for A Life Like No Other5/2 c7 riegert8
I find this to be an interesting story
It been some time since I read a story from, I got smart and put you on my alert to save time. Sooner or later I will come back read your story
I find this to be an interesting story
It been some time since I read a story from, I got smart and put you on my alert to save time. Sooner or later I will come back read your story
4/8 c2 Tunderkiwi
For a second I tought you purge the Voldemort's soul fragment from Harry's scar when Astoria and Harry kissed and I was ready to kick your butt to next week :)
For a second I tought you purge the Voldemort's soul fragment from Harry's scar when Astoria and Harry kissed and I was ready to kick your butt to next week :)
4/8 c1 Tunderkiwi
Shamefacedly, is that a real word? :) Never mind :) I like to read your story more. For some reason people couldn't develop Astoria's character as well as they do for Daphne's. Your version of Astoria seems a bit like Ginny as I tought how her character is. But I liked it non the less.
Shamefacedly, is that a real word? :) Never mind :) I like to read your story more. For some reason people couldn't develop Astoria's character as well as they do for Daphne's. Your version of Astoria seems a bit like Ginny as I tought how her character is. But I liked it non the less.
2/23 c5 Akuma-Heika
She'd loved him for two tears now
three years according to your earlier report.
You had a line a chapter or two back I was having trouble deciphering. Now I cannot remember it...tell you if I find it.
Hope you continue this story!
She'd loved him for two tears now
three years according to your earlier report.
You had a line a chapter or two back I was having trouble deciphering. Now I cannot remember it...tell you if I find it.
Hope you continue this story!
2/22 c1 Akuma-Heika
Ooh, squeeze me in, Harry?" she flirted. "You can squeeze me any time."
Would have been funnier if she said you can squeeze in me at anytime. lol
"Erm, yeah, maybe more than squeeze.
lol
Ooh, squeeze me in, Harry?" she flirted. "You can squeeze me any time."
Would have been funnier if she said you can squeeze in me at anytime. lol
"Erm, yeah, maybe more than squeeze.
lol
2/2 c7 DEBob19
A very fast paced story, the romance is rushed, but not bad. The relationship and teasing is entertaining, there's not nearly enough of that in most stories, they tend to just skip it (most people suck at romance anyway, so not a surprise). So kudos for that. I look forward to the next chapter.
A very fast paced story, the romance is rushed, but not bad. The relationship and teasing is entertaining, there's not nearly enough of that in most stories, they tend to just skip it (most people suck at romance anyway, so not a surprise). So kudos for that. I look forward to the next chapter.
12/17/2012 c7 zarkan
Not bad really not bad and I cant wait to see what is going to happen next so please update soon see ya.
Not bad really not bad and I cant wait to see what is going to happen next so please update soon see ya.
12/14/2012 c7 noylj
That is a horrible place to leave the story.
Fun story.
I hope they had a LOT of fun in the pool.
What was Tori trying to remember?
That is a horrible place to leave the story.
Fun story.
I hope they had a LOT of fun in the pool.
What was Tori trying to remember?
12/8/2012 c7 
4Deathus
really good hope you update soon this has been an interesting and enjoyable read.
4Deathusreally good hope you update soon this has been an interesting and enjoyable read.
12/2/2012 c2 9pokemaster12
This was... really, really bad. I'm not going to lie to you. Making Harry and Astoria fall in love within two chapters is a god awful way to write a romance story. At least one third of your story should be about the two getting together, at the very least. You had no build up, no character development, no real interaction, it was just Harry and Astoria falling in love within the first chapter and than becoming a couple in the second. Really bad form there.
On top of that, you revealed almost all of the major plots, including Harry being a Hocrux. As I recall, Dumbledore was not the kind of person who would inform Harry of something like that, yet he seems to have done that here. Why?
9pokemaster12This was... really, really bad. I'm not going to lie to you. Making Harry and Astoria fall in love within two chapters is a god awful way to write a romance story. At least one third of your story should be about the two getting together, at the very least. You had no build up, no character development, no real interaction, it was just Harry and Astoria falling in love within the first chapter and than becoming a couple in the second. Really bad form there.
On top of that, you revealed almost all of the major plots, including Harry being a Hocrux. As I recall, Dumbledore was not the kind of person who would inform Harry of something like that, yet he seems to have done that here. Why?