for The Lost Companions8/23/2012 c3 Doctor Ross
you really should continue writing about Jenny and Astrid. so Jenny can have Astrid as a Best Friend and Companion like Donna is to the Doctor and Astrid can finally get the travels she was promised after all she did with the Doctor on the spaceship Titanic. I think it has Great Potential!
Orlando
you really should continue writing about Jenny and Astrid. so Jenny can have Astrid as a Best Friend and Companion like Donna is to the Doctor and Astrid can finally get the travels she was promised after all she did with the Doctor on the spaceship Titanic. I think it has Great Potential!
Orlando
6/26/2012 c3 
1The One Who Holds On
Wow...what a jerk. Seriously. Knocking someone out for their own good? What a jerk move. Really, you should have just let her find Astrid and understood that she would never leave someone behind...like they just did. I could also say something along the lines of "oh wow, the suspense is building! I can't wait to find out what's next!", but instead I think I'll just say I'm glad it looks like you know where you're going with this story. Don't be lazy. Instead be awesome!
-CDS
1The One Who Holds OnWow...what a jerk. Seriously. Knocking someone out for their own good? What a jerk move. Really, you should have just let her find Astrid and understood that she would never leave someone behind...like they just did. I could also say something along the lines of "oh wow, the suspense is building! I can't wait to find out what's next!", but instead I think I'll just say I'm glad it looks like you know where you're going with this story. Don't be lazy. Instead be awesome!
-CDS
5/9/2012 c2 DorkynessOnSteroids
Just found this story and really liked it! It's really creative. I'll go review the first chapter, too...
Just found this story and really liked it! It's really creative. I'll go review the first chapter, too...
5/3/2012 c2 megastapler2
it's getting even better!
it's getting even better!
5/3/2012 c1 megastapler2
i like it so far!
i like it so far!
5/3/2012 c2 Iellwen Silima
I like the idea of having them travel to planets and stumbling upon trouble, kind of like the Doctor. Haha. You should write like stand alone 'episodes' where they visit new planets. They could go to Atlantis! That's something I've always wanted to see happen on Doctor Who. Umm...anyway, this chapter was really good :) I like how you're taking the romance slow instead of just diving right into it from the beginning, although there's already some subtle romantic undertones :) Looking forward to the next chapter!
I like the idea of having them travel to planets and stumbling upon trouble, kind of like the Doctor. Haha. You should write like stand alone 'episodes' where they visit new planets. They could go to Atlantis! That's something I've always wanted to see happen on Doctor Who. Umm...anyway, this chapter was really good :) I like how you're taking the romance slow instead of just diving right into it from the beginning, although there's already some subtle romantic undertones :) Looking forward to the next chapter!
5/3/2012 c1 Iellwen Silima
Oh my gosh, I'm so happy to have finally found a decent Doctor Who slash story! Your writing is really good, and I love how you characterize both of the girls. Also, I've always wanted to read a fanfic where Jenny gets to travel, and one where Astrid somehow comes back to life, and you combined both of those ideas! Haha. Great job. I really hope you decide to continue this!
The only suggestion I have is something that I just found a bit confusing while reading...I would suggest just picking one view point per chapter and sticking to it, instead of jumping back and forth between their viewpoints every paragraph. Trying to remember who's POV it was was a bit confusing at some points.
Oh my gosh, I'm so happy to have finally found a decent Doctor Who slash story! Your writing is really good, and I love how you characterize both of the girls. Also, I've always wanted to read a fanfic where Jenny gets to travel, and one where Astrid somehow comes back to life, and you combined both of those ideas! Haha. Great job. I really hope you decide to continue this!
The only suggestion I have is something that I just found a bit confusing while reading...I would suggest just picking one view point per chapter and sticking to it, instead of jumping back and forth between their viewpoints every paragraph. Trying to remember who's POV it was was a bit confusing at some points.
5/2/2012 c1 Cr0wfeathers
This is an amazing story! I love the idea, and your writing style is really nice to read! :) I love it!
This is an amazing story! I love the idea, and your writing style is really nice to read! :) I love it!
5/2/2012 c1 1The One Who Holds On
So, personally, I love it :) I totally agree that both Jenny and Astrid got a little gypped when it comes to traveling with the Doctor. I think that the two of them are an excellent pair and I like the idea a lot. Then again, we both know I'd be more than happy to read anything new you have. Keep up the good work. :) -C.S.
1The One Who Holds OnSo, personally, I love it :) I totally agree that both Jenny and Astrid got a little gypped when it comes to traveling with the Doctor. I think that the two of them are an excellent pair and I like the idea a lot. Then again, we both know I'd be more than happy to read anything new you have. Keep up the good work. :) -C.S.