for Baker's Dozen5/11 c1 Kyeda-Anna-May
Wow. Really enjoyed your story here. Your explanations as to why things were happening the way they were was well thought out and fell nicely within the story. Your characters were believable, and their reactions honest. A little confused about how the murderer got past the wards and into the basement. I would think that Harry would be a bit more vigilant in safe guarding his home. Does the murdered have some magic of their own? Done accidentally? Were they waiting for Harry to return home and was down in the basement all this time? Either way, I found and read this work this morning and can't wait to see what you have in store for them next. Also was rather tickled to read your bio. As a current student of the MHC it's nice to be able to appreciate some local talent! Thanks for the story and keep up the great work.
Wow. Really enjoyed your story here. Your explanations as to why things were happening the way they were was well thought out and fell nicely within the story. Your characters were believable, and their reactions honest. A little confused about how the murderer got past the wards and into the basement. I would think that Harry would be a bit more vigilant in safe guarding his home. Does the murdered have some magic of their own? Done accidentally? Were they waiting for Harry to return home and was down in the basement all this time? Either way, I found and read this work this morning and can't wait to see what you have in store for them next. Also was rather tickled to read your bio. As a current student of the MHC it's nice to be able to appreciate some local talent! Thanks for the story and keep up the great work.
5/9 c10 
1Anabellia Hyuuga
Nooooo! Wait! What happens? Author? Author! *desperate sing-song* Oh disappearing author, come back! Where did you go? I have to know happens. Tell me. Tell me! I HAVE to knooooooow!
1Anabellia HyuugaNooooo! Wait! What happens? Author? Author! *desperate sing-song* Oh disappearing author, come back! Where did you go? I have to know happens. Tell me. Tell me! I HAVE to knooooooow!
5/9 c10 Maybe2Morrow
OMG UPDATE! lol you left it at such a cliffhanger! This story is amazing, I can't wait to read the rest :D
OMG UPDATE! lol you left it at such a cliffhanger! This story is amazing, I can't wait to read the rest :D
5/4 c10 4SecretsOfaFanGirl
what?! what!? WHAT!? hahahhaha! what the hell happened to the wards? damn cliffhanger! lol.
pls continue soon. please this is so intense I think my heart's gonna stop! kidding. :)
anyway great fic! :D it's one of the best criminal mindsXharry potter I've read so far. it's intense and I love how you didn't rush to the romance. hahaha. BUT I'm totally rooting for Derek and Harry love team :D I can't wait to see how Derek will react to Harry when he fully accepts his feelings for him. I bet he'll be possessive and sexy as hell! hahahah! I can't wait. :D too bad it's rated T :((
will you put some sweetnes between derek and Harry? hehhe.
4SecretsOfaFanGirlwhat?! what!? WHAT!? hahahhaha! what the hell happened to the wards? damn cliffhanger! lol.
pls continue soon. please this is so intense I think my heart's gonna stop! kidding. :)
anyway great fic! :D it's one of the best criminal mindsXharry potter I've read so far. it's intense and I love how you didn't rush to the romance. hahaha. BUT I'm totally rooting for Derek and Harry love team :D I can't wait to see how Derek will react to Harry when he fully accepts his feelings for him. I bet he'll be possessive and sexy as hell! hahahah! I can't wait. :D too bad it's rated T :((
will you put some sweetnes between derek and Harry? hehhe.
4/30 c10 3MysticStarfall
All I can say is WOW! This story is amazing. Great story line, awesome flow, and absolutely enthralling! I sincerely hope that you update this story soon. This is a cliffhanger, and I'm desperate to read more. Great job. :)
3MysticStarfallAll I can say is WOW! This story is amazing. Great story line, awesome flow, and absolutely enthralling! I sincerely hope that you update this story soon. This is a cliffhanger, and I'm desperate to read more. Great job. :)
4/28 c10 HPSlashAddict
OMG! Don't leave it like this! I have to know what happens to Harry! and with him and Derek!
OMG! Don't leave it like this! I have to know what happens to Harry! and with him and Derek!
4/26 c10 2boostarryeyes
Reread this story again as I love what you have written so far. I love the Harry you've created and like the tentative relationship that's starting between him and Derek.
I hope you are well and I hope you continue to write the wonderful story soon. xx
2boostarryeyesReread this story again as I love what you have written so far. I love the Harry you've created and like the tentative relationship that's starting between him and Derek.
I hope you are well and I hope you continue to write the wonderful story soon. xx
4/23 c10 CreslinWest
I am screaming with frustration at the cliffhanger that ends this chapter. I am well and truly hooked. An excellent storyline. Great characterisation and an interesting premise.
I am screaming with frustration at the cliffhanger that ends this chapter. I am well and truly hooked. An excellent storyline. Great characterisation and an interesting premise.
4/23 c3 n.n
Stupid fic first of all he can apparate away anytime n.n
Stupid fic first of all he can apparate away anytime n.n