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15Lord Siravant
I find myself wondering: are the Kankers now helping the Eds cook up their schemes? Extra, more competent hands would probably make it all easier.
15Lord SiravantI find myself wondering: are the Kankers now helping the Eds cook up their schemes? Extra, more competent hands would probably make it all easier.
2/14 c67 2badberry123
That's a great Epilogue to Bad Girls With Big Hearts. Everyone lives happily ever after, both Eds and Kankers and the endings you've created for them are truly satisfying! :)
Its a shame that there won't be a sequel to the story but I suppose its your choice cause after all, you are the author and its just sad that you won't be writing anymore, cause your really good at it. :(
But with that said, if you ever want to talk you can PM me anytime you want, it would be a blast to talk to you again.
2badberry123That's a great Epilogue to Bad Girls With Big Hearts. Everyone lives happily ever after, both Eds and Kankers and the endings you've created for them are truly satisfying! :)
Its a shame that there won't be a sequel to the story but I suppose its your choice cause after all, you are the author and its just sad that you won't be writing anymore, cause your really good at it. :(
But with that said, if you ever want to talk you can PM me anytime you want, it would be a blast to talk to you again.
2/14 c67 blackrose0917
nice little read to see how they went on after a few months. though quite sad that the sequel's not coming anymore. though quite understandable. H.V.D. to you too! XD
nice little read to see how they went on after a few months. though quite sad that the sequel's not coming anymore. though quite understandable. H.V.D. to you too! XD
2/14 c67 2Diluted Dolphin
LONG LIVE THE 90's! Thank you for the fabulous end to a fabulous story. I hope that I'm still on this site when your next surprise comes around.
2Diluted DolphinLONG LIVE THE 90's! Thank you for the fabulous end to a fabulous story. I hope that I'm still on this site when your next surprise comes around.
1/24 c10 12dietcocacola101
OHMYGOSH! Double D is busted! This chapter was really good, even if it wasn't what I expected.
I especially liked when Double D said that he was guilty of stalking Marie too because it was so ironic XD
12dietcocacola101OHMYGOSH! Double D is busted! This chapter was really good, even if it wasn't what I expected.
I especially liked when Double D said that he was guilty of stalking Marie too because it was so ironic XD
1/24 c9 dietcocacola101
So, I watched the Canadian Squirt Gun episode and I found out that you didn't come up with Crankshaft #5 and now I feel like an idiot. -_- Oh well. (That episode was great, btw)
Oh God, the anticipation! I'm so excited for the next chapter, to see how Double D & Marie's date goes! Again, I like how you wrote the boys, especially Ed, who didn't shower weeks in advance so he would avoid dates on the 14th, and Eddy, who makes a complete fool of himself to impress girls. Just perfect.
So, I watched the Canadian Squirt Gun episode and I found out that you didn't come up with Crankshaft #5 and now I feel like an idiot. -_- Oh well. (That episode was great, btw)
Oh God, the anticipation! I'm so excited for the next chapter, to see how Double D & Marie's date goes! Again, I like how you wrote the boys, especially Ed, who didn't shower weeks in advance so he would avoid dates on the 14th, and Eddy, who makes a complete fool of himself to impress girls. Just perfect.
1/23 c66 2Tojiro Murakami
Omg, read the whole thing and it was amazing! I was feeling nostalgic when I saw an Ed Edd n Eddy picture, so I decided to find a fan fic just to satisfy it. I never figured that I'd find such a great story like this, and I'm really glad That I did. The way you wrote it, literally made me feel as if I was back in my childhood watching the cartoon series again. You are great at grasping the personality traits of most if not all of the characters. There were some errors here and there grammer wise, but aside from that it was really great. Also I love the small backgrounds you created, in order to describe the reasonings between some of the actions and character flaws among each person. Detailed and creative. Thanks for having take the time to write this.
2Tojiro MurakamiOmg, read the whole thing and it was amazing! I was feeling nostalgic when I saw an Ed Edd n Eddy picture, so I decided to find a fan fic just to satisfy it. I never figured that I'd find such a great story like this, and I'm really glad That I did. The way you wrote it, literally made me feel as if I was back in my childhood watching the cartoon series again. You are great at grasping the personality traits of most if not all of the characters. There were some errors here and there grammer wise, but aside from that it was really great. Also I love the small backgrounds you created, in order to describe the reasonings between some of the actions and character flaws among each person. Detailed and creative. Thanks for having take the time to write this.
1/23 c8 12dietcocacola101
This chapter had me laughing so hard. I love the way you write the Kankers - believable and hilarious. I love it when they fight in the episodes and this was just as good!
I especially liked when Lee said, "I didn't expect you two to start fighting like wild animals." Really, Lee? That's all them three ever do!
