for The Unexpected4/5 c8 Guest
Amazing story!
Amazing story!
4/4 c8 Guest
Amazing! Please continue! This is a very interesting view on Moriarty's character
Amazing! Please continue! This is a very interesting view on Moriarty's character
3/29 c8 
5Harmonybliss
Wow, this was very nicely written. The pairing here really seemed believable. The plot, and how everything pieced together was a relief. Although some bits seemed a bit out of character, or a few spelling mistakes here and there; also I found some descriptions were cut a bit short. Overall though I felt that you described Seb/Jim's relationship very, very well (to how BBC would have portrayed it) and I think you added the right elements in all the right places, and that's whats important in a fanfic, right? If you want specific areas that need improvement, I'd love to help you out, but otherwise you're doing a great job. I hope you aren't leaving it anytime soon and I can't wait to see what happens next! 3
5HarmonyblissWow, this was very nicely written. The pairing here really seemed believable. The plot, and how everything pieced together was a relief. Although some bits seemed a bit out of character, or a few spelling mistakes here and there; also I found some descriptions were cut a bit short. Overall though I felt that you described Seb/Jim's relationship very, very well (to how BBC would have portrayed it) and I think you added the right elements in all the right places, and that's whats important in a fanfic, right? If you want specific areas that need improvement, I'd love to help you out, but otherwise you're doing a great job. I hope you aren't leaving it anytime soon and I can't wait to see what happens next! 3
3/18 c8 3DamonandElena4ever
just found this story and oh my god it's awesome *-* Please continue this soon I can't wait for the next chapter :)
3DamonandElena4everjust found this story and oh my god it's awesome *-* Please continue this soon I can't wait for the next chapter :)
3/9 c8 Guest
this is a work of genius! jim and john should totaly move in together, it would drive sherlock crazy! i cannot contain my excitment over your next awrsome chapter to come!
this is a work of genius! jim and john should totaly move in together, it would drive sherlock crazy! i cannot contain my excitment over your next awrsome chapter to come!
3/9 c8 Guest
this is incredible! john and jim all the way! your brilliant!
this is incredible! john and jim all the way! your brilliant!
1/29 c8 13VashtaNeradaCaan
May be you could update soon ? xP looking forward for a new chapter :)
Good luck!
13VashtaNeradaCaanMay be you could update soon ? xP looking forward for a new chapter :)
Good luck!
8/3/2012 c8 Guest
Lovely, can't wait to read more
Lovely, can't wait to read more
7/13/2012 c8 Posh American
I hope you update this darling story soon.
I hope you update this darling story soon.