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23AmethystWren
This makes sense. Actual sense. Ebony doesn't seem like such a Mary-Sue, there's already a rivalry with Willow, and it all makes so much more SENSE!
23AmethystWrenThis makes sense. Actual sense. Ebony doesn't seem like such a Mary-Sue, there's already a rivalry with Willow, and it all makes so much more SENSE!
1/3 c1 Guest
Aha this is so good! AHH I love it so funny!
If you like my immortal you should totally check this out!
SO funny!
watch?vPSk9NV_d828
Aha this is so good! AHH I love it so funny!
If you like my immortal you should totally check this out!
SO funny!
watch?vPSk9NV_d828
12/29/2012 c2 Umbra de Lustitiae
...WOW! You've seriously made this story actually readable! XD The original "Ebony/Enoby" was horrible. But you've made her so much better! I kinda like your version, sweet and cool about stuff, not rude and just a damn bitch.
:) Please update soon!
...WOW! You've seriously made this story actually readable! XD The original "Ebony/Enoby" was horrible. But you've made her so much better! I kinda like your version, sweet and cool about stuff, not rude and just a damn bitch.
:) Please update soon!
12/26/2012 c2 1LonelyStar and GoldenDragon
Nice. I'm actually liking it. You're doing a good job with making Ebony seem like a real character. Half of the original My Immortal I didn't understand due to Tara's horrible spelling, and the other half was a load of dung, but this is really good.
1LonelyStar and GoldenDragonNice. I'm actually liking it. You're doing a good job with making Ebony seem like a real character. Half of the original My Immortal I didn't understand due to Tara's horrible spelling, and the other half was a load of dung, but this is really good.
11/5/2012 c1 11LesMisLover88
This is really good, especially considering what you had to work with! Great job!
11LesMisLover88This is really good, especially considering what you had to work with! Great job!
8/28/2012 c1 4demonbarber14
You have just turned straw into gold.
Scratch that-you have just turned fresh dog droppings into gold.
Hats off, my friend, and I can't wait for more!
4demonbarber14You have just turned straw into gold.
Scratch that-you have just turned fresh dog droppings into gold.
Hats off, my friend, and I can't wait for more!
6/22/2012 c2 8mouch30
I...I...I ACTUALLY WANT TO READ THIS! You've turned the worst fic in the world to something worth reading! Amazing job, please update soon!
8mouch30I...I...I ACTUALLY WANT TO READ THIS! You've turned the worst fic in the world to something worth reading! Amazing job, please update soon!
6/12/2012 c2 ShineStrong26
You NEED to continue this. You make this story actually worth reading. Also, a little suggestion. Maybe Draco could actually be the real Draco, but he's under the influence of some weird potion that he eventually breaks free of and reverts back to the Draco we know and love.
Can't wait to see more. plz update sune kk fangz.
You NEED to continue this. You make this story actually worth reading. Also, a little suggestion. Maybe Draco could actually be the real Draco, but he's under the influence of some weird potion that he eventually breaks free of and reverts back to the Draco we know and love.
Can't wait to see more. plz update sune kk fangz.
5/11/2012 c2 2cryptologicalMystic
...wow. Just wow. You've managed to turn a horrible fanfic into something I actually want to read...
2cryptologicalMystic...wow. Just wow. You've managed to turn a horrible fanfic into something I actually want to read...
5/4/2012 c1 7NekoEva13
Good story so far. It's a good first for a soon to be full story keep up the writing.
-L.
7NekoEva13Good story so far. It's a good first for a soon to be full story keep up the writing.
-L.
4/29/2012 c2 1SilentFrenchNight
You actually put thought into this! I'm proud, I truly am. I hope you update soon 'cause this is truly a great story. I bet even Tara's original flamers would like this. Maybe you could fix that other story like My Immortal. I can't remember the name though. Oh well, doesn't matter now.
-Hunny
1SilentFrenchNightYou actually put thought into this! I'm proud, I truly am. I hope you update soon 'cause this is truly a great story. I bet even Tara's original flamers would like this. Maybe you could fix that other story like My Immortal. I can't remember the name though. Oh well, doesn't matter now.
-Hunny
4/29/2012 c2 Hi
This is actually ... really good!
You have turned a piece of bull radish into something which is - while not the best - alright.
I'm sorry, but I won't be reading this/waiting for updates/etc because even thought you've made what was a pile of fish so much better... well, it's still the same story (pretty much), same characters (pretty much) and uhm, I just don't like reading this sort of thing. It's not personal.
(By 'this sort of thing' I mean the whole 'Days of our lives' type soap opera. Erm. I'm not trying to insult you, it's just - she's still a lot of a Mary Sue, despite becoming less of one.)
But well done for piquing my interest and doing such a wonderful job so far!
This is actually ... really good!
You have turned a piece of bull radish into something which is - while not the best - alright.
I'm sorry, but I won't be reading this/waiting for updates/etc because even thought you've made what was a pile of fish so much better... well, it's still the same story (pretty much), same characters (pretty much) and uhm, I just don't like reading this sort of thing. It's not personal.
(By 'this sort of thing' I mean the whole 'Days of our lives' type soap opera. Erm. I'm not trying to insult you, it's just - she's still a lot of a Mary Sue, despite becoming less of one.)
But well done for piquing my interest and doing such a wonderful job so far!
4/29/2012 c1 1Ashlyn Malfoy
Can you please send me the link (PM) of My Immortal? I never actually read it before...
1Ashlyn MalfoyCan you please send me the link (PM) of My Immortal? I never actually read it before...
4/28/2012 c1 1SilentFrenchNight
I like it! You turned this piece of crap into something good! I'm impressed. Awesome job! Plus, I'm new here so your story is the first one I'm going to favorite.
-Hunny
1SilentFrenchNightI like it! You turned this piece of crap into something good! I'm impressed. Awesome job! Plus, I'm new here so your story is the first one I'm going to favorite.
-Hunny