for Crush2/17 c5 reejero
I feel so bad for Daniel. I can't wait to see Lance's reaction. Excited to read some more
I feel so bad for Daniel. I can't wait to see Lance's reaction. Excited to read some more
12/17/2012 c5 Layra
Great chapter & please update more
Great chapter & please update more
7/8/2012 c5 kaycee m
Update soon
Update soon
6/1/2012 c5 
8SallyOn
So funny! Only a teen age boy would think the middle of a battle is when to ask a girl out! And the miscommuncation with Vince was hilarous! I laughed so hard, and then when Vince came up to Daniel at the end - priceless!
Enjoyed Allura and Pidge in the Control Room - I think they need a Q/A person for Pidge's upgrades.
Nice touch to have Lance smile at Larmina at the wrong time! I can so hardly wait to see how this all unravels!
Don't like the look of that purple sand!
8SallyOnSo funny! Only a teen age boy would think the middle of a battle is when to ask a girl out! And the miscommuncation with Vince was hilarous! I laughed so hard, and then when Vince came up to Daniel at the end - priceless!
Enjoyed Allura and Pidge in the Control Room - I think they need a Q/A person for Pidge's upgrades.
Nice touch to have Lance smile at Larmina at the wrong time! I can so hardly wait to see how this all unravels!
Don't like the look of that purple sand!
5/31/2012 c5 Lance4Ever
Ok action continues not bad the threat is intresting. I feel that the cat is about to jump out of the bag wonder how Lance will respond and how Daniel will feel...:) Look forward to this. Also better on the words/sp you used throne(like you sit in) should have been thrown :) and saw you meant to say..to do and they were reversed. But much better the chairs were pretty funny when you thought about it but it worked for the action :) Update soon...
Ok action continues not bad the threat is intresting. I feel that the cat is about to jump out of the bag wonder how Lance will respond and how Daniel will feel...:) Look forward to this. Also better on the words/sp you used throne(like you sit in) should have been thrown :) and saw you meant to say..to do and they were reversed. But much better the chairs were pretty funny when you thought about it but it worked for the action :) Update soon...
5/30/2012 c4 SallyOn
Funny, funny, funny! Loved the miscommunciation with Hunk and Larmina - could so see that happening!
Lance's thoughts were great, and the bachelor party scene was just what Keith would do.
Lance's comment about sic(ing) Red on Vince and Daniel was worth a chuckle! I think it is going to get interesting between Lance and Larmina!
Poor Lotor! But I do love my boy Maahox!
Funny, funny, funny! Loved the miscommunciation with Hunk and Larmina - could so see that happening!
Lance's thoughts were great, and the bachelor party scene was just what Keith would do.
Lance's comment about sic(ing) Red on Vince and Daniel was worth a chuckle! I think it is going to get interesting between Lance and Larmina!
Poor Lotor! But I do love my boy Maahox!
5/29/2012 c4 Lance4Ever
ok nice little update action starting...and it feels like the cat is out of the bag...uh how much of an age difference is there between Lance & Larmina? Also noticed a few small typos/misspellings like Commander Keith Kocane...it's Kogane :) But this story still has my intrest feels so innocent your first love :) Thanks for the update.
ok nice little update action starting...and it feels like the cat is out of the bag...uh how much of an age difference is there between Lance & Larmina? Also noticed a few small typos/misspellings like Commander Keith Kocane...it's Kogane :) But this story still has my intrest feels so innocent your first love :) Thanks for the update.
5/29/2012 c4 1blue7772011
You're back, I was getting a little worried by the way;)
Looks like we will see a little action now, how exciting!
1blue7772011You're back, I was getting a little worried by the way;)
Looks like we will see a little action now, how exciting!
5/13/2012 c3 8SallyOn
I always look forward to the next chapter with this story - it makes me laugh! The lines are great, and I can see everyone running around with the wrong idea!
Loved Pidge telling Daniel about flowers, and also how Lance had to remind Pidge of how famous he was!
Allura dealing with Larmina was funny, and I bet things will get interesting when the gang from Pollux arrives.
Very funny scene with Lance/Daniel, and the roses. Thanks for cheering up my Sunday evening!
8SallyOnI always look forward to the next chapter with this story - it makes me laugh! The lines are great, and I can see everyone running around with the wrong idea!
Loved Pidge telling Daniel about flowers, and also how Lance had to remind Pidge of how famous he was!
Allura dealing with Larmina was funny, and I bet things will get interesting when the gang from Pollux arrives.
Very funny scene with Lance/Daniel, and the roses. Thanks for cheering up my Sunday evening!
5/12/2012 c3 Lance4Ever
Ok so just me but don't you spell it Romelle? I noticed that part but this was shorter but no major issues. I am starting to feel bad for Daniel trying so hard and Larmina not giving him the time of day. Now I do hopw that at the end of the story Larmina does appreciate Daniel and maybe have a happy ending :)
Ok so just me but don't you spell it Romelle? I noticed that part but this was shorter but no major issues. I am starting to feel bad for Daniel trying so hard and Larmina not giving him the time of day. Now I do hopw that at the end of the story Larmina does appreciate Daniel and maybe have a happy ending :)
5/6/2012 c2 1blue7772011
Funny stuff...! I'm getting the vibe that Pidge is getting himself into so much trouble. This is going to be good.
1blue7772011Funny stuff...! I'm getting the vibe that Pidge is getting himself into so much trouble. This is going to be good.