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12/14/2012 c14 7KissMyBassSutcliffe
I Really liked this and love how you added in Lucy! what does it mean to plate Your hair? 0_o also please don't make the band break up. everyone does that now a days and it's nothing special or worth writing if that's all that ever happens :(
12/2/2012 c14 7MissWoolHat
This is great! I don't want this to be the last chapter! :) Another fantastic write!
12/1/2012 c2 MissWoolHat
Haha just realised that you already wrote the Jillian fanfic, well ignore my comment about writing it. You already did. Anyway, it's great so far!
8/19/2012 c13 6McLennonForever12
ATU! I think you should have Jude in there. Like a bazllion Jude moments. But not with Lucy, anybody but HER. Hahaha. I love this fic. You have made me happy by updating.

Love, Leah
7/1/2012 c13 2xxPaulMcCartneylovexx
Wow, this was a bit of a powerful chapter! [Sorry for the late review]

I really am loving how close Paul is getting to her, they seem as if they can tell each other anything! I think it's sweet how Paul is trying his best to help her, and I hope it turns out well for JillIan... or maybe, it ends up a disaster & she runs back to Paul... [; I'm soo evillll. .

I hope Paul writes a song for her! Lol.

Great job! Check my story out, ehh?

Peace & Love. :)
6/29/2012 c13 7023Faust
Awwww I love how comforting and kind Paul is to Jillian :) and he's right! Jillian should have the right to choose her own career! haha
Update soon :D
6/28/2012 c13 7KissMyBassSutcliffe
lol Paul. 'Thats ok it's all true.' cocky much? :D aw I can't believe her parents acted do normal haha
6/27/2012 c13 TheCrazyBassist
Awwwwwwww! Paul! Cuteness. :)

I have a feeling that wasn't the end of Jill's family issues. ;)

Peace and love, The Crazy Violist
6/27/2012 c12 2xxPaulMcCartneylovexx
Aww Jill's famm.

In I think, the previous chapter you said you needed some inspiration? Umm, maybe her dance thing is in a different country- like away? That might make some complications. Or, she gets pregnant, or a past love comes back? Idk, I'm spit balling lol (:

And is her family really that bad? I can't wait to see what happens! I mean, she's dating Paul, McCartney that's definitely a good thing! Lol.

Please update soon!
6/27/2012 c9 xxPaulMcCartneylovexx
.GAWSH.

This chapter was brilliant! It was so cute how Paul shut her up with his kiss! I think it's sweet that Jillian is willing to help Paul and she's there for him. And Paul... so cuttteee.



I love it!
6/27/2012 c6 xxPaulMcCartneylovexx
I'm tearing up!

Agghhh, this story is getting really good!

I can't stop reading! When Paul said 'Linda', I couldn't believe it, I felt my heart stop! lol. It seems Paul is feeling really guilty, I wonder when he's going to move on?

Sooo good! Love it!
6/27/2012 c2 xxPaulMcCartneylovexx
It's so sad reading thinking about how Paul really must've felt );

Anyways, you're writing is very great! I love it!

I really love that John is alive in your story, and that all the boys are together (': It's cute how they all try to help Paul in their own ways.

Love it!

Peace&Love.
6/27/2012 c1 xxPaulMcCartneylovexx
Wow!

You captured Paul very nicely, and it's very believable! Can't wait to read on!
6/24/2012 c12 TheCrazyBassist
I feel like I start all my reviews for your stories with "Yay!" so, I won't this time. :)

It was really interesting to learn more about Jillian. I am looking forward to reading more about her and Paulie. :)

OMG, HER FAMILY! I wonder what she'll do!

Peace and love, The Crazy Violist
6/24/2012 c12 7KissMyBassSutcliffe
ya! but I HATE YOKO! gosh please have something happen! lol I mean if they're not alou in have him tell John that he can't have a girl in there it's there place or something lol
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