for Because Mommy Works11/22/2012 c1 
106nebula2
Wow, this was very powerful. I thin you captured how they set up Will/JJ on the show with arguing over her going back to the BAU very well. I think you captured Will beautifully too. Are you continuing with the story? I'd like to see more.
106nebula2Wow, this was very powerful. I thin you captured how they set up Will/JJ on the show with arguing over her going back to the BAU very well. I think you captured Will beautifully too. Are you continuing with the story? I'd like to see more.
10/27/2012 c1 11Anavaress
This is great! D Fustrating too, because we don't have the end of the story but I can understant why you stoped it there.
Thanks for sharing!
11AnavaressThis is great! D Fustrating too, because we don't have the end of the story but I can understant why you stoped it there.
Thanks for sharing!
6/23/2012 c1 Gabriela
Thats amazing! I wish you would continue!
Thats amazing! I wish you would continue!
5/1/2012 c1 susannah2000
Or what? Will isn't making it about him, but about Henry, so is he going to make JJ choose between the job and being Henry's mother? JJ has to leave her job or he will take Henry away from her? Will can be as pissed as he wants to be for himself and has every right to leave her if that's what he wants but he has no right to take her child away from her, whether he likes her hours or not.
Or what? Will isn't making it about him, but about Henry, so is he going to make JJ choose between the job and being Henry's mother? JJ has to leave her job or he will take Henry away from her? Will can be as pissed as he wants to be for himself and has every right to leave her if that's what he wants but he has no right to take her child away from her, whether he likes her hours or not.
5/1/2012 c1 5Damhill
Really good beginning. I hope you keep this one up :)
I'd like to see what you do with it.
Great job with Will's character.
Please, update soon
5DamhillReally good beginning. I hope you keep this one up :)
I'd like to see what you do with it.
Great job with Will's character.
Please, update soon
5/1/2012 c1 p95000
Can't blame Will for being upset about JJ missing Henry's birthday. She could of taken time off. Liked what Will said to JJ at the end.
Can't blame Will for being upset about JJ missing Henry's birthday. She could of taken time off. Liked what Will said to JJ at the end.
5/1/2012 c1 15EmmaBerlin
Great first chapter! I like the words you had Will say. Very to the point and after a day like that probably spoken right from his heart... Very nice job!
15EmmaBerlinGreat first chapter! I like the words you had Will say. Very to the point and after a day like that probably spoken right from his heart... Very nice job!