for Only A Horizon5/23/2012 c1 
8Magic Words
-gross sobbing-
seriously, this is so beautiful. AUGH I HATE YOU. Welcome to fanfiction. May you continue to grace us with your beautiful words.
8Magic Words-gross sobbing-
seriously, this is so beautiful. AUGH I HATE YOU. Welcome to fanfiction. May you continue to grace us with your beautiful words.
5/22/2012 c1 11cyanide dragon
gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous. I love the tone and flow, so beautiful and sad, yet full of love and light at the end. Bravo!
11cyanide dragongorgeous gorgeous gorgeous. I love the tone and flow, so beautiful and sad, yet full of love and light at the end. Bravo!
5/22/2012 c1 fire-ferrets-number-one-fan
It took me a moment at first to really understand who the characters were, but the emotions in me just built up and built up until I just couldn't hold in the tears. You are a phenomenal writer, I hope you know that. It's truly a gift to evoke that much emotion into your readers. I'm so glad I found this. Thank you.
It took me a moment at first to really understand who the characters were, but the emotions in me just built up and built up until I just couldn't hold in the tears. You are a phenomenal writer, I hope you know that. It's truly a gift to evoke that much emotion into your readers. I'm so glad I found this. Thank you.
5/20/2012 c1 7BookWurm15
I don't know how I even made it that far.
Holy. Feelings.
12:13 A.M. I'm crying. Ohgod.
7BookWurm15I don't know how I even made it that far.
Holy. Feelings.
12:13 A.M. I'm crying. Ohgod.
5/20/2012 c1 2ChamomileTeaforMe
I'm just...Speechless. I can't even elaborate on how this story made me feel. That was just amazing...
2ChamomileTeaforMeI'm just...Speechless. I can't even elaborate on how this story made me feel. That was just amazing...
5/19/2012 c1 Anon E. Mousse
This fanfic hit me RIGHT IN THE FEELS *sob* It's really well-written, and I am not sure how many times I've read this already.
*sigh*
This fanfic hit me RIGHT IN THE FEELS *sob* It's really well-written, and I am not sure how many times I've read this already.
*sigh*
5/19/2012 c1 617Penny-Lane
OMG, you hit me right in the feels...I'm crying so hard right now, all these Makorra feelings.
And if this is a complete suckfest, I would love to see what you consider a good story...because this story is just so beautifully written I'm guessing a good story would be award winning...
PS:excuse my bad english
617Penny-LaneOMG, you hit me right in the feels...I'm crying so hard right now, all these Makorra feelings.
And if this is a complete suckfest, I would love to see what you consider a good story...because this story is just so beautifully written I'm guessing a good story would be award winning...
PS:excuse my bad english
5/19/2012 c1 20Destiny919
WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THAT. I AM CRYING HARDER THAN I HAVE IN AGES. GOD. I CAN'T. IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL AND SO SAD AND SO MAKORRA AND II CAAAAAN'TTTT.
20Destiny919WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THAT. I AM CRYING HARDER THAN I HAVE IN AGES. GOD. I CAN'T. IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL AND SO SAD AND SO MAKORRA AND II CAAAAAN'TTTT.
5/17/2012 c1 Ari
So, I NEVER review stories, but this one I had to. I have a performance tonight, and I wanted to sneak some makorra in just before I go on stage. Thanks for ruining my make up, but it was sooo worth it. Beautiful story; please keep writing.
So, I NEVER review stories, but this one I had to. I have a performance tonight, and I wanted to sneak some makorra in just before I go on stage. Thanks for ruining my make up, but it was sooo worth it. Beautiful story; please keep writing.
5/16/2012 c1 Cassie
You have made me SOB. My makeup is ruined now. But this was worth it. It was beautiful.
You have made me SOB. My makeup is ruined now. But this was worth it. It was beautiful.
5/11/2012 c1 13I Like Writing Romance
This was absolutely heartbreaking... I literally have no words better than that. I cried-a first for me.
Please write more Makorra, yours was excellent :)
13I Like Writing RomanceThis was absolutely heartbreaking... I literally have no words better than that. I cried-a first for me.
Please write more Makorra, yours was excellent :)
5/9/2012 c1 victoria gao
This was like the best fanfiction I've ever read. The first time read it was during journalsim class at school, my friend showed your story to me. My first impression after I read the part with Asami as the mother and Mako as the father, I wasn't really into it because I am team Makorra, so I was kinda disappointed. But then, when I got to the part that said that the Late Avatar Korra was the mother, I instantly fell in love with the story. LOVE IT!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
This was like the best fanfiction I've ever read. The first time read it was during journalsim class at school, my friend showed your story to me. My first impression after I read the part with Asami as the mother and Mako as the father, I wasn't really into it because I am team Makorra, so I was kinda disappointed. But then, when I got to the part that said that the Late Avatar Korra was the mother, I instantly fell in love with the story. LOVE IT!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
5/9/2012 c1 Life For Hire
I think this story just took my heart. Oh my. I can not stop thinking about it now. It's just so... heart-wrenching. The thought of this happening and oh god.
You got the emotions down so well and I can't believe this is your first piece. I just want more... You wrote is so well, and god, this was amazing. You should write some more because your writing is very nice. The transitions were flawless and it all flowed smoothly together.
I just... I love it and you just wrote something beautiful.
I think this story just took my heart. Oh my. I can not stop thinking about it now. It's just so... heart-wrenching. The thought of this happening and oh god.
You got the emotions down so well and I can't believe this is your first piece. I just want more... You wrote is so well, and god, this was amazing. You should write some more because your writing is very nice. The transitions were flawless and it all flowed smoothly together.
I just... I love it and you just wrote something beautiful.