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5/4/2012 c1 Dreams and Fantasy
I really like this I have read some where Korra gets jealous but I liked this better.
5/3/2012 c1 53JillRG
I suggest you read Jane Eyre (to give you hope) and Cyrano de Bergerac (for someone to identify with).

As for the fic, a very great read! The only thing that doesn't make sense to me is that Korra's about as beautiful as they come (so is Asami, of course, but in a different way). Of course, when you feel insecure like she does in your scenario, you don't think clearly, so I'm sorry for nitpicking.

Once again, great read!
5/1/2012 c1 2Evanna-118
LOL I love your fic, and I hope you write more! And don't search ugly friends XP someday a good guy would be with you, or that is what I hope 'cause if I have a crush in one, he would go with one of my friends (Sometimes I feel like “Forever alone” ) So don't worry, someday someone would be with you and maybe the guy in which I have a crush finally see me like something more than just a friend, and you write awesome and few people have that talent so... Showed!

PD: Sorry for the bad English, I am not good writing in this language XP.
4/30/2012 c1 Guest
You should really contine this...PLEASE! IM BEGGING!
4/30/2012 c1 lobi
Haha Korea books that really caught my attention

Great story loved it
4/30/2012 c1 AwesomeAsami
Wow! This is really good for a first story. You did a great job keeping everyone in character. Can you continue it? Maybe make a bunch of one shots where Korra and Asami meet? I hope you can. I would, but I suck so bad at writing it's not even funny.
4/30/2012 c1 28SweettFace
Awww is that a tear I feel? That was so sad, But it was also really good. :D
4/30/2012 c1 MissFairyGodmother
Forgot to say this(too much ranting), but you should continue this! I liked it!
4/30/2012 c1 MissFairyGodmother
Awww poor Korra! I can relate to this situation as well. I liked this, it showed a different side of Korra instead of just the badass avatar side (I still like that side though!). I don't trust Asami either, she's up to something! Either that or she's just a really nice and sweet boring character -_- And I'm so glad that I found someone who also thinks Korra is more beautiful than Asami (who wears to much make-up)! Why do people say she's manly? She's not manly, she's just a strong person, gosh! K rant over. Anyway, good job!

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