for Waking Up11/19/2012 c1 MissPriss
Now I know your not doing the whole book but can you at least do the part were they go into Fours fearlandscape?
Now I know your not doing the whole book but can you at least do the part were they go into Fours fearlandscape?
9/17/2012 c1 millie-alice
I really like this. You have a very nice writing style and I would love to see more of these short chapters in Tobias's POV. I would love to see the chapter where Tris is attacked by Peter, Drew and Al, the chapter where Tobias and Tris go through his landscape or the chapter in Insurgent where Tobias catches Tris trying to save Jeanine. :)x
I really like this. You have a very nice writing style and I would love to see more of these short chapters in Tobias's POV. I would love to see the chapter where Tris is attacked by Peter, Drew and Al, the chapter where Tobias and Tris go through his landscape or the chapter in Insurgent where Tobias catches Tris trying to save Jeanine. :)x
8/19/2012 c1 mercury
Cool! Please write more! This is awesome. Thanks!
Cool! Please write more! This is awesome. Thanks!
8/7/2012 c1 
6Fallen990
Probably the best one i have read yet! 3 i love it! you kept him in character and your writing was clear and eligable!
6Fallen990Probably the best one i have read yet! 3 i love it! you kept him in character and your writing was clear and eligable!
7/17/2012 c1 Percabetting
OMG! That's the only thing I can say at this momenttt! It's soooo greattttttt, i loved ittttt! I reeeally would love to read about Four's POV from the chapter when Tris is attacked by al, drew and Peter, (and the chapter after)
OMG! That's the only thing I can say at this momenttt! It's soooo greattttttt, i loved ittttt! I reeeally would love to read about Four's POV from the chapter when Tris is attacked by al, drew and Peter, (and the chapter after)
6/6/2012 c1 34irmaida
Wow! That was a very enjoyable, quick and interesting read. Thank you for writing!
34irmaidaWow! That was a very enjoyable, quick and interesting read. Thank you for writing!
5/27/2012 c1 DianneV
This is the best Four's perspective I've ever read in a fanfic. Excelently done. You captured the his character just perfectly, staying true to the original story and the hints in the books. I've enjoyed this so much and I woul like it to be more than just one-shot. Maybe you could write other important scenes from Four's perspective? Anyway, thank you for the amazing writing.
This is the best Four's perspective I've ever read in a fanfic. Excelently done. You captured the his character just perfectly, staying true to the original story and the hints in the books. I've enjoyed this so much and I woul like it to be more than just one-shot. Maybe you could write other important scenes from Four's perspective? Anyway, thank you for the amazing writing.
5/11/2012 c1 whoissamwho
Great job! Just how I pictured Tobias' view on life as a dauntless! Will you make another chapter? Xxx
Great job! Just how I pictured Tobias' view on life as a dauntless! Will you make another chapter? Xxx
5/6/2012 c1 4Katniss Everdeena
O_O
That was amazingly beautiful.
Pet Peeve of mine though: You said fraction instead of faction. :P
~Katniss Everdeena~
4Katniss EverdeenaO_O
That was amazingly beautiful.
Pet Peeve of mine though: You said fraction instead of faction. :P
~Katniss Everdeena~
4/30/2012 c1 emms
i thought it was really good! i love four fan fics but this one was different, id never thought of him being "asleep" and i LOVE the idea of tris waking him up! great story, well written too :)
i thought it was really good! i love four fan fics but this one was different, id never thought of him being "asleep" and i LOVE the idea of tris waking him up! great story, well written too :)