12dietcocacola101This chapter had me laughing so hard. I love the way you write the Kankers - believable and hilarious. I love it when they fight in the episodes and this was just as good!
I especially liked when Lee said, "I didn't expect you two to start fighting like wild animals." Really, Lee? That's all them three ever do!
1/23 c7 dietcocacola101
Crankshaft #5, huh? I'm assuming you came up with that by yourself, as well as the poem, right? Only Double D could pull something like that off. And what is this I hear about a Canadian Squirt Gun duel? Is this something you made up or an episode I haven't seen? If it's an episode, I MUST WATCH IT.
I can't believe Double D fell asleep in class! AND GOT 2 DETENTIONS! That's so unlike him, but you made it believable. I also can't believe how Double D is so infatuated with Marie so fast...she must have put something in his food! Haha, jk(:
Crankshaft #5, huh? I'm assuming you came up with that by yourself, as well as the poem, right? Only Double D could pull something like that off. And what is this I hear about a Canadian Squirt Gun duel? Is this something you made up or an episode I haven't seen? If it's an episode, I MUST WATCH IT.
I can't believe Double D fell asleep in class! AND GOT 2 DETENTIONS! That's so unlike him, but you made it believable. I also can't believe how Double D is so infatuated with Marie so fast...she must have put something in his food! Haha, jk(:
1/23 c6 dietcocacola101
So Marie asked Double D out...normally!? No pressure, no insults, no humiliation? I'm having a bit of a hard time wrapping my head around this! I can only imagine how Double D is feeling. Hah.
Again, I love the amazing detail that you work into your chapters & how you keep the characters so, well, in character! One small criticism is that Marie seems to have changed personalities toward Double D awfully fast and for no reason. Unless Double D is just noticing her good side or something? Meh. I dunno.
Anyway, onward to the next chapter!
So Marie asked Double D out...normally!? No pressure, no insults, no humiliation? I'm having a bit of a hard time wrapping my head around this! I can only imagine how Double D is feeling. Hah.
Again, I love the amazing detail that you work into your chapters & how you keep the characters so, well, in character! One small criticism is that Marie seems to have changed personalities toward Double D awfully fast and for no reason. Unless Double D is just noticing her good side or something? Meh. I dunno.
Anyway, onward to the next chapter!
1/22 c5 dietcocacola101
Oh, snap! Double D's got a crush on Marie! I have to admit, I was waiting for him to realize this WAAAY later but it's probably better if they get together sooner. That way there will be more time for crazy antics and good plotlines and cute couple scenes.
This chapter was really good. I especially liked the scene where Marie kissed Double D on the cheek. Really sweet and I could imagine it happening!
Oh, snap! Double D's got a crush on Marie! I have to admit, I was waiting for him to realize this WAAAY later but it's probably better if they get together sooner. That way there will be more time for crazy antics and good plotlines and cute couple scenes.
This chapter was really good. I especially liked the scene where Marie kissed Double D on the cheek. Really sweet and I could imagine it happening!
1/22 c4 dietcocacola101
The only thing I didn't like about this chapter was that it was so short. I like the way you made Double D afraid of, admiring, and feeling sorry for Marie all at the same time. Nice job! Your portrayal of Marie was good again. A bit OOC, but just a bit. I love it!
The only thing I didn't like about this chapter was that it was so short. I like the way you made Double D afraid of, admiring, and feeling sorry for Marie all at the same time. Nice job! Your portrayal of Marie was good again. A bit OOC, but just a bit. I love it!
1/22 c3 dietcocacola101
It's really funny how you portrayed Marie in this chapter because it's almost exactly how I picture her. I always thought Marie would be an amazing artist and have a soft side behind her tough demeanor. I *love* the way you write these characters.
It's really funny how you portrayed Marie in this chapter because it's almost exactly how I picture her. I always thought Marie would be an amazing artist and have a soft side behind her tough demeanor. I *love* the way you write these characters.
1/22 c2 dietcocacola101
This chapter was hilarious - I could not stop giggling. You wrote the Kankers & Rolf just as perfect as you write the Eds. Words can't describe how much I love this story right now. Keep up the good work!
This chapter was hilarious - I could not stop giggling. You wrote the Kankers & Rolf just as perfect as you write the Eds. Words can't describe how much I love this story right now. Keep up the good work!
1/22 c1 dietcocacola101
This...is amazing. I just love the detail you put into your chapters and you kept everyone (especially the Eds) so in character, I felt like I was watching the show. It was totally believable - great job!
One last thing: did you write that poem yourself? It's really good!
This...is amazing. I just love the detail you put into your chapters and you kept everyone (especially the Eds) so in character, I felt like I was watching the show. It was totally believable - great job!
One last thing: did you write that poem yourself? It's really good!