for A Call to Arms5/16 c37 EmptySurface
You've made a very good job with this story! And still, that's an understatement. It's felt like reading the real books, which I'm sure was intentional. Thank you for writing this story!:D Brilliant work!
You've made a very good job with this story! And still, that's an understatement. It's felt like reading the real books, which I'm sure was intentional. Thank you for writing this story!:D Brilliant work!
4/28 c18 flyei
I always saw canon Malfoy bit differently. A bit of a coward and a spoiled brat, spiteful for sure but somehow I always thought he would balk at actually torturing/killing people. I think he recognizes when he crosses a line - if sadly often after the fact. Like in book six, I think he would've been just as horrified as Harry if he'd managed the Cruciatus. In Deathly Hallows only Crabbe and Goyle were mentioned as the ones who crucioed others though I'm not sure.
I always saw canon Malfoy bit differently. A bit of a coward and a spoiled brat, spiteful for sure but somehow I always thought he would balk at actually torturing/killing people. I think he recognizes when he crosses a line - if sadly often after the fact. Like in book six, I think he would've been just as horrified as Harry if he'd managed the Cruciatus. In Deathly Hallows only Crabbe and Goyle were mentioned as the ones who crucioed others though I'm not sure.
4/28 c9 flyei
Ginny is very annoying. It's like she's now having a Harry complex. She seems to feel herself responsible for all the others even though they are perfectly capable of making their own decisions. And honestly, they all knew they might get caught when they started the DA again. They knew the consequences - well except Ginny apparently.
Ginny is very annoying. It's like she's now having a Harry complex. She seems to feel herself responsible for all the others even though they are perfectly capable of making their own decisions. And honestly, they all knew they might get caught when they started the DA again. They knew the consequences - well except Ginny apparently.
4/28 c3 flyei
I think Luna is right. Not that more people should know about the sword but that people have the right to fight back just as Ginny and Neville. It would even help to include them because right now they are still rebelling, like Seamus, but not in a useful way.
I'm really worried what happens to the 'Golden Trio' now ;)
I think Luna is right. Not that more people should know about the sword but that people have the right to fight back just as Ginny and Neville. It would even help to include them because right now they are still rebelling, like Seamus, but not in a useful way.
I'm really worried what happens to the 'Golden Trio' now ;)
4/28 c2 flyei
Why on earth wouldn't Ginny tell anyone what really happened? What if someone else thinks the teachers still abide by the old rules and gets Cruciatus for speaking up? I don't understand her reasoning at all.
I'm feeling really sorry for Snape. First he has to kill someone that was probably the closest thing to a friend he'd had in years and now he has to play the Headmaster. And Voldemort has apparently given Carrows enough power that they can crucio people left and right. All the while Snape has no idea what Harry is doing or how he could possibly win the war.
The first chapter was really good because it was such a contrast with earlier years. I was really scared for all the characters, especially Ernie. And I was surprised to see Draco because for some reason I thought he didn't come back either.
Why on earth wouldn't Ginny tell anyone what really happened? What if someone else thinks the teachers still abide by the old rules and gets Cruciatus for speaking up? I don't understand her reasoning at all.
I'm feeling really sorry for Snape. First he has to kill someone that was probably the closest thing to a friend he'd had in years and now he has to play the Headmaster. And Voldemort has apparently given Carrows enough power that they can crucio people left and right. All the while Snape has no idea what Harry is doing or how he could possibly win the war.
The first chapter was really good because it was such a contrast with earlier years. I was really scared for all the characters, especially Ernie. And I was surprised to see Draco because for some reason I thought he didn't come back either.
4/12 c37 
6Fluff-is-awesome
Oh boy. Okay just finished. Now I need to try and breathe.
Alright listen. I swear this story has put me on so much adrenaline. The whole time I've just been on end non stop and I can't even tell you just how greatful I am that you wrote this. I think this story satisfies every Harry Potter fan out there. Everyone wants to know everyone else's POV during the seventh book, and what actually happened at Hogwarts. You did it. You really did it as accurately as I've ever seen. I believe every word you say is truly what happened.
