cliffhanger!
6/17/2012 c11 7Bubbles975
Ouch! Ashylin got spearded! But she's not dead yet!
This was, as usual, a great chapter! I liked how you formed and showed the different alliences, and the different event that are happenong :-) well done!
The only thing I'd suggest though, is do you think you could name the tributes that died in the progection thinigie? Because, I don't know who's dead...unless that's how you want it. Then it's fine.
So, please keep writing and update soon!
Bubbles975
7Bubbles975Ouch! Ashylin got spearded! But she's not dead yet!
This was, as usual, a great chapter! I liked how you formed and showed the different alliences, and the different event that are happenong :-) well done!
The only thing I'd suggest though, is do you think you could name the tributes that died in the progection thinigie? Because, I don't know who's dead...unless that's how you want it. Then it's fine.
So, please keep writing and update soon!
Bubbles975
6/16/2012 c11 peetalover
MUST READ
MUST READ
6/16/2012 c5 peetalover
i loved cinna and cried when he died. btw i am LOVING your story
i loved cinna and cried when he died. btw i am LOVING your story
6/16/2012 c4 peetalover
lol! ikr (bout the mutts) i saw t 3 times and i spilled popcorn all over my friend one time
lol! ikr (bout the mutts) i saw t 3 times and i spilled popcorn all over my friend one time
6/16/2012 c1 peetalover
i really did like it! it was very good. although i did find it confusing to switch back and forth every few lines between characters
i really did like it! it was very good. although i did find it confusing to switch back and forth every few lines between characters
6/14/2012 c10 Bubbles975
Yay! I LOVED this chapter! I really liked how you did the multiple points of view, and how everyone got a bit :-) And I'm wishing good luck for Ashylin :-)
Please Update! I can't WAIT for the next installment!
Bubbles975
Yay! I LOVED this chapter! I really liked how you did the multiple points of view, and how everyone got a bit :-) And I'm wishing good luck for Ashylin :-)
Please Update! I can't WAIT for the next installment!
Bubbles975
6/13/2012 c10 Rikachan101
yay, the games have begun!
like tasi's part! and the last part definitely seems like something that lyra would do
the only thing is that you said "lyra nods" when it should be "i nod"
yay, the games have begun!
like tasi's part! and the last part definitely seems like something that lyra would do
the only thing is that you said "lyra nods" when it should be "i nod"
6/10/2012 c9 1June Bell
"I smile the first real smile since I walked up on stage. 'He told me to win for him, and to ask you for your hairstylist. He wants their number.'"
Loved that, haha. Anyway, great chapter again. Tasi and Rose, aww. I also loved Roketi's interview because we saw more of his history. Next chapter is the start of the Games, omg. Excited. (:
1June Bell"I smile the first real smile since I walked up on stage. 'He told me to win for him, and to ask you for your hairstylist. He wants their number.'"
Loved that, haha. Anyway, great chapter again. Tasi and Rose, aww. I also loved Roketi's interview because we saw more of his history. Next chapter is the start of the Games, omg. Excited. (: