for Civilized Beasts8/27/2012 c1 
13Aspergian Mind
Man, oh, man. It's been four months since my Birthday and still haven't commented on my present.
Let's start with saying, glad to have my character back. Oddly resembling my unexciting plight at being back and forth between my parent's house and my apartment over on campus. Though not as severely of course, I felt lonely to the where it felt pointless to send messages to everyone I know of is on vacation.
So having someone as impersonal as a blank sheen helmet watching over you is not any better.
Now just like me returning to college, Len Roberts is back into the same action again. Hmm, this ironically couldn't have come at a better time. I swear the following reviews will come sooner, this college routine is actually motivating me more on other things.
13Aspergian MindMan, oh, man. It's been four months since my Birthday and still haven't commented on my present.
Let's start with saying, glad to have my character back. Oddly resembling my unexciting plight at being back and forth between my parent's house and my apartment over on campus. Though not as severely of course, I felt lonely to the where it felt pointless to send messages to everyone I know of is on vacation.
So having someone as impersonal as a blank sheen helmet watching over you is not any better.
Now just like me returning to college, Len Roberts is back into the same action again. Hmm, this ironically couldn't have come at a better time. I swear the following reviews will come sooner, this college routine is actually motivating me more on other things.
6/29/2012 c5 angelus288
Nice to see an update.
But, why are the sangheili making a deal with humans, I mean they believe that we are a affront to their gods that must be destroyed. Also what kind of rifles were the insurrectionists giving to the sangheili? Human rifles? It was said in the Ghosts of Onyx that the sangheili would rather die than touch a fully-loaded assault rifle lying at their feet.
I hope the next update doesn't take as long you left it a a bit of a cliffhanger.
Nice to see an update.
But, why are the sangheili making a deal with humans, I mean they believe that we are a affront to their gods that must be destroyed. Also what kind of rifles were the insurrectionists giving to the sangheili? Human rifles? It was said in the Ghosts of Onyx that the sangheili would rather die than touch a fully-loaded assault rifle lying at their feet.
I hope the next update doesn't take as long you left it a a bit of a cliffhanger.
4/28/2012 c1 angelus288
it's nice to see you back with halo. On the story the chapter seems short and to pacing is pretty fast. Also Lewis seemed to have been beating pretty quickly for a spartan. I know that he's a SPARTAN-III and they're not nearly as effective in combat as the SPARTAN-IIs, but I think a spartan would last a bit longer. Not that I'm complaining about a spartan being killed, one thing that often irked me about halo stories was that fact that writers often tend to wank the hell out of the spartans making them overly powerful. The Zulu Company series by Raptor-19 is a shining example of this. Also if I remember correctly from Left Behind on deviantart, is this going to be entire from Len's point of view, is that right?
it's nice to see you back with halo. On the story the chapter seems short and to pacing is pretty fast. Also Lewis seemed to have been beating pretty quickly for a spartan. I know that he's a SPARTAN-III and they're not nearly as effective in combat as the SPARTAN-IIs, but I think a spartan would last a bit longer. Not that I'm complaining about a spartan being killed, one thing that often irked me about halo stories was that fact that writers often tend to wank the hell out of the spartans making them overly powerful. The Zulu Company series by Raptor-19 is a shining example of this. Also if I remember correctly from Left Behind on deviantart, is this going to be entire from Len's point of view, is that right?