for The After Party3/21 c2 Anony
This is probably one of my favorite 1/2 Prince fanfics. It feels like something that actually happened in the story, like one of those "hidden episodes" kind of plots. The way you write it, how in-character the individuals involved all and best yet from my perspective, your talent at the English language! I would love to death times infinity that you would write more 1/2 Prince fanfics or add on to this. Like you know, if Feng Lan regains her memories of what happened. Oh gosh, that would be an interesting development.
This is probably one of my favorite 1/2 Prince fanfics. It feels like something that actually happened in the story, like one of those "hidden episodes" kind of plots. The way you write it, how in-character the individuals involved all and best yet from my perspective, your talent at the English language! I would love to death times infinity that you would write more 1/2 Prince fanfics or add on to this. Like you know, if Feng Lan regains her memories of what happened. Oh gosh, that would be an interesting development.
1/2 c2 Mikoaya
Wow! Trois fois bravo! Not too much, not too little, sweet, but without falling into the cliché. I'm impressed. And I absolutely loved it! (I'm especially fond of the shot with the newspaper.) Thank you for taking the time to write and post this story!
As for my choice, of course, all of them! But seriously, since you call yourself a slow writer, my first choices would be Fan IRL (maybe not so evil as selfish and hellbent on revenge? I think conflicted characters are often more interesting) and the oblivious cousin who could pass off as Prince (that's always the funniest, or better yet, how about gay or bisexual? If that were the case, I foresee a poor poor Gui).
P.S: I reeeaaaaally would not mind a sequel for this story. And sorry for the long review.
Wow! Trois fois bravo! Not too much, not too little, sweet, but without falling into the cliché. I'm impressed. And I absolutely loved it! (I'm especially fond of the shot with the newspaper.) Thank you for taking the time to write and post this story!
As for my choice, of course, all of them! But seriously, since you call yourself a slow writer, my first choices would be Fan IRL (maybe not so evil as selfish and hellbent on revenge? I think conflicted characters are often more interesting) and the oblivious cousin who could pass off as Prince (that's always the funniest, or better yet, how about gay or bisexual? If that were the case, I foresee a poor poor Gui).
P.S: I reeeaaaaally would not mind a sequel for this story. And sorry for the long review.
1/2 c2 Guest
i like this story " - With the new patch, players have to take care of their everyday needs, and they can get sick as well. A troublesome epidemic, an event introduced by the game company to make things more "interesting", sweeps through Second Life. You can't heal simply by logging out for a few days: you have to find the very rare medicine or just ride it out. There are benefits though. You have a 0% chance to aggro monsters in the field and kills earn you double exp. However, your stats are way dulled and you lose two levels every time you die. Prince comes down with it and is only interested in using the double exp to level up, not caring about the danger. Gui goes after him to stop him, but the both of them end up stranded in the wilderness somewhere by the time he catches up because Prince's sense of direction is so bad. Prince refuses to go back so Gui decides to stay with him; his condition suddenly gets worse and Gui has to protect him until the others can get there with the medicine Infinite City has managed to get ahold of. This one I am tempted to make very dark, but it needn't necessarily be so."
but how about instead of prince getting sick, gui gets really sick while trying to protect prince n prince takes care of him? n prince realises his feeling...n stuff...doesn't matter if u make it dark.
n maybe u can focus more on gui here...with feng lan, not only feng lan as main...
i like this story " - With the new patch, players have to take care of their everyday needs, and they can get sick as well. A troublesome epidemic, an event introduced by the game company to make things more "interesting", sweeps through Second Life. You can't heal simply by logging out for a few days: you have to find the very rare medicine or just ride it out. There are benefits though. You have a 0% chance to aggro monsters in the field and kills earn you double exp. However, your stats are way dulled and you lose two levels every time you die. Prince comes down with it and is only interested in using the double exp to level up, not caring about the danger. Gui goes after him to stop him, but the both of them end up stranded in the wilderness somewhere by the time he catches up because Prince's sense of direction is so bad. Prince refuses to go back so Gui decides to stay with him; his condition suddenly gets worse and Gui has to protect him until the others can get there with the medicine Infinite City has managed to get ahold of. This one I am tempted to make very dark, but it needn't necessarily be so."
but how about instead of prince getting sick, gui gets really sick while trying to protect prince n prince takes care of him? n prince realises his feeling...n stuff...doesn't matter if u make it dark.
n maybe u can focus more on gui here...with feng lan, not only feng lan as main...
1/1 c2 
3Squirrel Singer
You HAD to end it there. But it was still the best thing ever.
ALL OF THE ABOVE!
3Squirrel SingerYou HAD to end it there. But it was still the best thing ever.
ALL OF THE ABOVE!
12/31/2012 c2 1Fanfiction Fanatiction
Well, at least there was an update before the end of 2012. Well, depending on the time zone, I guess.
But I really really liked it! And I would definitely like to see a reveal story... reveal stories are always so exciting when they're well-paced!
Keep writing! I'll be watching. :D
1Fanfiction FanatictionWell, at least there was an update before the end of 2012. Well, depending on the time zone, I guess.
But I really really liked it! And I would definitely like to see a reveal story... reveal stories are always so exciting when they're well-paced!
Keep writing! I'll be watching. :D
8/17/2012 c1 3Squirrel Singer
...
No words describe the miraculous feeling this piece gave me after reading it.
It was HEAVENLY, the best out of all the 1/2 Prince FFs I've read. Everybody was perfectly in character and...well...