The entire first part of this story before Harry got there was incredible. It really was what I needed. I think Neville, Ginny, and Luna need a name too. The Temporary Golden Trio? The Silver Trio? ;) I absolutely love how Dumbledore's Army worked to fight in the Carrows in every way they could. And everything they put up with! And Minerva was absolutely fascinating too... Fascinating! She really took their side and did everything in her power to protect the Army. That deserves so much more credit than she got. I really felt the stress they had to live through.
Then what I can't believe is that you managed to write out every incident and death of the war in so much detail... And you got into everyone's heads too! How how how did you do that? Like, without mentally torturing yourself? You certainly tortured me... Huge adrenaline rush I tell you... Lupin... Tonks... Ginny! George! Oh George! He-he felt it and-and he ignored it and-and-
God let Angie help him.
So after all my rambling and freaking out and such, I'll sum it up:
This is probably the best fanfic I have ever read. You did it.
6Fluff-is-awesomeOh boy. Okay just finished. Now I need to try and breathe.
Alright listen. I swear this story has put me on so much adrenaline. The whole time I've just been on end non stop and I can't even tell you just how greatful I am that you wrote this. I think this story satisfies every Harry Potter fan out there. Everyone wants to know everyone else's POV during the seventh book, and what actually happened at Hogwarts. You did it. You really did it as accurately as I've ever seen. I believe every word you say is truly what happened.
The entire first part of this story before Harry got there was incredible. It really was what I needed. I think Neville, Ginny, and Luna need a name too. The Temporary Golden Trio? The Silver Trio? ;) I absolutely love how Dumbledore's Army worked to fight in the Carrows in every way they could. And everything they put up with! And Minerva was absolutely fascinating too... Fascinating! She really took their side and did everything in her power to protect the Army. That deserves so much more credit than she got. I really felt the stress they had to live through.
Then what I can't believe is that you managed to write out every incident and death of the war in so much detail... And you got into everyone's heads too! How how how did you do that? Like, without mentally torturing yourself? You certainly tortured me... Huge adrenaline rush I tell you... Lupin... Tonks... Ginny! George! Oh George! He-he felt it and-and he ignored it and-and-
God let Angie help him.
So after all my rambling and freaking out and such, I'll sum it up:
This is probably the best fanfic I have ever read. You did it.
4/12 c36 Fluff-is-awesome
I love you Neville 3
I would have liked more of Hermione/Ron's POV... I'm desperate to know just what went through their minds during the whole Harry's dead thing. Or Ginny. I want to know Ginny's immediate reaction was. Thank you for giving me Neville though :) I love him more than anyone will know 3 He is my hero I don't care what anyone else says. He is the best thing that has ever happened to me...sorry I'm rambling. This is too good for words.
I love you Neville 3
I would have liked more of Hermione/Ron's POV... I'm desperate to know just what went through their minds during the whole Harry's dead thing. Or Ginny. I want to know Ginny's immediate reaction was. Thank you for giving me Neville though :) I love him more than anyone will know 3 He is my hero I don't care what anyone else says. He is the best thing that has ever happened to me...sorry I'm rambling. This is too good for words.
4/12 c33 Fluff-is-awesome
Okay I take it back. NOW the worst is over. George... George... Omg and then the other twins too! Oh... I forgot about them and then realized that omg... Oh George!
I can't do his anymore! I am shaking uncontrollably!
I can't blame you for choosing not to write that one from George's POV...
Okay I take it back. NOW the worst is over. George... George... Omg and then the other twins too! Oh... I forgot about them and then realized that omg... Oh George!
I can't do his anymore! I am shaking uncontrollably!
I can't blame you for choosing not to write that one from George's POV...
4/12 c32 Fluff-is-awesome
Wow. That one was amazing. Perfect. Exactly exactly accurate! So far Snape's death is the most satisfying since he actually achieved what he needed to... Oi. So now I can say, the worst is over. Phew! Though Lupin and Tonks man... That was bad. That was really really bad. And nothing can compare to the nightmare-ish chapter on Fred... God, the family doesn't even know yet do they? Noooo... I can't take this anymore...
