for Someone Waits in the Shadows Alt Ending5/3/2012 c1 
37woundedhearts
I luv Ya buddy! You make me laugh but also terrify me all at the same time. It's a unique trait to have. It does make one wonder where you picked up such a talent. As to the chapter itself i don't think i could do it justice. You did an amazing job of bringing the story full circle. You even managed to add in Bob who is my all time favorite character next to Zack. This is great. :)
37woundedheartsI luv Ya buddy! You make me laugh but also terrify me all at the same time. It's a unique trait to have. It does make one wonder where you picked up such a talent. As to the chapter itself i don't think i could do it justice. You did an amazing job of bringing the story full circle. You even managed to add in Bob who is my all time favorite character next to Zack. This is great. :)
5/3/2012 c1 4owlhero
You always have to worry about unintended consequences, LOL.
I can see why she has been delayed with the next chapter. Trying to recover from having the cilmax go in a different direction than she intended.
It does fit with the plotline and spirit of the story but the style is definitely yours.
Amazing with the way you hid who cried at the beginning.
Bailey's comtemplations were complex but human under the circumstances.
You definitely went a little dark here but considering how Brad is, I can see happening. The blood could have pushed Wounded over the edge a little. Maya's twisted thought processes was fun to read.
Zack just rules the reunion scene. Between the emotions and the physical dimensions, it just screamed for a fight scene.
Damn, you made really cold and sadistic and a little snarky with the bullet comment and his total assurance. Turning everything on Maya just makes him even better.
Wow...I love the description with the action of Bailey's shot.
BOB!WHAT THE HELL.
My head shakes with the plot twist completely out of nowhere.
No wonder Wounded almost died...LOL. But a part of me wants to be the way it goes.
I am nervous to ever give you complete free rein on my stories.
4owlheroYou always have to worry about unintended consequences, LOL.
I can see why she has been delayed with the next chapter. Trying to recover from having the cilmax go in a different direction than she intended.
It does fit with the plotline and spirit of the story but the style is definitely yours.
Amazing with the way you hid who cried at the beginning.
Bailey's comtemplations were complex but human under the circumstances.
You definitely went a little dark here but considering how Brad is, I can see happening. The blood could have pushed Wounded over the edge a little. Maya's twisted thought processes was fun to read.
Zack just rules the reunion scene. Between the emotions and the physical dimensions, it just screamed for a fight scene.
Damn, you made really cold and sadistic and a little snarky with the bullet comment and his total assurance. Turning everything on Maya just makes him even better.
Wow...I love the description with the action of Bailey's shot.
BOB!WHAT THE HELL.
My head shakes with the plot twist completely out of nowhere.
No wonder Wounded almost died...LOL. But a part of me wants to be the way it goes.
I am nervous to ever give you complete free rein on my stories.