2/26 c4 Eat Well And
Oh, another chapter. And so soon! Very, very nice.

Your introductions are always very well done; it drags the audience straight into the story and then immerses them deeply within the plot and storyline before they can even begin to think, "wait, what am I reading". Very well done.

The introductions of Koa and Reisen are also brilliantly handled; Koakuma is portrayed very well here, and so is Reisen, further cementing my opinions towards your wonderful characterization. Though their screen times were fairly brief, you've already managed to flesh out Koa and Reisen wonderfully; Koakuma is the friendly hot-chick who just doesn't care, and Reisen is the love-struck and optimistic underdog. You're very good at characterization, as I've stated many times before. One of the best in the fandom, I think. Even some of our most famous authors, such as TakerFoxx, for example, cannot flesh out the wonderful diversity of the Touhou girls in so little words. You are very talented in this field!

I also rather enjoy the background information you've sneaked into the story; adding commentary about which tengu wrote what, and Suika's sudden entry really fleshed out what kind of setting the story takes place in. The little background details you've added makes the whole thing seem very believable and entertaining. Yet another point for you!

In conclusion, I do hope to see you soon, and my condolences in regards your writer's block. Something like that is the death of all fanfiction writers, as I would know. I recommend writing short little 200 word ficlets or something similar to start shoving past the blocks; the only way to motivate yourself to write is to write, and setting a limiter for yourself is a great way to train your writing ability.

I eagerly await your next update, and until then, farewell.

2/26 c4 MYSTIA WAS HERE
Oh my gosh! This is amazing! Actually, I can't tell that you've been writing for some time (correct me if I'm wrong) though I can imagine you like those writers that simply fail to write a fan fiction when you first started.
Why? Because the way you write seems to be the improved version of those writing styles. FYI, this isn't an insult. It's WAY better, and in some time soon as you write more I can assure you that you'll be those writers that are AMAZING. (not that you aren't now)
Grammar and spelling wise, it's perfect. Unlike those extremely good ones with some of those simple errors (but they are usually forgiven anyway)
I can never write like you for life! You should spend more time on this if you do have spare time!

2/25 c4 Psykoakuma
Koaaaaaa! I'm so happy about the KoaxPatchu scene! The funny sort of girl turned out to be legit funny! And then things took a turn for the super cute in a hurry hehe

Wow! It was getting really hot in the nurse's office ya know? Like seriously hot! So Kaguya is tsundere with a yandereish intensity? I can totally see that. And Suika is an overly energetic chibi who loves to party? Hell yes she is!

So what you're hinting is that the story has a hidden boss (ExMystia) who will show up after the heroes think they've taken down the final boss. Sounds about right. Yay Mystia!

Also, Wooo! Quick update!

2/5 c3 5Olive343
This amuses me greatly, it's good fun without being too serious. Good work. One comment however, you refer to Meiling as a Youkai at the beginning of this chapter, which seems wrong. Otherwise, great!

1/20 c3 16Hoshiguma-douji
I really, really like this. I think you portrayed the characters quite well in the setting they're in, and I absolutely loved Meiling's part. There needs to be more!

*toasts with sake*

1/19 c3 Eat Well And
Hello, this is the anon with the previous moniker 'Eat Well And Be Happy'.

You've improved a great deal since I last reviewed; your work is clearer and more comprehensible now.

I greatly enjoyed seeing the Marisa-Reimu-Yukari dynamic; I think you've captured them all very well. Meiling's characterization here also pleases me-I tire of the 'useless gate guard' image that poor Meiling has acquired.

Your Alice, I think, is also very well done. Tsundere-Alice got boring long, long ago, and seeing Alice portrayed in a way that doesn't demean her character is quite refreshing.

My only complaint about your work so far is that we have no idea how or why Marisa fell for Alice, and why Alice only seems to treat Marisa-and Marisa only-with contempt.

Are these topics that shall be addressed in later chapters?

If so, then I do eagerly await your next update.

Until then, farewell

1/19 c3 Psykoakuma
YES! I have to admit I was worried this fic had been forgotten. I clapped with delight when I saw a new chapter was up! Ok, it's a bit short, but extremely delicious.
SakuMei? Yes please! Do love that easygoing, lanky, fireball! And the cute angry fish is the perfect match for her! Umm, even though I'm horribly embarrassed to admit I don't get the angry fish reference (beyond fish in sea). Sorry!
The negotiation between Marisa and Yukari totally floored me. I laughed so hard at that! Reimu's response was just too cute! Damn I love this fic so much! I tickles me just the right way!
Oh, I can't wait to see more of the MariAli side of the story. I love this slightly mysterious/dangerous Alisu! Looks like 'does not interact with living things' is an asset for a hockey player.
I'm beginning to wonder about the significance of the story's title. I like it, but so far I can't figure out what it's referencing. Perhaps all will become clear in time.