Wow. That one was amazing. Perfect. Exactly exactly accurate! So far Snape's death is the most satisfying since he actually achieved what he needed to... Oi. So now I can say, the worst is over. Phew! Though Lupin and Tonks man... That was bad. That was really really bad. And nothing can compare to the nightmare-ish chapter on Fred... God, the family doesn't even know yet do they? Noooo... I can't take this anymore...
4/12 c28 Fluff-is-awesome
Ah. Gah... :o
You did not just f*ing do that did you?
Sh*t. Sh*t! SH*T!
OH MY GOD STOP! WHY ARE YOU DOING HIS TO ME? HOLY SH*T I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!
That was incredible. I don't know where you got the nerve to write that, but George was perfectly done, and...
God Percy.
He actually said that.
How could he have said that?
Sh*t!
I was physically flinching at this story daring myself to actually read the words. How did you do that? It's like torture man. TORTURE!
Gah... :o
Ah. Gah... :o
You did not just f*ing do that did you?
Sh*t. Sh*t! SH*T!
OH MY GOD STOP! WHY ARE YOU DOING HIS TO ME? HOLY SH*T I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!
That was incredible. I don't know where you got the nerve to write that, but George was perfectly done, and...
God Percy.
He actually said that.
How could he have said that?
Sh*t!
I was physically flinching at this story daring myself to actually read the words. How did you do that? It's like torture man. TORTURE!
Gah... :o
4/12 c27 Fluff-is-awesome
WAIT! WHAT ABOUT GINNY? HOW DID SHE GET BACK TO THE CASTLE? AHHHHHHRRRRRGGGGG! TOO. . FREAKING. OUT.
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WAIT! WHAT ABOUT GINNY? HOW DID SHE GET BACK TO THE CASTLE? AHHHHHHRRRRRGGGGG! TOO. . FREAKING. OUT.
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4/8 c37 5sunneedee
I'm nearly in tears! This ending was heartbreakingly beautiful, and the story held me rapt throughout, and here I am, a through and through Drarry fan and Ginny hater! JK couldn't have done it better herself. You made me care about each and every character, more than I ever felt in canon, but at the same time it felt as if i really were reading out takes from the books. Your Ginny had none of the 2D cardboard Mary-Sue impression canon left on me, and I feel like this was what JK Rowling was thinking of when she had her off-day as she wrote Ginny's awfully underdeveloped character. Not one boring moment, and McGonagall was just perfect. You made Draco very true to canon, and its hard for me to admit that, because through reading far too much Drarry I have this idealised version of him firmly implanted in my head. You focused on characters other than Harry as far as POV goes, which sounds obvious, but JK only does it once, in Philosophers Stone, and never repeats it. You did a grand job. Harry was the one character whose emotions and POV were never shown, the exact opposite of canon, and it was beautifully done, and made me see him in a way I never e er have before. Good luck with your writing, and thank you for this work of fanfiction art.
5sunneedeeI'm nearly in tears! This ending was heartbreakingly beautiful, and the story held me rapt throughout, and here I am, a through and through Drarry fan and Ginny hater! JK couldn't have done it better herself. You made me care about each and every character, more than I ever felt in canon, but at the same time it felt as if i really were reading out takes from the books. Your Ginny had none of the 2D cardboard Mary-Sue impression canon left on me, and I feel like this was what JK Rowling was thinking of when she had her off-day as she wrote Ginny's awfully underdeveloped character. Not one boring moment, and McGonagall was just perfect. You made Draco very true to canon, and its hard for me to admit that, because through reading far too much Drarry I have this idealised version of him firmly implanted in my head. You focused on characters other than Harry as far as POV goes, which sounds obvious, but JK only does it once, in Philosophers Stone, and never repeats it. You did a grand job. Harry was the one character whose emotions and POV were never shown, the exact opposite of canon, and it was beautifully done, and made me see him in a way I never e er have before. Good luck with your writing, and thank you for this work of fanfiction art.