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7h ago c27 1PearlesantlRose
That was an excellent chapter! I totally did not see the demon dog as the little boy. That was brilliant! I can't wait to see what the reactions of the others will be, when they find out what those two did! It promises to be eventful! Keep up the good work lady.
9h ago c27 Ellabellaboo124
Dun Dun DUUN! :P Really good. Please update again soon :D
10h ago c27 1Golden Moon Cresent
I hope they catch that bastard! How could he do that to his son and what happened to him?
13h ago c27 1deadlyrose123
Ghost dad thingy evil man! Didn't you mother ever tell you its not nice to call people a witch?! Or to kill your own WIFE!? Or to kill cute little sweet puppy dogs?!Or to threaten your own son?!If not then your mom should be thrown in a mental hospital! Along with you of course! -glares- Bad evil ghost thingy man!(I don't know if I should call him a demon or not, so Ill call him a thingy to I know _)
18h ago c27 12Treelow955
Wow, awesome!

So, that's who the ghost is! Cool!

Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait for more!
18h ago c27 Ducki9
I think they probably got caught on one of the many installed cameras in the house ! After Naru sees the footage he will probably explode on Mai telling her how irresponsible she is or say sth that he will regret later.
Good job with the new chapter. I quiet liked the talk between Hanayo and Mai.
Hope the next one will come out also as fast as this one !
19h ago c27 Damaged Forest Spirit
Why did you have to leave it right there? I want to know if they get caught sneaking back into the house. _ As you know I love it!
5/14 c26 1Golden Moon Cresent
Why would she do that when she's prego?!
5/14 c26 6seshomaru94
Poor Mai she had to lived that womans death it was awful biting to death I really hope her son was/is safe from that bastard, Cool story about the eyes :D PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
5/10 c26 1deadlyrose123
What does the last sentence mean?"How about taking a walk to this troublesome house of ours?" Me confused...Brick: Ignore that, she not thinking strait...Me: yes I am! Him: No your not! Anyway please update while I try and get her to bed, or some aspirin...
5/10 c26 Ellabellaboo124
Really good as always! ;) Please update again soon. :)
5/10 c26 1PearlesantlRose
Good chapter! You did great, keep going please.
5/10 c26 12Treelow955
This was amazing!

Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait for more!
5/10 c26 Guest
As I promised here is a review ;P
I liked the chapter but I really felt bad for the woman and her child ! How can someone be that cruel?!
I was really confused at the end! Why does Hanayo want to go the hunted house ? I bet she has a plan in mind!
Btw I really love Hanayo's character. She is definitely one of my favourites after Mai.
Can't wait till the next chapter!
5/10 c26 3felicianoludwig
that poor woman and that poor kid! TTTT *grabs pitch fork and torch and a bunch of dog treats* i'mma hunt that mf down and stabs him! (ps I've missed you)
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