for Neurotically Yours11/4/2012 c7 Guest
Awesome story I hope you update it soon. :3
Awesome story I hope you update it soon. :3
6/3/2012 c7 
29icywarm
Ah. I always love this when its updated. And poor Shizuo. That flashback of Celty's. ;A; Noooo. Little girl! Shizuo isn't a mosnter. He helped you. *wipes small non-existent tear*
I'll be waiting for the update. Have to since I can't reach into the future though.
29icywarmAh. I always love this when its updated. And poor Shizuo. That flashback of Celty's. ;A; Noooo. Little girl! Shizuo isn't a mosnter. He helped you. *wipes small non-existent tear*
I'll be waiting for the update. Have to since I can't reach into the future though.
5/31/2012 c6 7HsTs
The thing i found it a little weird was, what the hell is gonna do Shizuo there?
If i were him --, i'd leave of the country or something like that because hide myself in place like that? ... no thanks.
You can do something better Shizu! (_)
and, poor Celty o(；；)o! *I'm gonna hug her now, excuse me*
7HsTsThe thing i found it a little weird was, what the hell is gonna do Shizuo there?
If i were him --, i'd leave of the country or something like that because hide myself in place like that? ... no thanks.
You can do something better Shizu! (_)
and, poor Celty o(；；)o! *I'm gonna hug her now, excuse me*
5/26/2012 c6 29icywarm
Ah, I always love stuff like this. Its awesome and I'll be waiting for the next update.
29icywarmAh, I always love stuff like this. Its awesome and I'll be waiting for the next update.
5/21/2012 c5 7HsTs
i also like when the story is slow but when it takes too long (like 'shizaya' starts in the chapter 40 and the chapters are soooooo shorts and it take too long to publish a new chapter, for me is... no :), it's good to know in the firsts chapters that is gonna be a slow story because in that way, the reader knows that Shizaya won't appear soon.
And, well in this chapter: Izaya is truly son of a bitch : I mean, 'Fuck you, Orihara. LEAVE SHIZUO ALONE!' With the novels i was thinking the same; he's so annoying! Look what he done to my poor husbando :C Now he wanna kill himself for that stupid flea :C
(sorry for not comment in the previous chapter, but the thing is that i said to myself: tommorow i have to review her story, and for some strange reason i totaly forgot it ;-;)
bye
7HsTsi also like when the story is slow but when it takes too long (like 'shizaya' starts in the chapter 40 and the chapters are soooooo shorts and it take too long to publish a new chapter, for me is... no :), it's good to know in the firsts chapters that is gonna be a slow story because in that way, the reader knows that Shizaya won't appear soon.
And, well in this chapter: Izaya is truly son of a bitch : I mean, 'Fuck you, Orihara. LEAVE SHIZUO ALONE!' With the novels i was thinking the same; he's so annoying! Look what he done to my poor husbando :C Now he wanna kill himself for that stupid flea :C
(sorry for not comment in the previous chapter, but the thing is that i said to myself: tommorow i have to review her story, and for some strange reason i totaly forgot it ;-;)
bye
5/20/2012 c5 29icywarm
This is great. I love every chapter. And it is just bleck when it's rushed through for no reason. Still, I love how this is going and I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
29icywarmThis is great. I love every chapter. And it is just bleck when it's rushed through for no reason. Still, I love how this is going and I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
5/19/2012 c5 2keiko-uchiha
I say take as much time as you need on your story. I don't like it when it's rushed either. :) Poor Shizuo. There must be a lot of self-loathing in him, yes? Ah, the pros and cons of having abnormal strength. Con: hurting people when you don't intend to. Pro: kicking major ass and not feeling a thing in return. :D
2keiko-uchihaI say take as much time as you need on your story. I don't like it when it's rushed either. :) Poor Shizuo. There must be a lot of self-loathing in him, yes? Ah, the pros and cons of having abnormal strength. Con: hurting people when you don't intend to. Pro: kicking major ass and not feeling a thing in return. :D
5/17/2012 c4 keiko-uchiha
What happened to shizuo? The poor guy! Just out of curiosity, how long until some moments? I can't wait for the next chapter!
What happened to shizuo? The poor guy! Just out of curiosity, how long until some moments? I can't wait for the next chapter!
5/15/2012 c4 29icywarm
This is just amazing. Every chapter. I can wait for the update. Because this is just that amazing. I always love stories like this and this is just making me so curious as to what's happening to Shizuo.
29icywarmThis is just amazing. Every chapter. I can wait for the update. Because this is just that amazing. I always love stories like this and this is just making me so curious as to what's happening to Shizuo.
5/10/2012 c3 7HsTs
oh, no
thanks to you for writing this :D
and for let me know :)
but you ended this chapter so...! i'm so intrigued now (;° ロ°)
i'll wait with anxiety the continuation (-’๏_๏’-)
bye~! :)
7HsTsoh, no
thanks to you for writing this :D
and for let me know :)
but you ended this chapter so...! i'm so intrigued now (;° ロ°)
i'll wait with anxiety the continuation (-’๏_๏’-)
bye~! :)
5/9/2012 c3 29icywarm
This shall always be amazing. And Namie was fine. Keep this up. I want to read more and I'll be waiting for the next update.
29icywarmThis shall always be amazing. And Namie was fine. Keep this up. I want to read more and I'll be waiting for the next update.
5/9/2012 c3 2Unknown Variable
Black darkness? Wha? Did Celty come along or did he pass out from exhaustion or something? I'm confused.
2Unknown VariableBlack darkness? Wha? Did Celty come along or did he pass out from exhaustion or something? I'm confused.