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5/18/2012 c4 2NumbistheNewHigh
Sad to her that this will end soon but I've enjoyed the read. :) You manage to write a very sweet, romantic story between these two without making it sappy and too OOC and I'm enjoying it very much.
5/18/2012 c4 adiidelly
Omg i really love this story. Please update soon i really wanna find out happens :D x x
5/15/2012 c4 1angietenshi
*-* i love u! hehe, i mean i just LOVE ur FF , :D plz next chapter next chapter i can't stop reading it!
5/13/2012 c4 12Thymelady
"There isn't any fairer flower than my girlfriend Amy Farrah Fowler!"

A golden line that should be emblazoned all over Pasadena!

Of course Amy knew! Love it!
5/12/2012 c4 jhnigbhgvbkihtgs4erw
yes i love that last line! fairer flower farrah fowler, genius :)

and: *girlish giggle* you made a mistake where you wrote brunette instead of bernadette, which is funny coz shes blonde :)

anyway, great story! despite the number of reviews (weird coz you deserve more) know that im always reading and loving every second of this story. so sad that its almost over but still hope you update soon.
5/12/2012 c4 10bigbangsheldon
Awww, I hope Sheldon gets her approval.

I love your dyslexia for getting that line.

Great chapter/story.
5/3/2012 c3 Rachelreano
Yeah! I love Sheldon's mom ^_^ You pre-story is much appreciated. I love how Sheldon's manning up. Way to quote one of the episodes! I love it when people tie in stuff like that. I hope you write two chapters; i always look forward to seeing this story updated :). I hope you write again soon! (and YES! Tonight's episode shall be most EPIC! Thank goodness for DVR xD)
5/3/2012 c3 4shamy4ever
Awww I love that our little Shelly has grown up! Please update soon can't wait to read more!

shamy4ever :D
5/3/2012 c3 12Thymelady
Excellent, like it was in the show! Oh, you write Mary Cooper BRILLIANTLY! I bow to you! And Sheldon stood up to her... and Amy is more beautiful than ever! I can't wait to read more.
5/3/2012 c3 ilovebazinga
"the wayward lovers" i just love that!

believe me, that was a great chapter, and when you mention the "eye coitus",awww! i just melt inside!
5/3/2012 c2 19rubyanjel
this story is seeeeeping with spoilers (and this being commented a week before the end of the season). But I love how you incorporated those things, and thank goodness i'm spoiled.

Here's the thing,dear. Some shamy fanfic readers have devoted themselves to be spoiler-free. Even I had to censor myself form revealing anything to them in threads, forums, and in social networking sites, including my fanfics. so if ever, I suggest you make a warning for the spoiler content and maybe remove it next week after the episode. Just a suggestion though.

Regarding your question, maybe you can do both. Have at the beginning how they were able to track him and then continue with the last scene from this chapter. :D

Looking forward to your next chapter!

P.S. The image of Amy in Sheldon's flash shirt is giving me warm fuzzies and suddenly gave me the desire to actually see it on the show. The peck Sheldon gave her was just so darn sweet. And I agree, IMO Amy is prettier than Penny (been Jim and Mayim's fan, even though I think Kaley's pretty, I still prefer Mayim over her).
5/3/2012 c3 Dina C
Fun story. I was a bit bothered by some misspelled words: Jeepers not jippers, flattering, not faltering, Lydia, not Lidia, hoarse, not horse, etc. It just needs to be carefully proofread by someone who speaks English well. :-) Good work!
5/2/2012 c2 jhnigbhgvbkihtgs4erw
wow, thats a tricky one...

i hope you do both chapters, one from mrs cooper, and especially the gangs point of view so i can hear what they've been up to while all this was happening. maybe you could bring in something about penny's acting. maybe thats why amy felt drawn to her, coz they both have that inner performer thing in common (or something like that) :)

great story!
5/1/2012 c2 Rachelreano
I'm kinda curious how the gang, Sheldon's mom, and Amy's step mom all managed to catch up to them in Reno so quickly. I'm wondering how that works out, so I would say option number 2. Great chpater, and I can't wait to read the next one!
5/1/2012 c2 12TcEm
Loooopoved it!"!
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