for For a Better Tomorrow8/25/2012 c3 Kraut007
I love this story.
Jims revolution with Tychus and Kerrigan in his team.
Hope that you will continue this fine fiction.
I love this story.
Jims revolution with Tychus and Kerrigan in his team.
Hope that you will continue this fine fiction.
6/22/2012 c3 
2Sigma Hyperon
Whoa... Im really interested as to what is in that chrysialis...can't wait for your next update!
2Sigma HyperonWhoa... Im really interested as to what is in that chrysialis...can't wait for your next update!
5/30/2012 c2 Random117860
So Raynors going to spring Tychus and a bunch of prisoners from New Folsom that's an intresting idea. I noticed that you're also adding the Protoss and Zerg storyline into your fic does that mean your going to write from all three species pov ? So far so good keep it up
So Raynors going to spring Tychus and a bunch of prisoners from New Folsom that's an intresting idea. I noticed that you're also adding the Protoss and Zerg storyline into your fic does that mean your going to write from all three species pov ? So far so good keep it up
5/15/2012 c2 1Ragnarok666
With regards to the new agent of the swarm, then I actually hope you don't use Nova for it.
If you had read up on the book Starcraft Ghost: Nova, you would have known that her story is every bit as traumatizing as Kerrigan's.
If you haven't, just check out my fic and look at chapter 52, I put it all there, and you're free to use the information from there to help yours if you choose to put Nova into your fic.
However, if you're going to do that, the time setting wouldn't be a good idea right now. Since this is taking place only after New Gettysburg, it means we're still in the year 2500, which means as of this moment, Nova is only 15 years old.
1Ragnarok666With regards to the new agent of the swarm, then I actually hope you don't use Nova for it.
If you had read up on the book Starcraft Ghost: Nova, you would have known that her story is every bit as traumatizing as Kerrigan's.
If you haven't, just check out my fic and look at chapter 52, I put it all there, and you're free to use the information from there to help yours if you choose to put Nova into your fic.
However, if you're going to do that, the time setting wouldn't be a good idea right now. Since this is taking place only after New Gettysburg, it means we're still in the year 2500, which means as of this moment, Nova is only 15 years old.
5/15/2012 c2 2Andrigno
this is a good continuing, but you need a bit of thicknening of lore in some places, and you need help in the Protoss, they are estrictly formal especially in the Templar Caste, a Helsman in the Protoss would never dare to call his Superior Commander, by his given name, but rather by his title of High Executor, for better comunication if you want send me by PM some way of isntant messaging and i will help you
2Andrignothis is a good continuing, but you need a bit of thicknening of lore in some places, and you need help in the Protoss, they are estrictly formal especially in the Templar Caste, a Helsman in the Protoss would never dare to call his Superior Commander, by his given name, but rather by his title of High Executor, for better comunication if you want send me by PM some way of isntant messaging and i will help you
4/30/2012 c1 Mozez101
Pretty good start to a story. It's well written and fun to read. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Pretty good start to a story. It's well written and fun to read. Looking forward to your next chapter.
4/30/2012 c1 Ordo Rolanberry
Definitely got potential this one. Eager to see what happens next. Probably wrong but that wouldn't happen to be a certain November Annabella Terra that is inhabiting the Chrysalises in Kerrigan's place would it?
Definitely got potential this one. Eager to see what happens next. Probably wrong but that wouldn't happen to be a certain November Annabella Terra that is inhabiting the Chrysalises in Kerrigan's place would it?
4/30/2012 c1 Andrigno
this is an interesting begining quite what i had planned to continuing my not-quite mine oneshot, well written, well ploted for now and good, you only need a bit more of depth and more SC lore to add to this one, also a beta will help in some parts ,if you want one ,only have to sed me a PM if you want
this is an interesting begining quite what i had planned to continuing my not-quite mine oneshot, well written, well ploted for now and good, you only need a bit more of depth and more SC lore to add to this one, also a beta will help in some parts ,if you want one ,only have to sed me a PM if you want
4/29/2012 c1 Silent Humanoid
Has potential. Eagerly waiting for the next chpt. Can you give ur readers an estimate of your update rate pls?
Has potential. Eagerly waiting for the next chpt. Can you give ur readers an estimate of your update rate pls?
4/29/2012 c1 2Sigma Hyperon
I am VERY INTERESTED in this.
My suggestion: CONTINUE. I will give you suggestions more later on as I see what your direction would be. Pls don't stop writing and don't let the amount of reviews discourage you. :)
2Sigma HyperonI am VERY INTERESTED in this.
My suggestion: CONTINUE. I will give you suggestions more later on as I see what your direction would be. Pls don't stop writing and don't let the amount of reviews discourage you. :)
4/29/2012 c1 1Ragnarok666
Well it does make a different revolutionary point from this, but it's not going to stop the Zerg from targeting Kerrigan. The Overmind needs her infested to carry out its plans for preventing armageddon.
It's still a good start, but will need to see more before I can tell where this is going.
1Ragnarok666Well it does make a different revolutionary point from this, but it's not going to stop the Zerg from targeting Kerrigan. The Overmind needs her infested to carry out its plans for preventing armageddon.
It's still a good start, but will need to see more before I can tell where this is going.