for No Wonder5/4/2012 c1 Dreams and Fantasy
I really like this I have read some where Korra gets jealous but I liked this better.
I really like this I have read some where Korra gets jealous but I liked this better.
5/3/2012 c1
53JillRG
I suggest you read Jane Eyre (to give you hope) and Cyrano de Bergerac (for someone to identify with).
As for the fic, a very great read! The only thing that doesn't make sense to me is that Korra's about as beautiful as they come (so is Asami, of course, but in a different way). Of course, when you feel insecure like she does in your scenario, you don't think clearly, so I'm sorry for nitpicking.
Once again, great read!
53JillRGI suggest you read Jane Eyre (to give you hope) and Cyrano de Bergerac (for someone to identify with).
As for the fic, a very great read! The only thing that doesn't make sense to me is that Korra's about as beautiful as they come (so is Asami, of course, but in a different way). Of course, when you feel insecure like she does in your scenario, you don't think clearly, so I'm sorry for nitpicking.
Once again, great read!
5/1/2012 c1
2Evanna-118
LOL I love your fic, and I hope you write more! And don't search ugly friends XP someday a good guy would be with you, or that is what I hope 'cause if I have a crush in one, he would go with one of my friends (Sometimes I feel like “Forever alone” ) So don't worry, someday someone would be with you and maybe the guy in which I have a crush finally see me like something more than just a friend, and you write awesome and few people have that talent so... Showed!
PD: Sorry for the bad English, I am not good writing in this language XP.
2Evanna-118LOL I love your fic, and I hope you write more! And don't search ugly friends XP someday a good guy would be with you, or that is what I hope 'cause if I have a crush in one, he would go with one of my friends (Sometimes I feel like “Forever alone” ) So don't worry, someday someone would be with you and maybe the guy in which I have a crush finally see me like something more than just a friend, and you write awesome and few people have that talent so... Showed!
PD: Sorry for the bad English, I am not good writing in this language XP.
4/30/2012 c1 Guest
You should really contine this...PLEASE! IM BEGGING!
You should really contine this...PLEASE! IM BEGGING!
4/30/2012 c1 lobi
Haha Korea books that really caught my attention
Great story loved it
Haha Korea books that really caught my attention
Great story loved it
4/30/2012 c1 AwesomeAsami
Wow! This is really good for a first story. You did a great job keeping everyone in character. Can you continue it? Maybe make a bunch of one shots where Korra and Asami meet? I hope you can. I would, but I suck so bad at writing it's not even funny.
Wow! This is really good for a first story. You did a great job keeping everyone in character. Can you continue it? Maybe make a bunch of one shots where Korra and Asami meet? I hope you can. I would, but I suck so bad at writing it's not even funny.
4/30/2012 c1
28SweettFace
Awww is that a tear I feel? That was so sad, But it was also really good. :D
28SweettFaceAwww is that a tear I feel? That was so sad, But it was also really good. :D
4/30/2012 c1 MissFairyGodmother
Forgot to say this(too much ranting), but you should continue this! I liked it!
Forgot to say this(too much ranting), but you should continue this! I liked it!
4/30/2012 c1 MissFairyGodmother
Awww poor Korra! I can relate to this situation as well. I liked this, it showed a different side of Korra instead of just the badass avatar side (I still like that side though!). I don't trust Asami either, she's up to something! Either that or she's just a really nice and sweet boring character -_- And I'm so glad that I found someone who also thinks Korra is more beautiful than Asami (who wears to much make-up)! Why do people say she's manly? She's not manly, she's just a strong person, gosh! K rant over. Anyway, good job!
Awww poor Korra! I can relate to this situation as well. I liked this, it showed a different side of Korra instead of just the badass avatar side (I still like that side though!). I don't trust Asami either, she's up to something! Either that or she's just a really nice and sweet boring character -_- And I'm so glad that I found someone who also thinks Korra is more beautiful than Asami (who wears to much make-up)! Why do people say she's manly? She's not manly, she's just a strong person, gosh! K rant over. Anyway, good job!
