for Smile9/23/2012 c1 BlueKaZeBlack
I really, truly, loved this with all my heart! It got me to smile and the plot itself was just too great! I have fallen in love with your writing!
I really, truly, loved this with all my heart! It got me to smile and the plot itself was just too great! I have fallen in love with your writing!
6/13/2012 c1 jun
that was great i loved it! :D
that was great i loved it! :D
5/27/2012 c1 Starry Night
Kyaaaaaaaaaa! Kyaaaaaaaaa! OMFG! OMFG! Zero-chan is too damn freakin' CUTE, ADORABLE and ENDEARING! I mean goshhhh no doubt Kaname-sama can't resist his cuteness...who can anyway? LOL Being tsundere and blushing like that OMG! Am I flying to heaven? XD This is so splendid and thank you so much dearest for making such a fluffy and kawaii story! Zero-chan is the perfect uke ever and I LOVE it so much it hurt! :D Kaname-sama also make such a perfect seme ever!
Btw, I j don't know whether you already know this or not but just to remind you that you should change your summary which stating ZeroxKaname into KanamexZero instead because obviously our Zero-chan here is the uke! (Thank goodness for that!). By writing ZeroxKaname instead of KanamexZero is totally misleading your readers. ZeroxKaname means Zero is the seme, the one who topping (often take the lead) Kaname who is the uke, the one being topped whereas KanamexZero means vice versa (Kaname topping Zero). Just remember that any name in front of the x is the seme and the name after the x is the uke. Editing your summary will not only benefit yourself but also the readers as well. Since this story is BL, most of yaoi fans tend to be picky about their pairing position while some don't but it's usually the former. Therefore, when you say it's a ZeroxKaname, you'll attract minority of VK yaoi fan, who are ZeroxKaname (Zeka) fan to read your story but you'll eventually let them down because the actual pairing in your story is totally the opposite. Meanwhile, you already lost the attention from majority of VK yaoi fan, who are KanamexZero (Kaze) fan who are looking for KanamexZero story to read since the beginning you published this story because you stated that this is a ZeroxKaname story. Thus, it's better to edit your summary in order to avoid misleading your readers.
All in all, I really enjoy reading your story and thanks to old habit of mine to scroll down the whole story first to see whether it's KanamexZero or not even though the summary state otherwise. I'm so glad to know that it's actually KanamexZero because ZeroxKaname is not my cup of tea at all. Anyway, please write more Kaze stories because I would be delight to read more form you! :D
Kyaaaaaaaaaa! Kyaaaaaaaaa! OMFG! OMFG! Zero-chan is too damn freakin' CUTE, ADORABLE and ENDEARING! I mean goshhhh no doubt Kaname-sama can't resist his cuteness...who can anyway? LOL Being tsundere and blushing like that OMG! Am I flying to heaven? XD This is so splendid and thank you so much dearest for making such a fluffy and kawaii story! Zero-chan is the perfect uke ever and I LOVE it so much it hurt! :D Kaname-sama also make such a perfect seme ever!
Btw, I j don't know whether you already know this or not but just to remind you that you should change your summary which stating ZeroxKaname into KanamexZero instead because obviously our Zero-chan here is the uke! (Thank goodness for that!). By writing ZeroxKaname instead of KanamexZero is totally misleading your readers. ZeroxKaname means Zero is the seme, the one who topping (often take the lead) Kaname who is the uke, the one being topped whereas KanamexZero means vice versa (Kaname topping Zero). Just remember that any name in front of the x is the seme and the name after the x is the uke. Editing your summary will not only benefit yourself but also the readers as well. Since this story is BL, most of yaoi fans tend to be picky about their pairing position while some don't but it's usually the former. Therefore, when you say it's a ZeroxKaname, you'll attract minority of VK yaoi fan, who are ZeroxKaname (Zeka) fan to read your story but you'll eventually let them down because the actual pairing in your story is totally the opposite. Meanwhile, you already lost the attention from majority of VK yaoi fan, who are KanamexZero (Kaze) fan who are looking for KanamexZero story to read since the beginning you published this story because you stated that this is a ZeroxKaname story. Thus, it's better to edit your summary in order to avoid misleading your readers.
All in all, I really enjoy reading your story and thanks to old habit of mine to scroll down the whole story first to see whether it's KanamexZero or not even though the summary state otherwise. I'm so glad to know that it's actually KanamexZero because ZeroxKaname is not my cup of tea at all. Anyway, please write more Kaze stories because I would be delight to read more form you! :D
4/29/2012 c1 M.P.Lamb
Aww this was so sweet and I am really glad that there was a happy ending.
Aww this was so sweet and I am really glad that there was a happy ending.
4/29/2012 c1 
19RikusChika778
This was so precious especially at the end! If only they would do that in the Manga it would send all heads reeling. Good job!
19RikusChika778This was so precious especially at the end! If only they would do that in the Manga it would send all heads reeling. Good job!
4/29/2012 c1 Kitty
Aw, u make me so scare. I thought this story would end with a sad ending and bitter smile. So glad i was wrong. Any way, the story is so cute. Thanks for writing
Aw, u make me so scare. I thought this story would end with a sad ending and bitter smile. So glad i was wrong. Any way, the story is so cute. Thanks for writing