for A Man and a Fallen Angel5/15/2012 c5 
2triptpol85
Good chapter but they seem to be getting shorter and shorter. This is a ton of potential here that I would love to see you expand on . . . hope to see another update from you soon.
2triptpol85Good chapter but they seem to be getting shorter and shorter. This is a ton of potential here that I would love to see you expand on . . . hope to see another update from you soon.
5/15/2012 c4 triptpol85
Very interesting turn of events. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Very interesting turn of events. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
5/15/2012 c3 triptpol85
Another good enjoyable chapter. I would like to see them be a little longer but I like the pace and they are well written so its all good.
Another good enjoyable chapter. I would like to see them be a little longer but I like the pace and they are well written so its all good.
5/15/2012 c2 triptpol85
AMAZING chapter, I love the pace and dialog of the characters. I really hope you draw this story out and make it an epic adventure. If you need a beta, or someone to bounce off ideas with just send me a message!
AMAZING chapter, I love the pace and dialog of the characters. I really hope you draw this story out and make it an epic adventure. If you need a beta, or someone to bounce off ideas with just send me a message!
5/15/2012 c1 triptpol85
Good first chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next. Please keep this story coming, Trip/T'Pol forever!
Good first chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next. Please keep this story coming, Trip/T'Pol forever!
5/13/2012 c5 4Zero Credibility
The honesty here feels as if it's done a lot to repair the damage done by Trip's heartlessness in the kitchen, but I'm still alarmed at how little he seems to understand T'Pol. Why is he so ready to let her go, and to assume the worst? Man up, Trip, your T'hai'la needs your support and understanding.
4Zero CredibilityThe honesty here feels as if it's done a lot to repair the damage done by Trip's heartlessness in the kitchen, but I'm still alarmed at how little he seems to understand T'Pol. Why is he so ready to let her go, and to assume the worst? Man up, Trip, your T'hai'la needs your support and understanding.
5/13/2012 c5 29Asso
Mh... do we have to believe that Vulcans are unable to cope with grief? Honestly, I don't think so, and T'Pol should rather understand that Trip is prompt to help her.
But, this said, it's really appreciable the dramacity of this short chapter.
I am persuaded that T'Pol will understand; and then... finally she talked of love, for Pete's sake!
29AssoMh... do we have to believe that Vulcans are unable to cope with grief? Honestly, I don't think so, and T'Pol should rather understand that Trip is prompt to help her.
But, this said, it's really appreciable the dramacity of this short chapter.
I am persuaded that T'Pol will understand; and then... finally she talked of love, for Pete's sake!
5/11/2012 c5 17Lord Vukodlak
I do not believe the Fullara can work it failed before when she was reminded of the repressed event. In this case everyone knows what happened a complete stranger could recognize her and offer condolences.
17Lord VukodlakI do not believe the Fullara can work it failed before when she was reminded of the repressed event. In this case everyone knows what happened a complete stranger could recognize her and offer condolences.
5/10/2012 c4 4Zero Credibility
This is very well written, but painful to read.
I wish Trip had reassured T'Pol that he would always love her regardless of her choice and would not wish to forget her OR baby Elizabeth - rather than leaving her alone when she needed his support the most.
4Zero CredibilityThis is very well written, but painful to read.
I wish Trip had reassured T'Pol that he would always love her regardless of her choice and would not wish to forget her OR baby Elizabeth - rather than leaving her alone when she needed his support the most.
5/3/2012 c3 29Asso
I apologize if it took me so long to put a comment. Actually I've read all the chapters up to this, but I preferred to wait and see how things were continuing in order to have a global vision, before saying anything.
This chapter, however, prompted me to pronounce myself on it, because it is really nice and well written.
Bravo.
29AssoI apologize if it took me so long to put a comment. Actually I've read all the chapters up to this, but I preferred to wait and see how things were continuing in order to have a global vision, before saying anything.
This chapter, however, prompted me to pronounce myself on it, because it is really nice and well written.
Bravo.
5/1/2012 c2 4Zero Credibility
It's a painful situation for both of them, but thank goodness they seem to be preparing to face it together. I just hope Trip doesn't screw things up due to wallowing in self-pity.
Just one minor point - reading it in the current tense feels a bit awkward, I've got used to the convention of telling stories in the past tense.
4Zero CredibilityIt's a painful situation for both of them, but thank goodness they seem to be preparing to face it together. I just hope Trip doesn't screw things up due to wallowing in self-pity.
Just one minor point - reading it in the current tense feels a bit awkward, I've got used to the convention of telling stories in the past tense.
5/1/2012 c2 48LoyaulteMeLie
There's an unbelievable amount of pain washing to and fro in this relationship, and you've captured the sense of it very well: Trip utterly unable to cope, and showing it, and T'Pol equally unable to cope and not showing it at all. Horribly likely and lifelike. Well done.
48LoyaulteMeLieThere's an unbelievable amount of pain washing to and fro in this relationship, and you've captured the sense of it very well: Trip utterly unable to cope, and showing it, and T'Pol equally unable to cope and not showing it at all. Horribly likely and lifelike. Well done.