PLEASE DO make a part 2 of this! I would love it, and I think all the other readers would too!
I mean, I didn't know an NPC could get drunk! Perhaps Kenshin passed out under some random table and Gui just didn't notice...D Imagine his thoughts when he wakes up the next day...
And the bedroom scene was totally unexpected. Maybe Prince should have been a tiny bit more drunken, but I thought s/he was going to reveal the true identity! I was kind of sad when s/he didn't, but oh well.
Please make a part 2!
3Squirrel Singer...
No words describe the miraculous feeling this piece gave me after reading it.
It was HEAVENLY, the best out of all the 1/2 Prince FFs I've read. Everybody was perfectly in character and...well...
PLEASE DO make a part 2 of this! I would love it, and I think all the other readers would too!
I mean, I didn't know an NPC could get drunk! Perhaps Kenshin passed out under some random table and Gui just didn't notice...D Imagine his thoughts when he wakes up the next day...
And the bedroom scene was totally unexpected. Maybe Prince should have been a tiny bit more drunken, but I thought s/he was going to reveal the true identity! I was kind of sad when s/he didn't, but oh well.
Please make a part 2!
7/16/2012 c1 Guest
DO A PART TWO! PLEASE, I'M BEGGING YOU, LET THERE BE A SECOND PART!
This may seriously be the best Prince fic I've ever read. And, to top it of perfectly, it's YAOI, which makes it about a hundred times better. If you could manage it, I'd actually love to see this as a chaptered story. Or at the very least have Prince an Gui meet again and talk (which promises to be deliciously awkward). And hopefully kiss again. (and the lil' perv deep (or not so deep) in me wants to see them do -more- than kiss. ;D)
I've been looking around a lot, but there are very few truly good stories that are yaoi in this fandom (to be honest, there are very few stories period, never mind yaoi and/or good), and I'd be very sad to see this end just like this. SO, I'm going to beg on my bare knees if that is what it takes to get a second part. Please! Pretty please with a cherry on top? Pretty please with yaoi and hot men on top?
(Is actually hunting for a story where Lan is male from the beginning and it being -truly- yaoi, but I'm giving up hope. Sigh... But this is so very well written and the interactions between the two of them are so awesome that I can just pretend. :D All is great in Imagination-land.)
Pretty please?
Yura-chan
DO A PART TWO! PLEASE, I'M BEGGING YOU, LET THERE BE A SECOND PART!
This may seriously be the best Prince fic I've ever read. And, to top it of perfectly, it's YAOI, which makes it about a hundred times better. If you could manage it, I'd actually love to see this as a chaptered story. Or at the very least have Prince an Gui meet again and talk (which promises to be deliciously awkward). And hopefully kiss again. (and the lil' perv deep (or not so deep) in me wants to see them do -more- than kiss. ;D)
I've been looking around a lot, but there are very few truly good stories that are yaoi in this fandom (to be honest, there are very few stories period, never mind yaoi and/or good), and I'd be very sad to see this end just like this. SO, I'm going to beg on my bare knees if that is what it takes to get a second part. Please! Pretty please with a cherry on top? Pretty please with yaoi and hot men on top?
(Is actually hunting for a story where Lan is male from the beginning and it being -truly- yaoi, but I'm giving up hope. Sigh... But this is so very well written and the interactions between the two of them are so awesome that I can just pretend. :D All is great in Imagination-land.)
Pretty please?
Yura-chan
6/26/2012 c1 17sinister banana
Wow, oh my. *fanning oneself* That was...yep...fantastic. I am left rather speechless.
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE.
Please? I think I love you.
17sinister bananaWow, oh my. *fanning oneself* That was...yep...fantastic. I am left rather speechless.
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE.
Please? I think I love you.
6/26/2012 c1 3bleeb90
I loved it!
suggestions?
Wouldn't it be brilliant if Lan would have a gap in her Second Life memories due drinking, making Zhuo-gege And Yang Ming worry? I'd love to see how they worry IRL (Lan treated as a girl, and the two of then worrying about her chastity?)
I'd love to see it escalate in Second Life, with for instance Wicked ánd Qing beating the living daylight out of Gui, who tried his very best not to abuse the situation?
And Gui should of course be trying to make sense out of the things Prince said while being wasted xD
3bleeb90I loved it!
suggestions?
Wouldn't it be brilliant if Lan would have a gap in her Second Life memories due drinking, making Zhuo-gege And Yang Ming worry? I'd love to see how they worry IRL (Lan treated as a girl, and the two of then worrying about her chastity?)
I'd love to see it escalate in Second Life, with for instance Wicked ánd Qing beating the living daylight out of Gui, who tried his very best not to abuse the situation?
And Gui should of course be trying to make sense out of the things Prince said while being wasted xD
6/7/2012 c1 Passerby
Right then, I usually don't review, but since this was marked as complete, I am begging for more. Your writing is fluid and amazing and I find myself becoming trapped within the lines. I was interrupted while reading and I snarled at my brother. Hehe, but anyway, I really loved this.
If you do plan on making a part two with the movie trip, let Wicked get stalked!
Right then, I usually don't review, but since this was marked as complete, I am begging for more. Your writing is fluid and amazing and I find myself becoming trapped within the lines. I was interrupted while reading and I snarled at my brother. Hehe, but anyway, I really loved this.
If you do plan on making a part two with the movie trip, let Wicked get stalked!