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PLS UPDATE IM DYING HEERE
PLS UPDATE IM DYING HEERE
6/12 c2 
27Trylan Aire
I'm so glad you're continuing with this! I love this story so much, and I'm looking forward to future chapters!
27Trylan AireI'm so glad you're continuing with this! I love this story so much, and I'm looking forward to future chapters!
6/12 c2 Epic Society
I'm totally not sure who the, "plagerizer" is but I remember reading this same exact story a could of months, maybe even a year ago. I fell in love with that story and I remember it going about 5 chapters more than this one. I don't know if this is the same author or a different one, and I also don't know which story was plagerized. Please give me some clarity! :'(
I'm totally not sure who the, "plagerizer" is but I remember reading this same exact story a could of months, maybe even a year ago. I fell in love with that story and I remember it going about 5 chapters more than this one. I don't know if this is the same author or a different one, and I also don't know which story was plagerized. Please give me some clarity! :'(
6/11 c3 A Redhead
Plagiarism sucks, I know (even if I can't spell it :). But I still don't think its necessary to make such a big deal about her being a terrible person and everything. She's made a mistake and obviously regrets it, but with you giving out all her information and encouraging people to gang up on her, I think your making it hard for her to come back from that mistake and continue writing. It was a horrible choice on her part, but don't sink to her level. Look back at some of the things you've said. You have a huge right to be upset and angry, no doubt about it, but don't let her choices make you send people to be mean to her like she was to you. I definitely don't agree with her, and I really don't like the decisions she's made, but I do like you a ton! You are an amazing writer, probably an amazing person, which is why I wanted to tell you this. I hope you don't let her, or me, if this upsets you, get you down, and whatever you do, keep writing this awesome stuff!
Plagiarism sucks, I know (even if I can't spell it :). But I still don't think its necessary to make such a big deal about her being a terrible person and everything. She's made a mistake and obviously regrets it, but with you giving out all her information and encouraging people to gang up on her, I think your making it hard for her to come back from that mistake and continue writing. It was a horrible choice on her part, but don't sink to her level. Look back at some of the things you've said. You have a huge right to be upset and angry, no doubt about it, but don't let her choices make you send people to be mean to her like she was to you. I definitely don't agree with her, and I really don't like the decisions she's made, but I do like you a ton! You are an amazing writer, probably an amazing person, which is why I wanted to tell you this. I hope you don't let her, or me, if this upsets you, get you down, and whatever you do, keep writing this awesome stuff!
6/12 c1 4Golden Amethyst
I love it! The plot is great, and I like how you described the characters. I would think that you could maybe expand the vocabulary? I saw "arrogant" many times and it was a bit repetitive. That's all the constructive criticism I can think of.
4Golden AmethystI love it! The plot is great, and I like how you described the characters. I would think that you could maybe expand the vocabulary? I saw "arrogant" many times and it was a bit repetitive. That's all the constructive criticism I can think of.
6/10 c1 Girl
Great great great!
Great great great!
6/10 c3 Guest
Yeah don't stop this was really good please do not cancel! I like the whole change thing and how the arena thing you went to soccer. Who knows any other changes you will make.
Yeah don't stop this was really good please do not cancel! I like the whole change thing and how the arena thing you went to soccer. Who knows any other changes you will make.
6/10 c3 Rayrayrayray
YAY! Thank you so much for deciding to continue this story! I saw it back up and was so excited that you'd continued it, but I just turned out angry when you said someone had copied your work. Well you showed that copy cat! Thanks gain for doing this, woot korra!
YAY! Thank you so much for deciding to continue this story! I saw it back up and was so excited that you'd continued it, but I just turned out angry when you said someone had copied your work. Well you showed that copy cat! Thanks gain for doing this, woot korra!
6/10 c3 1JayLiyah
Oh thank the Lord for this. I mean, I may have just discovered you and this story like yesterday, but I'm already excited at the prospect of reading more. I'm very happy for you that you have some wonderful, loyal followers who would defend you, and also for the fact that the little plagiarist took her copy down. Thank you for deciding to continue the story and I'll be waiting with bated breath for the day I come across more chapters. All the best to you.
1JayLiyahOh thank the Lord for this. I mean, I may have just discovered you and this story like yesterday, but I'm already excited at the prospect of reading more. I'm very happy for you that you have some wonderful, loyal followers who would defend you, and also for the fact that the little plagiarist took her copy down. Thank you for deciding to continue the story and I'll be waiting with bated breath for the day I come across more chapters. All the best to you.
6/10 c3 13SNOGIRL
Oh, my gosh! I'm so glad that you're continuing your story, and I do know about getting back into practice too. Hope to see this story up and going soon!
SG.
13SNOGIRLOh, my gosh! I'm so glad that you're continuing your story, and I do know about getting back into practice too. Hope to see this story up and going soon!
SG.
6/10 c3 6mellarkarry
I'm so glad you decided to continue writing this! Can't wait for the next chapter, and hope that nobody else plagiarizes your work :P
6mellarkarryI'm so glad you decided to continue writing this! Can't wait for the next chapter, and hope that nobody else plagiarizes your work :P
6/10 c3 14trebleclef2011
I've missed you so much girl. Thanks for considering returning to this story...it was (and is) so good. Can't believe this happened, but thankfully it was fixed. You're awesome!
:)
-formerly iroh-licious
14trebleclef2011I've missed you so much girl. Thanks for considering returning to this story...it was (and is) so good. Can't believe this happened, but thankfully it was fixed. You're awesome!
:)
-formerly iroh-licious